Excerpts and Appreciation (within 200 words)
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1. Quote poems and famous sayings; 2. Poetic language; 3. Flexible use of celebrities and life cases; 4. vigorous style; 6. Classical Chinese; 7. Philosophical statement; 8. rhetorical questions; 9. Parallelism; Metaphor; 10. Collection of idiomatic sentence patterns in topic composition.
I quote poems and famous sayings.
A. grandpa told me that grandma loved phoenix tree most before her death. Li Qingzhao's' Wutong is more raining' is a kind of worry; Li Yu's Lonely Wu Tong locks the clear autumn in the deep courtyard, which is the parting worry of "cutting away the chaos"; Zhou Bangyan's "half an acre of tung flowers, a room full of melancholy rain" is also full of melancholy. Under the buttonwood tree, I learned a lot of poems and gradually understood the poet's mood.
B. I love Lushan Waterfall, "Flying straight down to thousands of feet, it is suspected that the Milky Way has fallen for nine days"; I like "Caiyun Lake"? My mind is free and easy, and birds fly back and forth in front of my nervous eyes. "Taishan; I love the Yellow River Jiuqu, which flows into the sea and never comes back. I love the Three Gorges of the Yangtze River, and the apes on both sides of the Yangtze River can't stop crying. I love the simplicity of "the bright moon in Qin dynasty and the local customs in Han dynasty"; I like the beautiful south of the Yangtze River, where "red flowers in the sun are better than fire".
C. Language is Gong Zizhen's persistence in "falling red is not a heartless thing, but turning it into spring mud to protect flowers". Chinese is the noble spirit of Wen Tianxiang, who has never died in life since ancient times and kept his heart open and aboveboard. Chinese is Su Dongpo's detachment and vivid expression of "Who says there is no shortage of life, and the flowing water in front of the door can still go west". Chinese is the helplessness and sadness of Du Shaoling's "feeling that Chinese is an era of tears and lonely birds singing sadness".
D pursuers have different purposes. Greedy people pursue wealth; Devotees pursue "illuminating others and burning themselves"; Scumbag pursues "as long as you live better than me, I can't stand it", which can be described as "little people are often sad"; What an upright gentleman pursues is "I am lonely with my dreams, and the country of hibiscus is sunny", and the real "an upright person is upright and poised".
E. I felt the helplessness of Li Yu's ups and downs in life in the "flowing water falling out of spring"; I appreciate Su Shi's gloomy ambition in "Life is like a dream, a statue is still on the moon"; I listened to Li Qingzhao's thought about the ruin of the country and the death of the family in "I have done my best, but I can't worry about it." ...
Second, poetic language.
A. Mother turned on the dim oil lamp, and the warmth immediately filled the humble room. In the light, mother aimed at the eye of a needle again. Time and time again; Over and over again. In this way, my mother used that thin thread to string up one difficult day after another. Every needle has been carefully studied; Every line is full of affection. Looking at the mother's silver hair and the face divided into gullies by the wind and rain of the years; Tears can't help running down my young cheeks.
B. A friend visits/accidentally knocks over a cup of homesickness/a thick atmosphere overflows/emotions drift to an unrelated boat.
C wind said: forget her/I have buried my sins with dust/rain said: forget her! I have washed away my shame with tears! Only the grass won't forget/because the deep red blood has released a fragrance among the flowers.
D. Moonlight is like water, and water is like sky. Silent night, soft moonlight, I stood in front of the flowers and stared. The flowers were speechless, and I was speechless. I listen slowly, give me peace of mind, give me strength, this is love, don't say anything, don't think about anything, just like this, it's beautiful and quiet …
Third, use celebrities and life examples flexibly.
A. Fate is the sigh of the hero of the overlord of the Western Chu when he committed suicide in Wujiang River. Fate is the string of painful inquiries left by Qu Yuan on the Guluo River after being repeatedly excluded from serving the country wholeheartedly. Fate is Beethoven's tragic symphony when he was deaf in both ears. Fate is that the backbone written by Paul after his blindness is a brilliant poem.
B. backbone is the constant of Mencius' "wealth can't be lewd, power can't be bent". Character is the integrity of Li Bai's "being able to push the eyebrows and bend over to serve the dignitaries, being loyal and not suffering". The backbone is Chen Ran's awe-inspiring and meticulous "How can a human body climb out of a dog hole?" .
C.ah! It turns out that beauty is the sound of falling to the ground. It is a cicada that has lived in the dark underground for several years but can only sing in the sun; It is a little crow that comes and goes in a hurry to find food for its elderly parents; It is a wanderer who looks back at his hometown affectionately over the mountains; It is the incomparable brilliant beating before the candle goes out. ...
D. when the wind and rain are heavy, the bird will not be afraid because it has a home; No matter how deep the sea is, no matter how big the waves are, the fish will not be afraid, because it has a home; No matter how cold the weather is and how heavy the snow is, the deer will not be afraid because it has a home. No matter how slim the hope is, no matter how bumpy the future is, we will not be afraid, because we also have a home-our class group.
E. friends are like this, and the intersection is flat. But when you are depressed, she will talk to you to eliminate your depression; When you are in pain, she will really help you get rid of it; When we play together, everyone is very happy; When meeting, there will be endless topics to talk about; When I leave, what I can't give up is my deep blessing,,,,
F. In the mountains, Xu Xiake's footprints are also printed; In the stream, Li Bai's poems are also engraved; In the waterfall, there is still the sigh of Fang Xiaoru; In the smoke, there is still the sorrow of Yan Rui.
G. When I was a child, I longed to be loved by my parents, to hear my mother's kind call, and to see my father's kind smile; At school, I am eager to get the teacher's praise, to get the little red flowers issued by the teacher in the weekly class, and to see the teacher's happy smile.
Fourth, there is plenty of motivation.
A. what is chic? In the long human history of China, Gao Shi's words and deeds clearly shine with natural and unrestrained brilliance: Zhuangzi has the natural and unrestrained demeanor of "Kun Peng spreads his wings for nine Wan Li"; Qu Yuan takes "the road is long, Xiu Yuan and Xiu Yuan are Xi, and I will go up and down to seek" as chic; Zhuge Liang's "indifferent to Zhi Ming, quiet and far-reaching" is called chic; Su Dongpo sang the chic tune of "one river does not return, the waves are exhausted, and the eternal romantic figures"; Tan sitong shouted, "I laugh at the sky with a horizontal knife, and I will stay in the two Kunlun mountains."
B.what is fashion? Handsome is a struggle against suffering, sympathy for the weak and punishment for evil; Handsome is the mark in adversity and the performance after pain; Handsome is a handy calm, a quiet and wise atmosphere, and a smile that does not need to be kept secret and ignored. Natural and unrestrained is the temperament of "passing clouds, seeing each other late", and natural and unrestrained is "sad and happy", clinging to the spiritual advantage pursued by oneself; Handsome is an open-minded mind, overriding success or failure. Spartacus, who devoted himself to freedom, and Madame Curie, who smashed pots all day, generously left the hope of life to the gentlemen on the Titanic, who sang hymns and smiled at death.
E. What happened to our parents? Should we also enrich children's poor and mediocre brains when shoveling cream bread and instant noodles into their mouths? What happened to our school? Should we teach our children to understand life, think about society and explore the truth when we take them to the seaside and try our best to choose something? What happened to our media? When constantly introducing entertainment fast food such as Happy Story and Super Winner to the public, should we think about using "Long Mu Zhuanggu Granule" to serve our next generation in spirit and personality? Only in this way can our nation's tomorrow be truly natural and unrestrained.
Verb (abbreviation of verb) in classical Chinese
A. The Prime Minister gave up the dignity of his face, and in the spirit of magnanimity, generosity and tolerance, he turned the scholar into loyalty and stopped fighting. If there is no moral integrity beyond ordinary people, how can you give up like this?
B. "My flying body and mind have melted into a thousand-year-old tang style Song Yu. Look at bloom's flowers, and the clouds are rolling; Sitting quietly by the lake of Yanbo, watching the fishing boat at the junction of water and sky sing late; In the sunset, true love is endless; By the ancient road, listening to the guzheng sigh …
C. I love Chunyu, her gentleness and selflessness. The continuous drizzle "sneaked into the night with the wind, moistened things silently" and hung "Spring grass grows in a long pool, and the garden willows become songbirds". The spring rain moistened the grass, pushed away the flowers and shocked the whole earth.
D. This is the primeval forest of Fiona Fang Baili. In the air, it is green and shaded; On the ground, kudzu vines are entangled and leaves are full of feet; Underground, intertwined, roots must be networked.
VI. Philosophical statement
A. There is no perfect life in real life, just like there is no pure comedy on the stage.
B. the waves can only be spectacular if they don't avoid the impact of rocks; Life does not exclude the existence of regret, so as to be enlightened.
E. look at the guests and worship, praying for happiness in the afterlife; Bustling people are struggling for today's prosperity. However, walking too fast ignores the scenery on the roadside; Want too much but lose the most precious mood.
Seven, the use of poetry
China people are a line of egrets, heading straight for the blue sky. Chinese is a 10,000-point white sail beside a sunken ship. Language is fragrant Japanese blown by Nautilus Island with the wind, and it is a little red that turns into spring mud to protect flowers.
Eight, ask questions
A. Money is no longer the only thing in life, but the most important thing in life is to pursue spiritual perfection. Do you understand why some people will help others when there is a flood? Children in mountainous areas are out of school. Why are some people generous? Why do some people scrimp and save, and some people sharpen their perseverance in the wilderness; Can it be understood that during the economic crisis, citizens donated gold ornaments to help the emergency?
B. "I can do it. Where am I from? " Someone can't help but ask.
Hearing this, Sun Yat-sen replied on the warship of the Yangtze River: from the love for the nation, from the responsibility for the country;
Hearing this, Prometheus replied on the chain of the mountain: from the desire for light, from the desire for warmth;
Hearing this, Jung Hwan Ahn replied at the World Cup: It comes from self-confidence and expectations of others.
Nine, parallelism, metaphor
A. Facing the boundless mountains, boundless Yuan Ye, clear streams, fragrant wild flowers and shallow grass leaves, I am silent, amazed, delighted, happy and speechless.
B.i still love my third grade. Love belongs to the refreshing moment given to me by the third grade: when you think hard and finally realize it, you will taste the joy of success; When you are busy chatting with others, you will find the joy of life. You will feel relaxed and comfortable when you take a ten-minute break to glance at the business outside the window. Therefore, I say-the third grade is a colorful oil painting, a cloud full of fantasy and a time full of competition.
C. I benefited a lot from grade three. She made me understand the true meaning of cherishing time and not wasting my life. She made me understand the truth that cherishing life means working hard. Drunk, she let me suck the nectar of knowledge with passion; Suddenly enlightened, she asked me to explore the beauty of being sincere.
D. Pursuit, that is, eternal love, enchanting dreams handed down from generation to generation; It is a refreshing and unforgettable pastoral scenery; It is a lofty ideal for a person, a family, a nation and a country to struggle endlessly. Because of the pursuit, there are ancient and beautiful legends; If there is a pursuit, there will be an endless steel Great Wall built with flesh and blood; With the pursuit, there is a statue that stands between heaven and earth and never bows its head.
E. beauty is ordinary, so ordinary that you can't feel her existence; Beauty is dull, so dull that only warm memories are left; Beauty is calm, and calm can only arouse her ripples if you try your best.
F. Some people like fog, its obscurity, its obscurity; Some people love frost, its whiteness and its elegance; Some people love dew, love its crystal, love its petite and exquisite; Some people love snow, its purity, and its elegance.
G. When the storm strikes, the branches of the forest dance and the leaves surge, and thousands of trunks are thousands of swaying strings, playing a thrilling symphony; Clouds float in, and everything is submerged under the white waves, turning into a swaying underwater forest; But when the tropical rain poured down, the sun shone again, and the water droplets on hundreds of millions of leaves flashed with hundreds of millions of shining stars, dazzling people's eyes. And I only love rain. (start)
H. yes, childlike innocence is priceless. With childlike innocence, you will have naive, selfless and innocent character; With childlike innocence, you will forget the trivial troubles in life and face life happily; With childlike innocence, you will know how to face life and enjoy it.
1. Life is like a seasoning dish. Sour is melancholy, bitter is exercise, spicy is process, and sweet is success.
J. Flower-like you, flower-like me, flower-like years, flower-like world and flower-like future. Don't idle away your time, don't do nothing. Talk to yourself often, you will know yourself better, you will live more fully, and you will love this beautiful world more sincerely. (End)
K. Dear friends, don't complain that long-distance travel is not romantic. In fact, suffering is the cradle of your success. Let the wings of Changfeng take you all the way across Qian Fan, and let the call of the soul accompany you to taste the hardships of life. As long as the scenery in the heart does not wither, the leaves of life will never wither and rot. Keep a tempered heart forever, and life will always be spring. (discussion)
Driving on the winding mountain road for a long time, the audience mountain fluctuates like waves; Walking along the narrow path, listening to the stream humming like a song; Stop at the clear stone pool and watch the waterfall fall like practice; Staring at the lush ancient temple, I saw smoke curling up like silk.
The heart of meter is a tree, and the story is carried by the annual rings; Once I come back, I will meet the birds; Repeated collisions make it dense and flexible; Scenes of experience have created its broad mind.
Looking back suddenly, I spent three years in junior high school happily in the warmth of spring, the warmth of summer, the brightness of autumn and the harshness of winter. (start)
X. Collection of Idioms in Topic Composition
1, please keep it simple and make yourself more friendly to others and less indifferent and numb; Please keep a simple one, so that you can have more happiness and less mental fatigue in your life; Please keep it simple, so that you have more strength to forge ahead and less pretentious and profound insight into the world of mortals.
2. Success is the red rose in your dream, and frustration is the acupuncture around you. Happiness is the fruit of your efforts, and sadness is the seed before maturity.
The sky contains every cloud, regardless of its beauty and ugliness, so the sky is boundless. The earth embraces every inch of land, rich or poor, so it belongs to vast expanse. The ocean accepts every river, big or small, so the ocean is boundless.
4. When Jane Eyre said, "We are equal, I am not a machine without feelings", I understood my self-esteem as a woman; When petofi said, "Throw both when you have time", I understood the value of being a human being. When Mr. Lu Xun said, "If you don't break out in silence, you will perish in silence", I know that people should have the spirit of resistance. When Browning said, "Take away love and the world will become a grave", I understood the importance of giving love to others.
5. The building stands tall because it has strong pillars, and ideals and beliefs are the pillars of the building of life; Ships sail through the waves because there is a compass to point out the direction, and ideals and beliefs are the compass of life ships; The train goes to Wan Li Road because there are rails to guide it, and ideals and beliefs are the rails on the train of life.
6. What is happiness? Happiness is the face of fruit farmers looking at the fruit covered with branches in the orchard, the touching smiling face of students looking forward to the future in the classroom, the new eyebrows of scientists in the laboratory, and the tears of athletes looking up at the national flag Ran Ran on the podium. Happiness is the crystallization of struggle and a monument to hard work.
7. How can we know the value of sunshine avenue without going through rough and muddy difficulties? How can you appreciate the loveliness of sunny days without experiencing snowy nights? How can we feel the joy of victory and success without experiencing the test of setbacks and hardships? Frustration, it is not easy to hate you. ...
8. Happiness is always around you. If you take over the work from your mother and feel warm, that is happiness; If you read a friend's letter under the lamp and taste friendship, it is happiness; If you sit alone in the corner, quietly listening to music and meditating, that is happiness.
9. Some people say that happiness is the interweaving of delicacies in star-rated hotels. Some people say that happiness is dancing in the high-end stage hall and moving melody; Some people say that happiness is riding an Audi and a BMW in a crowded street; It is also said that happiness is to stay in the secret room and count stacks of hundred-dollar bills; However, I want to say: having these doesn't necessarily mean really having happiness!
10, the bird in the distance, the eternal concern is Lao Lin; Wandering boat, always thinking about the harbor; Travelers, whether they come back in a hurry at night or run away from home, are inextricably linked in their hearts and always miss that place or home.
1 1. What is happiness? Is it successful and respected? Is it quiet, carefree and carefree? It's a wedding, with children and grandchildren around their knees? I said: happiness is ...
12, life is like a mountain, what matters is not its height, but its beauty; Life is like a rain, what matters is not its size, but its timeliness.
13, to put a new spring, you must pour out the existing old water; To get a rose, you must give up the rose you have; If you want to have a unique experience, you must have mental trauma.
14, "pointing out the mountains and inspiring people" is heroic and chic. "Since God has given talents, let them find jobs!" It is a confident chic, "an old man fishing in the cold Jiang Xue" is a noble chic, and "not breaking Loulan and not returning it" is a tragic chic.
15, the wind walks over the water, leaving ripples; Sunlight passes through the clouds, leaving a trace of warmth; Years pass through the Woods, leaving rings, my friend, what do we leave behind when we walk on the stage of the times?
16, I hope the sea is calm, but there are often strong winds and waves. I wish the rivers would flow for thousands of miles, but there are always eddies and rapids. I hope life is happy, but there are often sadness and sorrow.
17. The river dries up in winter, and I believe that spring water will come again. At that time, Bai Fan was my idol. The leaves in the wind have withered, and I believe that dreams in the soil will blossom and bear fruit on the branches.
18, the angel's wings were broken and fell to the world, which became our sorrow; Honesty is thrown away and scattered into the world, becoming Satan's wand.
19, no rouge can smear time, no clothes can hide the soul, and no set of ancient books can decorate emptiness.
20. It may be a mountain, which makes you feel majestic. It may be a sea, which makes you feel magnificent. It may be a symphony, which makes you feel restless. It may be a stone carving, which makes you understand the grandeur.
2 1, experienced failures and setbacks, and learned to be tough; When I was misunderstood and wronged, I learned to be tolerant; After losing and parting, I learned to cherish.
22, not too much distress, but we don't understand life; It's not that happiness is too little, but that we don't know how to grasp it.
23. The sense of responsibility is a model written by Zhu Gekongming, "Do your best until you die". The sense of responsibility is a public servant monument erected by Kong Fansen when he ran away from home and spilled his mother's blood on the plateau. The sense of responsibility is Beethoven's symphony of destiny, challenging life and surpassing oneself.
24. Money can buy expensive watches, but it can't buy precious time; Money can buy delicious food, but not a good appetite.
25, it is a clump of autumn chrysanthemums, and it must also emit fragrance; Is an autumn leaf, but also to decorate the earth; It is cypress, which also supports the blue sky; The ancient well will also flow out of the clear spring.
26. Respecting others is a virtue, and being respected is a kind of happiness.
27. Books are good medicine. Liu Xiang said: "books are still medicine, and good reading can cure fools"; Books are good friends. Cang Kejia said, "Reading a book is like making a good friend"; Books are windows. Gorky said: "Every book opens a window in front of me."
28. Maturity is a quality, a quality that comes from the mind and is manifested in action; Maturity is a kind of ability, a kind of self-discipline and self-management ability; Maturity is an attitude, a calm attitude towards everything; Maturity is a state of mind, a state of mind that can look down on everything and everything is as light as water.
29. Faith is to people what wings are to birds, and faith is the wing of flying.
30. Love is the sunshine that shines in winter, which makes people who are poor and sick feel the warmth of the world. Love is the spring in the desert, which makes people on the verge of despair see the hope of life again.
3 1, the packaging is the gorgeous shell of the house, the packaging is the gorgeous sun umbrella on the ugly woman's hand, and the packaging is the catwalk of the model on the stage.
32. "The thread in the hand of a kind-hearted mother makes clothes for her wayward son's body" is about family relations; "Life is full of friends, and the world should treat it with the same feelings" is about friendship. "Once the sea is difficult for water, amber forever" is about love; "If you are selfish, your country will live or die. Why should every cloud has a silver lining avoid it? " What you said is that you love the national conditions.
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I seem to have grown a lot.
Walking with my father is always fun. He will talk about his school days, his students and all kinds of strange things. Whenever I am ecstatic, he will suddenly and seriously point to a plant on the roadside and tell me what flower or tree it is. Walking with my father always has a lot of feelings. Walking with him, let me gradually move from childish to mature. It's good to walk with dad!
30. My father is a thick book. I admired my father when I was a child, but I didn't understand the meaning. As time went on and some things happened, I gradually got to know my father. Like water, he is more imposing when encountering obstacles, and he is a stronger person when encountering setbacks.
3 1 When I was a child, because my family only depended on agriculture for a living, except my father who could make furniture, everyone else depended on agriculture, and my younger brother and sister went to school, so my family was very embarrassed. Every time I go to school to pay tuition, my parents frown, but they don't stop our studies because they are poor. This may be "no matter how bitter you are, you can't be poor." \"
32, smile, can resolve the contradictions between people, can stimulate the spark of progress, can embrace tomorrow's sun, smile to face life, can overcome all things that are unfavorable to you. Smiling people are so cute, so kind, so interesting and so strong. They convey people's feelings, because smiling is the most beautiful symbol in the world!
33. Spring is the smiling face of flowers, with faint new green willow branches stretching their bones and muscles, and the grass opens its sleepy eyes and looks at the world; Spring is all kinds of kites swaying in the sky, and it is the child who runs all over the mountains with kite strings;
Spring-the goddess of nature, washes in front of the dresser as soon as she wakes up, and she "combs" the frozen running water; Spread colorful flowers on the earth; Wash away the sky blue in the Ming Che; Open the dark clouds and let the colorful sunshine shine on everything again.
34. Green among bamboo leaves is life; The black on the distant mountain is also life. Listen, the cry of young birds in the forest indicates the arrival of life; The buzz of insects among flowers tells the power of life;
35. I am a self-respecting person. Self-esteem because of self-improvement. I know dignity and honor and disgrace, so I want to strive for the top, and strive for the first place. But at the same time, I am timid and hesitant, so I always stick to the rules and lack innovation, a passion and an innovation.
36. In the world, only the spirit is immortal. It's like: towering mountains, surging sea, burning sunshine, bright moon and invisible spring breeze.
37. Learning to appreciate others means respecting yourself; Learning to care about others means loving yourself.
Appreciating nature means appreciating our life; Cherishing nature means cherishing our lives.
38. Suffering is a stepping stone for the enterprising, the wealth of the capable and the abyss of the weak. Success is a milestone (summary) for those who never slack off, a heavy burden for those who are complacent, and a scourge for those who don't make progress.
39, a song of youth, she touched our young heartstrings; Youth is a fire that ignites our boiling blood; Youth is a banner, calling us to move forward bravely; Youth is a textbook, which enlightens our wisdom and mind.
40. chic is a beautiful scenery that persists in everyone's heart, and its connotation is all-encompassing. "Picking chrysanthemums under the east fence" is a kind of quiet chic, "better than walking around" is a kind of joyful chic, "other mountains are dwarfed under the sky." Is the natural and unrestrained success.
4 1, what is love? Love is wind, love is rain, because of love, we are willing to be indifferent to quiet days; Because of our love, we dare to go to the Golden Pavilion. They died in boots.
42. What are your interests? Interest is thunder, interest is electricity, because of interest, we are willing to sacrifice the time of watching TV and playing poker; Also because of our interest, we dare to fight against rapids and climb dangerous peaks.
43. If you are a big tree, sprinkle a shade; If you are a grass, add a piece of spring; If you are a bee, brew a sweet; If you are an eagle, fight the Wan Li sky; Let's create brilliance together.
44. The clear streams become dirty and the green hills become mottled. I can't bear to see a blank sheet of paper covered with stains.
45, without self-knowledge, its harm is endless; On the other hand, it can lead to success. Jiang Gan is clever, and Liu Chan laughs at himself. Don't they all harm themselves and the country? Zhuge Liang knows himself and himself, and Zhou Yu is full of confidence. Isn't it beneficial to the country and the people?
46. We must not be complacent as soon as we see our achievements. We should restrain our complacency and criticize our shortcomings from time to time, as if we had to wash our faces and sweep the floor every day to clean up and dust off.
47. Lei Feng has only lived in this world for 20 years, but in this short time, he has lived a full, noble and glorious life! In contrast to Lei Feng's thoughts, some people who only live for themselves are so pitiful, so insignificant and so meaningless.
48. If life is a beautiful music, then pain is an indispensable note.
If life is an endless sea, then frustration is one of the waves that suddenly turn up.
If life is a blue sky, then setbacks are white clouds floating in the sky.
49. Only the surging sea can make the beach smooth and soft; A calm lake must be surrounded by silt.
Only towering mountains can create lush forests; The low hills must be overgrown with weeds.
Excerpts from good sentences and paragraphs in Lu Xun's works
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