Write a composition and then you can't overcome it.
I am a naughty student, but I study well. I just don't know when I got into a bad habit. How can I put it? Even when writing, either the body is crooked or the notebook is crooked. Words, naturally not good-looking. You know, a person's good habits will be used for life; If you have bad habits, you should try to correct them. Of course, it's hard to change. When I do my homework at home, I always think: sit up straight; I want to write my words well, but I don't know when I leaned over again. Mom and dad always pat me and say, sit up straight, or what to do in the future. However, after a while, I began to write crooked again. I also want to get rid of this bad habit, but I can't. It was not until one day I went to my grandmother's house that I really made up my mind to get rid of this bad habit. That was when I was on vacation. One day, I went to grandma's house to do my homework. Grandma saw my poor handwriting and said, I don't want to grow crops. If the crops planted are the same as your handwriting. That's not a wasteland. I'll take you to the field tomorrow. I didn't care at the time. Writing and continuous cropping are two different things, how can they be compared? Grandma really took me to the fields tomorrow. When I got to the field, I couldn't help being surprised. The crops are in the right size piece by piece. A line is a line. They are all neat. How can such a large land be managed so well? I can't help asking myself. I can't help blushing at the thought of this. Look, is my handwriting much better now than before? This is the story of my overcoming bad habits.
Thank you, Xiao Liu!
2. The composition "One thing I experienced and overcame" Here are a few articles, you can choose the one that suits you, thank you for your adoption! 1. Every time I see pots of beautiful flowers on the balcony, I think about how I started to raise flowers in my family.
It happened last spring. One day when I came home from school, I came to the balcony and suddenly found that some pots of flowers on the balcony had withered.
The leaves of one pot of flowers are all rolled up, the tip of the other pot of flowers is a little yellow, and there are still many bugs crawling in the pot. Although the pot of Chinese rose by the door has only been in bloom for a short time, its petals are almost gone.
All the flowers are like sallow and emaciated patients, crying in pain: "Little master, help us!" " No one has taken good care of us since we came to your home. We have all become patients! "I looked at their gaunt faces and said to them lovingly," I will take good care of you! ""In the evening, my family held an emergency meeting to discuss how to take good care of flowers. We thought many ideas, but none of them worked.
Suddenly, my heart lit up and I thought of a good idea. I said to you, "Now the rural areas are engaged in the contract responsibility system, and we-"I coughed deliberately and said slowly, "Let's also engage in contracting."
Mom and Dad said happily, "Great!" So the idea was decided. Then, we began to divide the work.
My sister caught a cactus first. I picked a pot of jasmine and my mother picked a pot of pomegranate flowers.
Because dad can grow flowers, we gave him a pot of chlorophytum and a pot of roses with petals off. The next morning, I got up, and my sister sat up with a carp.
We quickly got dressed and went to the balcony to water the flowers. Pots of flowers are greedily sucked, just like a thirsty person meets a sweet spring.
In the evening, my mother came home very late, but she was busy watering the flowers first. In a few days, it is time to fertilize the flowers.
But my sister, mother and I are all amateurs. So, I asked my father to help me fertilize.
Besides watering and fertilizing, we often loosen the soil for flowers and catch insects. Time flies, and it's summer before you know it.
After our careful care, all the flowers stand upright, the branches and leaves are denser and the flowers are more delicate than before. One morning in midsummer, my grandparents came to my house to enjoy flowers, and they came to the balcony to have a look, which was a big surprise.
Grandpa said, "I can't believe that your flowers have changed in just a few months!" " "Grandparents bent down to appreciate carefully. I saw my sister's cactus balls covered with green thorns, and several new cactus balls grew beside them.
The pot of jasmine I contracted is full of white flowers and still exudes a faint fragrance. The pomegranate flowers contracted by my mother are flourishing, and a dead leaf will never be seen again.
The pot of chlorophytum hung by my father on the window frame hangs low and is green and charming. Look, the most gorgeous is that pot of Chinese rose.
It has grown crimson buds, and there are several flowers in bud. Go to the front and you will smell a strong fragrance, which will make you ecstatic.
This rose basin is like a graceful girl standing shyly in the basin. Grandparents looked up after enjoying it for a long time and said to us happily, "The contracting method you used is good. We will send you a few more pots of flowers and come back next year! " My sister and I said happily, "Great, we must raise it better than now!" " "Up to now, as soon as I see the graceful flowers on the balcony, I think of what I have experienced. 2. I have experienced many things, many of which are happy, moving and sad ... Among them, there is one thing that I will never forget.
It happened a few days ago with some friends. That day, a dry mother woke me up from bed. As soon as I turned over and looked at the clock, I couldn't help crying. "Oh, no, it's nine o'clock. I have an appointment with my classmates to meet in the store at 9: 30. "
After that, I jumped out of bed, finished washing, grabbed a few mouthfuls of breakfast and ran out of the door. The weather is particularly good this day. The warm sunshine spilled down and made my body warm.
But I didn't care about the beautiful scenery along the way. I just run with my head down. I suddenly turned around and saw a stranger walking slowly behind me. I thought to myself: fortunately, it is broad daylight. I don't know what to do if it is at night.
I held my head high and drove on. Unconsciously, I came to a crossroads of traffic lights.
It was just a red light. I was just waiting outside the zebra crossing. While waiting, I was very anxious. At this time, the stranger came to the traffic lights. I looked at him carefully. He wears casual clothes and has a big face. His eyes are like black gems ... he doesn't seem to be a bad person, but just a passerby.
The red light started flashing, and then a child ran off the road. At this time, a big truck came running, and I thought to myself: If the truck hits the child, the child will die of heart disease. At this critical moment, passers-by rushed out and pushed the child away. The child saved the day, but passers-by were hit by a big truck and flew out.
At this time, the car stopped, and many people got together and surrounded it. Soon the traffic police uncle came and the ambulance came ... 3. I have experienced countless things like the stars in the sky. However, what I remember most is the gobang game between my father and me. My father and I are playing gobang. My father said to me first, "Wang Yi, I really want to play this game." I thought, what is my father going to use? "When I was thinking seriously, my father said to me," It's your school year exam in a few days. That day was like playing chess. It's sad that you made one mistake and lost everything. But that day is not as good as playing chess. No more chess, no more regrets. You should pay attention to the next step. "I suddenly found that my father used the tactic of' attracting tigers out of the mountain'. I defeated my father. This incident taught me that I should see the complete chess game every step I take, I should also learn, and I should do every step in a down-to-earth manner. This is the most meaningful thing I have experienced this school year. I not only learned knowledge, but also felt my father's love for me. What I experienced is like the stars in the sky, some moved me, some made me ashamed, and some made me angry.
How did you overcome the difficulty of writing a composition and write about what you experienced in grade three?
In everyone's life, the road cannot always be smooth sailing, and everyone will inevitably encounter difficulties and setbacks. When you face difficulties and setbacks, don't be timid and don't back down. You must face them bravely, find a way to beat them, beat them, and you will beat yourself.
I had an experience like this once.
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One day, our teacher asked us to make a test paper made by the teacher himself. I finished the first few questions easily, but only the last one stumped me. I thought about it and asked me to call back. I was right.
On second thought, I called the method back. I've tried everything, racked my brains and thought for a long time, but I haven't come up with a solution to this problem. Ten minutes passed, twenty minutes passed, thirty minutes passed, thirty-five.
Minutes have passed. ...
Seeing that there are still five minutes to collect the papers, what should I do? Just when I was about to give up, I remembered what my mother said to me: "Don't give up easily, just stick to it until the end, you are."
The best. "So I started a mental war again. Finally, in the last few minutes, I suddenly saw the solution to this problem. At that time, I thought,' Isn't this method right in front of me? Why didn't I read it?
Goodbye? Coincidentally, as soon as I finished the problem, the teacher asked us to hand in our papers. Then I understood that "everything in the world is afraid of being serious".
In this exercise, I learned a truth. No matter what you do, as long as you are serious, you will definitely overcome the immediate difficulties and not let him make way for a more difficult road.
Students, please believe that although the road ahead is more difficult and bumpy, as long as you take everything seriously, do it seriously, start with your heart and end with your heart, there will be nothing wrong. As long as you have the word "serious", then you can overcome all difficulties and obstacles in your life and make your life more meaningful.
Remember one thing I overcame. There are many difficult things to overcome in life, such as the time when I just learned to skate.
When I was in the fifth grade, I saw others riding scooters everywhere, especially jealous, so I clamored for my mother to buy one for me, too. My mother couldn't stand my seven-inch tongue and agreed. Soon after, my mother bought a beautiful scooter, and I practiced vigorously with my hands on the wall. I didn't practice for a few times, but I thought I was doing well, so I let go and ran to the side of the road. Three seconds later, I fell to the ground with a bang. "Ah, my beloved ass!" After a scream, I started practicing again and everything paid off. Between countless falls and numerous exercises, I finally made a lot of progress. In the following days, I kept practicing every day to win. I finally learned to skate that day. Now I can skate skillfully, make a 360-degree turn, suddenly turn around and let my younger brother and sister stand on the scooter to play together. Now I am also the envy of others.
Failure is the mother of success. Only after the storm will there be a beautiful rainbow. If fate gives you failure, then it will definitely give you success. People can't be knocked down by their own fears. As a famous saying goes, "the fear of danger is ten thousand times more terrible than the danger itself." Isn't it?
5. It is an essential survival ability for everyone to encounter many setbacks in doing one thing, then try to overcome them, and then successfully write a composition to overcome them.
You must have encountered many difficulties when growing up! Life is so hard, and I am no exception. There are also many distressing difficulties. Ok, let me talk about the biggest difficulty I have ever experienced! I was young that year. Because of my curiosity and exploration, some incredible things always happened, such as climbing trees to catch birds. I rolled down the hill for fun ... but this kind of thing is not the biggest difficulty for me. At that time, I had a quarrel with my sister at home, turned over and ran out of the house pretending to be angry.
When I am angry, I usually go to a quiet place to calm down, but when I see the mountain in front of me, my curiosity and adventurous spirit "attack" at the same time. At this time, I don't care if I care about it. Let's go up the mountain first.
There are many scenic spots on this mountain. The most eye-catching thing is the small lake in the center, the clear lake, the cheerful little fish, and the embellishment of the surrounding green trees and red flowers, which makes the tourists who are watching this beautiful scenery on the boat amazed, because that feeling will remind you of the sentence "People are traveling in the picture world on the blue waves." I am really lucky to see such beautiful scenery today.
But the weather is unpredictable, who would have thought that unfortunate things would happen ... After I enjoyed it, I went to a higher place. As I walked along the road, I said to myself, "Anyway, I must climb higher today, or I will be sorry for my little explorer." I walked into a deserted place unconsciously. I reached a very high mountain. Walking, there is no road ahead, thinking: Do you want to go down? But it's hard to get up, so let's go without enjoying it. So, I wandered around with the roots.
Suddenly, a clear river appeared before my eyes. At this time, I wanted to touch the river from my heart and went over. When I got there, I was about to go down the river. I don't know where I got some moss. Suddenly there is no time to close your feet. Suddenly I flew into the air. It is not that I don't know how to fly or drive. People are spinning in the air, and I just died in the river like an elephant. At that time, my mind was completely empty, and I felt that death was coming, but I had the courage to fight again. I'm about to fall into the water, but fortunately there is a vine by the river.
I immediately grabbed the vine and pulled it up with all my strength. Finally, I succeeded. I was born useful, but I didn't expect Shuteng to save my life today.
6. Composition about "I can do it". (Write about things, write about the difficulties I overcome) "Ouch! It's killing me! " I quickly surfaced and spat a few mouthfuls ... You must feel strange to see this. What am I doing? Don't worry, let me tell you something. ...
One day last summer vacation, the sun was burning on the earth, and cicadas in the tree sang from time to time: "It's so hot! I really want to drink water! " After lunch, my father said to me, "Yi Ni, let's go swimming together later!" " ""swimming? I won't. " "Afraid of what? No, I can teach you. Besides, you can breathe in the water. " I thought for a moment, and then faltered, "OK ... OK. "
At about two o'clock, we set out for a swim. When I came to the swimming pool, I couldn't wait to put on my swimsuit, put on my life buoy and jump into the swimming pool. Wow! How cold this water is! "Yi Ni, come and learn to swim! Throw the lifebuoy ashore quickly! " Just when I was intoxicated and immersed in the water, my father took off my lifebuoy, dragged me to the deep water area, and explained some essentials of swimming to me: "First, keep your hands straight, put your fingers together, and draw a semicircle with your hands outward ..." Before my father finished, I pushed my father away impatiently and thought proudly: The water here is so shallow, I will definitely learn to swim! It's so easy, watch me! I held out my hand as my father said, put my fingers together, drew a few semicircles with my palm outward, and kicked my feet at random. As a result, I just floated up and sank like a heavy stone. After drinking a few mouthfuls of "natural mineral water", the opening scene appeared. I stood up unconvinced and tried several times, but the results were the same and I failed.
I was discouraged and sat by the pool like a deflated ball, watching men, women and children swim freely. My heart is sour: hey! Even children younger than me can swim, but I ... alas! Forget it, give it up! But ... no! Never give up! Believe in yourself, I can do it!
Thinking of this, I jumped into the water again and carefully observed an elder sister's swimming. After observing for a long time, I began to practice.
Thinking of this, I jumped into the water again and carefully observed an elder sister's swimming. After observing for a long time, I began to practice. I took a deep breath, stepped back a few steps, kicked my legs hard, straightened my hands, put my fingers together, waved my palms slightly outward, drew a semicircle hard, closed it on my chest, and straightened it again; At the same time, push your legs to both sides, immediately close together, bend, and push your legs outward. In this way, I practiced again and again and failed again, but I didn't give up. "Hard work pays off." Finally, after nearly dozens of exercises, I can finally swim a distance. My heart is sweeter than honey.
Through learning to swim this time, I understand a truth: the difficulty is not terrible, what is terrible is that I don't have the courage and confidence to overcome it. Believe in your ability and always say to yourself, "I can do it!" " "
7. How to overcome the running account of the composition The running account of the composition is because there is insufficient preparation for what you want to write before writing, or there is no central idea you want to express. Others list things at once because they want to write too much, which makes the articles messy.
To overcome this shortcoming, before you start writing, you must think about what you want to write, what examples you want to give, and what ideas the article wants to express. Arrange the materials in order.
For example, it is easy to write travel notes and a running account. Let me give you an example, visiting a park.
Content: Landscape flowers in the park.
For example, if you have been to many places, write something representative. Write a beautiful place first, and then talk about the flower show. Pay attention when describing, and say less irrelevant words. Some good sentences, if not related to them, will be very cumbersome.
Express your thoughts: praise the scenery.
Writing in chronological order or spatial order
Or there is another trick, write a composition with a subtitle, let the title explain everything and string it into an article, so that even if there is a little running account, it doesn't matter.
Of course, you should read more books instead of online novels!
8. How to solve the problem of not being able to write a composition is an important factor that causes students to be afraid of writing. When it comes to writing, some students have a headache, just like the spell on the Monkey King's head, which makes them feel depressed. How to "untie" students' writing, so that students are no longer afraid of writing and really regard writing as a tool for written communication. I think composition teaching should pay attention to the following points:
First, the guidance before writing is unconstrained.
There is a key link in composition teaching, that is, guidance before writing, which can arouse students' enthusiasm and interest in writing. However, in the composition guidance class, the following methods are not advisable: First, read the model essays before writing, and many teachers are willing to find some model essays to read to students before writing. I think it is easy to bind students' thinking, and many students may imitate the model essay to write, so it is easy to give students a constraint, whether from the selection of materials or from the layout of an article. Second, the teacher has detailed instructions on writing, telling students how to write at the beginning and how to write at the end, so the structure of the article written must be the same and there is no new idea. I have read such a cartoon: a poor lamb is tied to a stake, and the lamb eats all the grass that can be eaten, forming a circle without grass. The lamb can only look at the tender grass outside the circle but can't eat it. I feel that we have given students too much bondage, which is like a tied lamb. Students have no vitality and personality, so they can only wander in the circle designed by teachers. Give students broad space, let them write what they want to write and say what they want to say, and don't trap students with boxes.
Second, when writing, the requirements are not high.
There is such a drawback in composition teaching: some teachers set the number of words in each composition for students in order to make them write "seriously" and ask them to write hundreds of words. I think it's like a soldier who went to the battlefield and was frightened by the other troops before the war. When students hear the number of words given by the teacher, they will first have a sense of fear. My mind is always thinking: what if I can't meet the teacher's requirements? At this time, the students' energy is not thinking about this article, but trying to gather words. Some students stop to count how many words are missing when writing, and some students simply repeat this paragraph because they have nothing to write, which makes the original complete article disorganized and affects the normal play of students' writing level. Students' oral expression ability is different, so students should be allowed to have different writing skills instead of "one size fits all", which will certainly enhance students' fear and distort the original intention of "writing".
Third, comment more and appreciate more after writing.
Composition is the most complicated and tedious of all learning contents. It takes more energy and time for students to write an article than to do a math problem and compose words and sentences. If a student's hard-working article is said to be useless by the teacher, it can be imagined that it is a kind of harm. When evaluating students' compositions, we should use a magnifying glass to find the bright spots in students' compositions, even if it is a word or a sentence, we should encourage students. Every time I write a composition, I will choose some students' compositions to read aloud in class. Besides excellent articles, I pay more attention to those students who have difficulties in writing. Even if he writes a good paragraph and a vivid sentence, I will seize this opportunity to read it to them in class and give them praise. This kind of pride will encourage students to gradually have confidence in their composition and gradually improve their writing level. I always affirm the advantages of students' composition evaluation first, use the topic to stimulate their interest, and then point out the shortcomings tactfully. Teachers must be merciful when judging students' compositions. If students really have no interest and confidence in composition, then composition teaching is really sad!
It is our unshirkable responsibility to untie students' compositions, let them come from life and move towards life, give children a free blue sky, and let their hearts be liberated and their personalities be stretched!