Why did the geomantic ghost master fail?

This geomantic Daoism itself has something to do with the ancient tomb, but I don't think the author has much to do with it, so I won't write much. Besides, two-thirds of the audio books I listen to can't go on. The theme is actually quite good, but the author sets the protagonist's position too low. Wu Xie in "Notes on Three Grave Robbers" is still very powerful, but Xiaotian in "Ghost Master of Feng Shui" is still useless. I haven't seen any large array, and this treatment is the last time. Besides, have you found that the author always writes in a state of shock, numbness and stupidity, and always reads like a rookie? Maybe you can't hear it, you will find that this work is really a third-rate work ... In addition, I am talking about those who set love and its low-level conflicts. Whatever it is, it is not appropriate to write fairy tales. Actually, this work can be created. Come up with a new way of writing. The arrangement is actually very novel. Even if the protagonist can't arrange music, he can write well. Maybe the protagonist dominates the ghost. The author wants to write the protagonist more like a person, but it is just the opposite. I saw the information. They all belittle the author. In short, a good theme is not written well. ....