Writing illustrations
Example:
Better than relatives.
In a Korean village, there lived an old woman and a little girl. When the little girl was six years old, her parents died one after another because of fatigue and illness, making her an orphan. An old woman had no children, but one night she heard a girl crying, so she put on her clothes and went outside to look for her children. Whose child is crying?
She followed the cry all the way to find her-the unfortunate little girl, and her heart rose with the joy of being a mother. After taking the little girl home, she thought, Whose child is this? Why do you cry so much when your clothes are so dirty? Then he asked the little girl, "Whose child are you?" ? The little girl cried and said, "My parents are dead, and I have no relatives." . Grandma dressed the little girl in clean and beautiful clothes and washed her body. Standing in front of her is no longer the dirty little girl, but a beautiful angel! Now the little girl is ruddy and slim, even the lotus will think that she is not beautiful at all!
Since the little girl came to grandma's house, a small hut suddenly became full of vitality, not as lifeless as before. Grandma paid for her school, and the little girl not only finished her homework carefully at school, but also washed, cooked and cleaned the house for her. In winter, warm the quilt for grandma; In summer, slap your grandmother! Grandma is sick, give her medicine and tell her jokes to make her happy every day! The little girl got 100 in all subjects. She was admitted to a key junior high school. Grandma was very happy when the news came, but she was worried about the little girl's tuition. However, she borrowed money everywhere and finally sent her to junior high school. She was very sad at the thought of leaving her grandmother. She hugged her tightly and promised to study hard in the future to change her life. Ten years later, she did it.
Yes, there are many such people in life, but now people are fascinated by money, but their feelings are numb How I wish people would stop being fascinated by money and let their feelings regain consciousness!
2. How to write a composition describing illustrations in the sixth grade? Look at the picture carefully, and then write a composition according to the content or meaning of the picture.
The significance of picture composition
Students are familiar with reading and speaking by looking at pictures from an early age. Picture writing is an extension of this form, that is, writing according to the given picture connotation and proposition requirements. A picture can be a single picture or multiple pictures, which are generally simple and lively cartoons. Some have problems, and some need to write their own questions; Some do one topic, and some do two topics; Genres are narrative, expository, argumentative and practical, with flexible forms.
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Looking at pictures is also a kind of writing for materials, but the materials given are not words, but pictures. To complete this kind of composition, we must first understand the pictures and the requirements of the topic. To analyze what is the main body of the picture and what is the background; Is it one thing or two or more things? What is the relationship between them? Are there any details that seem dull, but are related to the meaning of the problem? What is the surface meaning of the graph? Is there anything deep that needs to be excavated to make the finishing touch?
In a word, it is the key to success to analyze and understand the picture from many aspects and try to find out the meaning of the problem. The specific way to write it is to pay attention to the map, otherwise it will go further and further. ?
Look at the caption in the picture composition?
Mainly introduces the picture content. For example, 1987 composition topic for senior high school entrance examination in Hubei province:?
Topic: Observe the picture carefully and understand the meaning of painting. First, write a text introduction picture of about 100 words (no need to write a title). Then according to the meaning of this painting, write a small comment of not less than 300 words on your own topic. ?
Writing this kind of composition should follow the general writing method of explanatory text, highlight the main content of the picture, and proceed in a certain order.
Look at the picture and write a small comment?
Is to comment on the content of the picture. The writing of this kind of composition requires close attention to the content of the picture, concentrated and profound comments, and should not be generalized.
1. Title: Write an argumentative essay of less than 240 words according to the picture below. (Fuzhou)
2. Title: Look at the picture composition. What do you think the picture reflects? Tell me your opinion. No more than 200 words. (Guangdong)
Look at the picture and write a story
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It is to use imagination to complete a complete story with words according to the content provided by pictures. ?
1. Title: Observe the pictures carefully, string them into a story, draw up a topic and write a narrative. (Kunming)
Requirements:
(1) is written as a poem, and no extra points are given for expository or argumentative writing. ?
2 self-made topics. ?
③ Rich associations and novel ideas. ?
(4) String four pictures into a story, write a narrative of about 700 words, and adopt the method of narrative discussion. You'd better insert something lyrical.
⑤ Clear strokes, standard fonts, beautiful fonts and neat volumes. ?
2. Title: Look at these three?
According to the picture below, use your imagination and write a narrative on the topic "Look at these three families". There should be a proper discussion, and the number of words should be between 600 and 700. (Zhejiang)
3. Topic: Read the following materials and then write a narrative as required. (Jinzhou, Liaoning)?
In the evening, after a severe cough stopped, Uncle Zhang finally decided to give up smoking. ?
Remembering his jokes about smoking several times, he resolutely threw his pipe downstairs. ?
As soon as he made a move, he regretted it and rushed downstairs. ?
He thought, how nice it would be to catch the pipe before it landed! (adapted from Mr. Hua's cartoon)?
Requirements:
① Use materials (pictures and explanatory texts) and expand reasonable imagination according to your usual observation and accumulation, and add some details.
(2) No less than 600 words (writing is not limited), and the topic is self-drawn. ?
(3) Writing standard (including punctuation), neat.
This is a short article about reading pictures and writing narratives. To write this composition well, we should pay attention to the following points:
① Make full use of the four pictures and short words given, carefully ponder and correctly understand their connotations. ?
(2) You can't write the commentary of four paintings, but you should turn the whole painting into one and run through it. ?
(3) We should closely focus on the text content of a given picture, and expand reasonable imagination on this basis, especially do more articles about the cause, process and result of the event.
(3) Especially the words "he will regret it" in the picture, although there are different understandings, we should be careful not to take it as a warning. ?
(4) Because it is a narrative, the way of expression should naturally be based on narrative, and there can be appropriate comments and lyricism, but it must not usurp the host's role.
Look at the letters in the picture or other practical articles?
This kind of topic is to write a letter or a report to the relevant parties according to the contents of the screen prompts.
For example, a city 1987 exam questions:?
Read the cartoon "Old Emperor's Dad, Fly into the Home of Ordinary People", and write a letter to China TV News to reflect your opinions and demands.
To write this kind of composition, we should understand the original picture, determine the problems to be reflected, and then complete it according to the general application style.
I am not the weakest in the illustration writing of the seventh lesson of Chinese in the second grade of primary school.
One summer weekend, five-year-old Sasha and his brother Togna went to the forest to play with their parents.
There was a cluster of wild roses, surrounded by lilies of the valley, and the first pink flower came out. Flowers with dewdrops dance with the wind and smell fragrant. The family sat beside the wild rose and chatted. Suddenly, there was a loud noise and a few drops of rain floated in the sky. Then it rained cats and dogs. Mom quickly took out her raincoat from her backpack and handed it to tonia around her. Tonya gave it to Sasha. Sasha asked inexplicably, "Mom, you and Tolia both need raincoats. Why did you give them to me? " Mother said, "We should protect people who are weaker than ourselves." "If you can't protect anyone, then you are the weakest." Mom touched Sasha's head. Sasha walked to the rose bushes. The heavy rain has knocked off two rose petals, and the flowers hang their heads feebly, making them more delicate. Sasha lifted her raincoat, gently covered it on Bai Yutang and asked, "Mom, am I still the weakest?"
Mom smiled and said, "no, no, you can protect the weak." You are a brave child! " "
4. The illustration of the giant's garden should be the same as the illustration, and it should be 600 words immediately. Oh, long ago, there was a beautiful garden. The giant in the garden had a fight with the children in the village. Later, the giant made up with the children and stopped losing his temper with them. They play happily together.
But one day, the giant and the children were playing. Suddenly, dark clouds were gathering, thunder and lightning flashed, the sky made a loud noise, and the earth was dark. The children were terrified out of their wits and quickly hid in the giant's arms. A terrible figure flew from the sky to the giant. He is the king of darkness. The giant asked, "What are you doing?" The king of darkness said, "Give me those children! Otherwise, I will be rude to you! " The giant said to the king of darkness, "you can't take my child!" " "The king of darkness took out a pack of ecstasy powder and threw it down. There was a loud noise and the giant fainted. The dark Lord took the children.
When the giant woke up, he saw that the children were gone. He looked around. After searching for a long time, he suddenly saw a dazzling light. Oh! It turned out to be the god of light! The giant explained his difficulties to the god of light. God of light immediately took out a sword from his arms, pointed at it and said, "This is the sword of light, which can knock down the darkness and save the children."
The giant carried this sword on his back and set out for the city of darkness. He had just arrived at the city gate, only to see the king of darkness coming out of it. There is a cage on the upper left, and the child is in the cage. The giant took out the sword of light and fought the king of darkness. The king of darkness came with "dark light waves", and the giant immediately blocked the attack with "light shield". The giant performed his magic. He killed the king of darkness with the blade of light, split the cage with his sword and saved the children.
From then on, the giant and the children played happily together again.
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