What are the advantages of writing a composition?
In terms of composition, most of our problems are: the practice content is empty, the vocabulary is poor, the sentences are not fluent, there are many typos, and some even write only a few lines, which is not an article at all. Too many failures have caused us a heavy ideological burden and formed a vicious circle of "failure-disgust-failure". Therefore, if you want to improve your composition efficiency, you must lower your requirements and slow down the gradient, so that you can enjoy the joy of success in the "nearest development zone". Keeping a diary is a better way of composition training, which is suitable for our "needs". Although I can't write a "long masterpiece", I can still write a few decent words and a specific fragment. We should seize this yardstick and pursue victory. First, we should let ourselves taste the sweetness of composition, gain a pleasant psychological experience and enhance our self-confidence consciousness. Then we will gradually change from "disgust" to "interest" in composition and create a good psychological environment for our progress. It is worth emphasizing that keeping a diary can not only improve cognitive ability, so how can we keep a diary well?
Diary belongs to the applied style. (1) Pay attention to the following points: the day of the week and the weather, and the format cannot be wrong. (2) Pay attention to carefully observe everything around you, have a curious heart and be diligent in thinking. (3) When writing the most familiar things, you must be affectionate and can't tell lies. (4) We should not only look for materials outside, but also pay attention to writing more about psychological activities. (5) Write your thoughts. You can write about scenery, things, people, scenery, things and things.
In short, no matter how you write, as long as you stick to it, it is good for the improvement of your composition.
2. What are the advantages that can be specifically written in the composition? It is said that man is an apple bitten by God, where he has not been bitten is an advantage, and where he has been bitten is a disadvantage. Therefore, no one is perfect, and I am no exception. My advantages are as follows: 1. I remember that one day it was raining cats and dogs, and few people in our class brought umbrellas or any rain gear. When we walked out of the classroom, I took an umbrella. Because he didn't bring rain gear, I thought about it. I went home by bus, so I lent it to him because I didn't need an umbrella. At home, my mother praised me. Second, I am very confident. I remember that when I was 0/0 years old, I liked to make a boat, and later I made one, which was approved by my teacher. Since then, I have been very confident, I think. We are going to do a general cleaning in the afternoon holiday, and all the other work has been done, leaving only the glass untouched. Because it was too high, many people were afraid to go up, so I didn't hesitate to climb up to clean the glass. 4. Love labor Last semester, I was a health commissioner. There was a toilet in our shared area, and no one cleaned it. But every time I go early, I always clean the toilet first, and then clean other places. I never complain. My shortcomings are as follows: 1. I always can't control myself in class, and I say something irrelevant to the class with my classmates because I have been criticized. The biggest problem of my untidiness is that I didn't bring my math book at school once, and the teacher happened to teach a new lesson that day, so I was embarrassed. Another time, the teacher asked me to pay the tuition the next day, so I went home. I completely forgot. There are many such things. 3. Love pride. Every time I make a little progress in my academic performance, I am very proud. As a result, my progress is always slow. People around me say that I am narrow-minded, which I know. When dealing with people, you will be very concerned about your intolerance, which is not good. I think: I will keep my advantages and correct my shortcomings in the future. Let yourself be close to perfection. This is the real me. Everyone has his own strengths and weaknesses. Although I don't know your advantages and disadvantages, neither do you know mine. Let's introduce it to you now! I have many shortcomings, such as: I missed the exam, my homework was careless ... hey! There are so many! Once, I was in the sixth grade. At noon that day, I was reading math. Because the math teacher didn't come up, we began to relax. At this time, a student on duty came in. O 'Fulin in our class saw a student on duty's hair tied up and said with a smile, "Little sister, your hair is so stylish?" We all laughed after hearing it, and we in China, on behalf of Yang Jiechi, laughed the loudest. Hey, while we were laughing, the teacher on duty happened to pass by and heard it, and deducted the points from our class. After our class teacher knew it, he asked angrily, "Did anyone laugh at noon stand up!" " I stood up with several classmates. "Let's go to the lobby for an activity class and punish the enterprise!" The teacher said seriously. So, our whole class has been standing, and our feet are weak when standing, and we have to stand next class! When we arrived in Class Two, Grade Two, we stood in the lobby and were teased by our younger brothers and sisters. One student even said, "Look, they are all humiliated!" "At that time, I really wanted to run over and beat her up, but ... after class, the teacher came down and said," Have you thought about the consequences before you do this? Do you think I really want to punish you? I am so heartbroken! I am really heartbroken! You studied in this school for six years and were taken away by the one with the worst grades in the class! Now, I believe you know where you are wrong. Tell me one by one! "I want to go out first, but I don't have the courage. Huang Xian went out, whispered a few words to the teacher and then went to the classroom. Then Yang Jieping, Li Junyu and Chen Yufen. " What? Don't Deng Jianxia (I) know where he is wrong? Dare to do it? "The teacher said disappointedly. No, sir. Please don't misunderstand me. I really want to go out, but I don't have the courage. Then Liang Jiaying and Mei Meixin went out again. I watched my good friend go to class, so I got up the courage to go to the teacher and said, "teacher, I know I was wrong!" "At that time, I really made up my mind not to appear in the future." If you go out into the society in the future, even if you become a manager, would you like to be led by a worker? You studied in this school for six years and were taken away by the one with the worst grades in the class! You say, can I not punish you? Can you not be sad? "After hearing this, my tears of disappointment fell again." You go to class and think about whether I'm right or not! "The teacher said earnestly. Besides these shortcomings, there are many: poor self-control, inattention in class ... don't comment on me after reading these shortcomings. I still have many advantages. For example, I like reading, and my academic performance is good ... I once tried to finish three novels in three nights, including Hunting on the Yuan Ye, Arrogant Little Ice Window and Dr. Bird. Is it special? .
3. What is the function of Chinese composition inscription? Inscriptions show or highlight the theme and emotion of the article, arouse readers' interest in reading, and often play a leading role. Clever composition and inscription can build a beautiful scenery and make the work icing on the cake. Let the inscription flash in the examination room for nearly two years, and many excellent works have used the inscription. Give people a refreshing feeling. For example, "there is a kind of responsibility that is sacred, and there is a kind of care that is selfless. Life is about love, and love is touching. " (angels in white, a masterpiece of Hebei senior high school entrance examination in 2003, you are the touch of my life); "Once told a story, I missed it; A meteor crossed the sky, and I missed my wish; Life is only once, and you can't miss your responsibility. " Finding the abandoned things is also a meaningful life experience. "(heroes shed no tears, a masterpiece of Anhui senior high school entrance examination in 2003) These inscriptions are beautiful in language, profound in connotation, intriguing and admirable. It is often said that the title is the "eye" of the article, and such a good inscription will undoubtedly decorate your eyes and make them "beautiful". First, analyze the meaning of the topic. Most topic compositions require us to draw up our own topics. If our proposed topic is not easy to understand, or lacks direct connection with the topic, at this time, designing an inscription to analyze the meaning of the topic and narrow the distance from the topic will receive unexpected results. For example, in 2003, Lanzhou's masterpiece "Incense intoxicates people", what is "fragrance"? What does it have to do with the topic of "calm down"? The author carefully designed the inscription-there is a fragrance in life, which is called calmness. In life, there is a kind of tolerance and artistic conception, which is also called calmness. The inscription cut to the chase and analyzed the meaning of the question, which made people have a preliminary understanding of "Xiang". Then, through the three segments of "the moon bends", "the singing is moving" and "the tea is overflowing", it is expounded that "calmness" is an understanding and perception of life. This topic is ingenious and profound, and it goes without saying. In 2003, a candidate wrote in the composition "Intoxication" of Jilin senior high school entrance examination: "Thank God for giving mankind this wonderful feeling-intoxication. In fact, don't forget to leave a side for yourself when you are tired. Examinees give "intoxication" a new meaning and a new interpretation-it is not only a state of satisfaction, but also a state of letting the soul rest, a sky left for the soul to wander when it is tired, thus writing new ideas. Second, in order to attract the attention of the marking teacher, sometimes you can express your original and unique views on a certain aspect of the topic through inscriptions. Cleverly point out the theme of the full text. For example, in 2003, a candidate in Fuzhou wrote "Life Needs Forgiveness": "When one foot steps on the petals of a violet, the fragrance left on that foot is forgiveness. -Inscription ",the author made an extraordinary opening, and used this figurative inscription to lead to the central topic of" Life needs forgiveness ",which is poetic and intriguing; A candidate in Ningbo wrote "I See China's Entry into WTO": "Although the rose flower has thorns, it is more attractive. -Inscription, the author compares "WTO accession" to a rose, showing his views on WTO accession, withholding the topic of "seeing the world with a beautiful heart", which is subtle and vivid; When writing the topic of "self-confidence", a candidate in Hangzhou quoted a famous saying as an inscription: "I met numerous obstacles and fell down, but I got up again and again ... I firmly believe that I can reach the depths of brilliant clouds and blue sky-the extreme I hope. "Helen Keller expressed her self-confidence through famous sayings, cleverly made the main idea clear, explained the problem and made sense. Our composition does not win with profound and novel themes, but with tortuous plot structure. At this time, we might as well skillfully use inscriptions to set suspense, so as to arouse readers' interest in reading. For example, "when the breath of spring passes by you, leaving a life in which winter goes and spring comes, do you experience the eternity of life?" -Inscription (2003 Anhui senior high school entrance examination masterpiece "Spring: Experience Life"), the inscription asks: "Do you experience the eternity of life? Create suspense, stimulate people's imagination, and make readers have a strong desire to read. Some people say that the game is amber that has remained unchanged for thousands of years because of innocence, but when did people lose their childlike innocence? -Inscription (game, a masterpiece of Anqing senior high school entrance examination in 2003), which sets suspense by asking questions and arouses readers' interest in reading; "People who build bridges say that bridges are buildings; The person who painted the bridge said it was beautiful; Those who appreciate the bridge say it is charming; In my mind, this bridge is a different landscape. -Inscription (2003 Shanxi senior high school entrance examination essay "Bridge"), what kind of scenery is the bridge in my mind? How do you know if you don't look down? Obviously played a suspense role. Fourth, Zhang Jing often uses "slightly lifting his eyes" as a metaphor for clear thinking. In fact, some topic compositions, such as "happiness", "emotion" and "responsibility", have wide connotations. We can design an inscription to explain its meaning from different angles and different sides, and pay attention to echo it through several scenes and fragments in the main part, so that the inscription will play a role. Happiness is the experience of life, the feeling of the soul, and the emotion contained in dullness-Inscription (Happiness, a topic composition of Jiangxi senior high school entrance examination in 2002). The inscription expounds the connotation of happiness from three angles, and echoes it with three examples in the main part to explain what happiness is for us. "Childhood is a song, singing happy music; Childhood is a small boat, carrying countless wishes of parents; Childhood is a museum, displaying innocent and immature works; Childhood is a story, telling a simple and vivid fragment-inscription (2003 Yibin senior high school entrance examination composition "Dream Back to Childhood"). The inscription explains childhood from four aspects through metaphor, which echoes the text and has distinct levels. Fifth, add emotion to win with emotion. If you write a composition with "true feelings", you might as well combine it with the text.