CAD layout. Take a look for me. I made two plans myself.

I think both your plans are good, and both of them have loopholes. A plan is authentic, and it's nothing to open the door, as long as it doesn't directly face the window of the hall. But the entrance door is not good for the bedroom shop? So you really want to change it? Can you add a corner porch? Either add a bead curtain on the bedroom door, which can barely solve it.

The second plan is bold and I support it, but some guests come to see the dining room and bedroom first. Besides, one of your corridors is too transparent, and feng shui is also a taboo. You can be bolder and move the lower part of (1) to the center of (2), and the upper part is connected with (3) here. Pay attention to another key point? Here (4) add a 30~50 cm thick semi-circular false column and stick it on the wall? Isn't this good at first sight? But I'm sure you'll think about it more and more soon, okay? The more you live, the smoother it is? Because it fits the curve but is not straight? Feng shui effect of storing wind and gathering gas ~? Improper handling of the entrance to this room is always embarrassing ~? Please be careful ~