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No one applauds the excellent composition of 500 words, and the comments about 100 words are urgent! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

Facing the mountain there.

"Player 1 play."

My heart jumped into my throat, because I was the player named 1

The trial run of the robot begins. The first trial run was successful without any collision. The second time, the third time, it went well. I'm a little relieved.

The official competition is coming, and my robot suddenly goes blank. "What's the matter?" I am in a hurry. According to past experience, the white screen is mostly because the switch is not turned on to the end. I pulled it out, pulled it out and tried it several times, but it didn't help. I broke out in a sweat. Just one minute before the official game, I finally found the crux of the problem. The original CPU line was not fully inserted.

The first round of competition was easily and smoothly completed. Followed by the second round of lottery, I was drawn to room 3 of the final round of competition. According to the rules of the game, I have to smoke again. I smoked several times in a row, and room 3 seems to have a special relationship with me, and it has always been number 3. My robot is always on at this time, which consumes a lot of electricity. Finally, I got the farthest room 2. Fortunately, my robot is very obedient. It completely follows the route I designed without any mistakes. When I walked out of the room with my robot, the instructor waiting outside took a long breath. There was no suspense in the next third game, and our performance was very successful. My robot walks steadily. With its excellent stability, I won the second place in the Intelligent robot contest Middle School Group for primary and middle school students in the city.

On the eve of being selected to participate in this smart robot contest, I was in the review stage of the mid-term exam, and the time was tight, so I didn't take the initiative to register. The teacher mentioned two candidates, one is Jin Sheng and the other is me. A month before the competition, the teacher decided to choose me to take part in the competition, and I agreed. One day at noon, the teacher asked me to see the robot the next day. This is my first time dealing with robots. I was so excited that I almost didn't sleep all night. At noon the next day, I went to the designated place early to see the teacher. The teacher introduced me to the venue, showed me the robot and told me some rules of the game. In the next few trainings, I studied the rules and operating procedures very seriously. I have been thinking about robots for the past few days, and my understanding surprised the teacher. I really lived up to expectations and won honor for my school and myself.

The experience of participating in Smart robot contest tells me that facing a mountain there, no matter how high it is and how difficult the road is to climb, as long as you climb bravely, you are sure to conquer it. On the other hand, if you shrink back because of its height, you will never reach the height of your dreams. In life, we will meet many high mountains in front of us. We have only one choice, and that is to climb bravely. (Word count: 846 words)

Analysis and comments:

This is a composition of material proposition. The material said that someone asked a mountaineer why he could conquer so many mountains, and he replied: Because the mountains are there. Please write a composition on the topic of "facing the mountain over there"

This little author, who has just entered the first grade of junior high school, explained this proposition with his own experience of participating in the Intelligent robot contest of primary and secondary schools in the city. The entry process described above is vivid and vivid, which makes readers feel the tense and warm atmosphere at the scene with him, and the analysis behind it is also very successful.

Using concrete life events to express the proposition, the article is lively, rich in content and distinctive in theme. We should use this method as much as possible to express propositions, so that the article has flesh and blood and soul, and avoid common empty moans. Secondly, we must describe the details that are close to life, and focus on the wonderful key details that help to express the theme, rather than sketching and memorizing. As long as you do this, it is not difficult to write a simple, relaxed and wonderful composition. Do everything with ingenuity and don't advocate brute force. Writing articles should pay more attention to the word "Qiao", with clever conception, clever layout, visualization, concretization and best efforts.

Typing is very tiring, support me! I hope it helps you! The above composition may not be practical, but I think it can be used flexibly. I think it's good. Do you need some more?