20 14 composition for college entrance examination
◆ Zheng Weicheng of Qin Jin is in danger. "If you can raise a candle to see the king of Qin, the division of labor will come back." Fox's defeat better determines what can be called a hero. Croft said that Qin Mugong, king of Qin, firmly believed in Qin. In the face of sudden changes, Gong decided to leave. Zheng finally turned the corner.
◆ In the face of the national crisis, the candle has no hesitation, hit the floor; In Qiang Qin, candles are arrogant, eloquent and wise. His personal gains and losses, all patriotism for customers, Zheng Guoan's fearlessness in times of crisis, and his confidence and courage to go camping are all worth learning. Candle's courage and patriotism are beyond words.
◆ 1955, the famous scientist Qian Xuesen broke through many obstacles and returned to China. Then Director kimball of the US Navy said, "I would rather be killed by this guy than let him leave the United States. No matter where he is, it is worth five departments. " One person's strength is worth five models. We know that "the retreat of the violinist" will tell us the answer.
◆ Cao Cao's poem: An old horse crouches, aiming at a thousand miles. The martyrs were full of courage in their later years. Throughout the ages, how many people are determined to be thousands of miles away, even the society, and how unfair his fate is, but at the critical moment, they still stand up and give their light and heat to the people of this country. Candlewood is such a person, and we admire him very much.
Highlight Liu Bei, Zhuge Liang, Zhuge Liang and his world trend. Zhuge Liang came out to say whether this is preparation or not, and so is the power of candles. Although he did not meet his talent, he did not give up hope before. Candle Wu doesn't want to achieve something. His heart never gave up. He kept looking at the world situation and thinking about the road to world stability and success. You want a little "Bi Marvin". How did you get into history? The people and monarchs of the State of Jin are very aware of the resentment between Qin Jin and Qin Bo. Undoubtedly, the lofty sentiments of "an old horse is eager for a thousand miles" are the main reasons for future generations' admiration.
The light of the candle-such a talented dragon didn't appear. Who is "selfish, not avoiding wealth" (Lin Zexu)? When the country is in trouble, it is a country surrounded by solutions. We can imagine what it would be like for such an old man to put down his white beard and hair at night. He walked in the camp of the crutch Qin Shihuang without fear. How did he die morally? Too many years of loneliness and unwillingness have also honed his calmness and keenness. The purest love for Zheng strengthened his calmness and keenness. The confrontation between him and Qin Bo was doomed from the beginning of the victory. After decades of energy, it finally released a shining moment in an instant. "Opportunity favors only those who are prepared." This opportunity is a bit late, but there is a risk of national subjugation. However, if Zheng is not surrounded, the power of candlelight is really afraid of being annihilated by the wind and rain of history.
◆ Dark swords, drums and horns contend. But this number is still fresh in people's minds. Candle is like cardinal's vision, Qiang Bing. It can be said that the backbone of the country made the ancients encourage themselves with a mirror.
There is a fable that the sun and the north wind compete to see who can make a passer-by take off his clothes in a hurry. The biting cold north wind blew, and people tried to scrape off their clothes, but they made them tighter. The sun and people's gentle sunshine are warm, and the weather is getting warmer. People also take off their clothes. Critics are also like the sun. If they are gentle and warm-hearted, they will let the other side be willing, not forced, and not outspoken, saying, "Good things are said in spring, and colds are bad in June." Emphasizing the key points of artistic conversation can be said that just as the sunshine in March warms your heart, you will get unexpected results. A typical example is "Teacher Qin's retreat by candlelight".
Comments on the lobbying art of Zhu Wu and Zou, touching the "old" people of Zhu Wu and Zheng, his art of lobbying pranks and Kevin·Z's critical survival are of great help to Qiu Taitai. Zou Ji and Qi Zhishuai also "beautiful" North Xugong, leaving behind this legendary admonition group. Touch the dragon, old man, because that nagging old woman is called a world celebrity. It's just that as soon as she met Grandpa Long, she used to nag, detour and reason, making Zhao Changjun, the son of the Queen Mother, "Please contact Long Ming for makeup."
Extracurricular materials 2. The Hongmen Banquet (Sima Qian's Historical Records of Xiang Yu)
◆ "Natural outstanding people are also male ghosts", and Xiang Yu is invincible at seven o'clock; After three years of fighting, "the five princes were ordered to destroy Qin, divide the world, be the champion, be the official, and be the overlord." However, he failed to build a war and eventually brewed eternal regret. Why? It is "the only world in the world that has not been considered." Win the world, because there is no foresight.
Under the siege, director of Wujiang Pavilion advised Wang Xiang to cross the East River and make a comeback, but later Xiang Yu asked, "What have I crossed in my life?" Finally, "I am in the East City, but I have no consciousness and no remorse." Really "I still miss Xiang Yu and refuse to cross Jiangdong."
Sima Qian's "Historical Records" said, "Cutting power from chewing gum, the tireless ancient wisdom and industry king tried to commandeer the merits of the world by force, and his country's five soldiers, its East Side, had no consciousness and no regrets and had to carry it out. It is not absurd to quote "I will die one day, and my crime is not violent"! " Xiang Yu pointed out that the lack of a politician's strategy depends only on strength. Mao Zedong said: "Science can't sell overlord." And Xiang Yu? His current defeat can't properly reflect the reasons for his own collapse of 3000, which is also something to be proud of, because both failures fell from the sky. So sad, why not overcome the feeling of confusion?
◆ What is Xiang Yu's achilles heel? Lack of political foresight and blind fame are Xiang Yu's achilles' heel. Xiang Bo said: "It is unfair to make great contributions to those who fight today." He immediately changed the idea of "exerting the motive force". Fan Kuai accused him of "making great contributions to Zhu Li, and Qin also continued this death." Although his language is sharp, he is "not satisfied". Although he is regarded as an absolute advantage over force, they are still fragile. He is the richest man in the world and he is trying to make a name for himself. He is ready to reach an agreement with the king. He is afraid of the world monster. He doesn't have the measure of Fan Ceng, which shows that he is headstrong and superstitious about force, and the fundamental reason lies in his psychological fragility.
As an aristocrat of Chu, Xiang Yu also has many shortcomings and mistakes, even unforgivable places, which is inevitable. But after all, he once * * * suddenly and violently criticized Qin, which made a certain contribution. He also has a personality, such as fear * * *, not a plot and other bright spots, and should be affirmed realistically.
◆ Liu Xiangyu's evaluation: Fu strategized, winning thousands of miles away, I am more ovary (that is, Zhang). I am not as good as Xiao He, because the plan of running the country is to comfort the people with food and interest, and there are endless routes for providing foodstuff. Even if this army is tens of thousands of yuan, it will always win the general, and it will also take the opportunity to sneak attack my Han Xin. These three models also highlight personality, and I can use them, so I saved the world. There was a Fan Zeng Xiang Yu who didn't bring this. They thought I robbed him.
◆ Evaluate Du Mu, Wang and Qing Zhao:
Mu Tiaojiang Pavilion: Some unexpected victories or failures are ashamed of men. It is unknown that the versatile children in Jiangdong will come back.
Wang's Wujiang Pavilion: After the defeat of the Central Plains, the mourning of the soldiers who fought hard will never be recovered. Although this son is in Jiangdong, Ken and Wang have the amount of soil.
Li Qingzhao's "Summer quatrains": Life is a hero and a ghost. Still thinking about Xiang Yu, refused to cross Jiangdong.
◆ Perception of Xiang Yu's Mao Zedong Road: "The People's Liberation Army occupied Nanjing" 1949.4
Zhongshan storm crossed the river from pale yellow and millions of heroes. Tiger's dragon card is better than in the past, upside down and generous.
It is advisable to chase after the poor bandits with the remaining courage, not to learn from the overlord. If the sky is sentimental, it will grow old, and the right way in the world is vicissitudes.
[Coach] Du believes that a real man should be flexible, can make a comeback and describe his page in a magnificent historical picture. It is based on this bold idea to objectively analyze the fact that Wang Shi and Xiang Yu were defeated. Even if Jiangdong talents are still alive, they are not willing to start over with Xiang Yu. I believe that Xiang Yu's army will definitely not come back after the centrifugal failure. Xiang Dui is full of praise, praising him as a "strange man" and a "ghost hero", and his reverence is beyond words. Mao introduced the revolutionary spirit of "Chiang Kai-shek liberating China" after the People's Liberation Army occupied Nanking. Xiang Yu used this story to encourage the whole army to move from victory to plane victory. The reputation of Xiang Yu, the overlord of Chu, cannot be learned.
◆ Gai Xiasong/Xiang Yu-Ba Li Mountain is full of gas, which is unfavorable. Come on, Spot. Come and die. You can't do nothing, but what about the law?
Tip:! Lashan described the Titanic and even pulled it up the hill. That kind of imposing manner can overwhelm everything in the world. Death, Mercedes. This is the first subject that the emperor doesn't want to admit in front of reality. It is not his fault that he thinks this situation is "not conducive to the upcoming scene". The key to failure is tenacious struggle. Wu Zhui refused to lead a breakthrough in the last game today. He thinks that Wu Zhui means everything; The past glory, the present and the future destruction dilemma. Finally, he was desperate, and only the brave concubine accompanied him to cry: "I can arrange anything you want."
Song of the Wind/State-When the wind blows the clouds, it is hoped that Wei will return to the sea, and the soldiers who have won the peace will defend the four sides.
Hint: This song was written after Liu Bang defeated Xiang Yu, rebelled in the world and returned to Beijing (Chang) to repair his hometown. It shows that he is too complacent about the world from his hometown and worried about the future of national defense. Liu bang's first sentence refers to warlords, including uprisings all over the country, one after another, and finally only his prestige Liu Yuanyang's world. As warring parties, why do they win or lose differently? The Banquet shows us a well-known picture.
According to Historical Records, Xiang Yu and Liu Bang saw the growth of Qin Shihuang's tour scene. Xiang Yu said. "He can also be replaced," Liu said. "Well, a real man can do it!" They covet the throne of one heart, but their words are blunt and silent. Differences, Liu's character can be seen.
◆ Sima Qian's unanimous praise for almost all his courage in Historical Records made the hero's courage to donate money. They have ideals, ambitions and pursuits; Some of their beliefs and principles can be at the expense of their own lives; They have an indomitable spirit and will never stop until they reach their goal. Sima Qian once wrote in "Bao Ren An": "People are born as one, or they are heavier than Mount Tai or lighter than a feather, and the difference is useless." He was imprisoned and lost. In order to complete Historical Records, he survived tenaciously. He is regarded as "an example of King Wen being arrested and beaten by the Book of Changes"; Zhong Nai was exiled with Chun and Qu Yuan, endowed with Li Sao, who was blind and had Mandarin. Sun Binjiao, "The Art of War" was revised, and he did not move the stone to preach "Lu Lan"; Prisoner of the Han and Qin Dynasties, 300 poems, Difficult, Lonely and Angry, and Poems, the works of saints, are probably meant to bring everyone here. Stagnation should be in its own way, it describes the past, those who think. People think that these hard work, "Sima Qian's personal life experience and" Historical Records "show that Sima Qian's precious wealth left to future generations has always inspired us and inspired us. When we lose confidence and are on the verge of despair, it gives us great strength, confidence and courage.
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& ltBr's "The Night Banquet" tells us many distinctive features: indecision, arrogance and contempt for Xiang Yu; Good employer, the help of cunning Liu; Witty and decisive, temporary changes are not shocking; Wily Fan Zeng; Fan Kuai, with both wisdom and courage ... They left many sighs and thoughts on their own destiny: Xiang created history, while Liu Bang made the times; Xiang Yu, people just don't want to appreciate and follow suit; And street hooligans like Liu are the fruits of imperial power industry. Who is the hero? This is a problem, and it is also the space for us to write.
[applied] writing
This is the material, which can be used in topics such as personality, hero, listening to others' opinions, self-cognition, strength, overcoming oneself and perfecting oneself, history and mirror. History is a treasure-house, which requires changing the angle, arranging the structure of the article reasonably, and expounding your own views in depth when quoting skillfully in written form.
Three classic characters in extracurricular materials
Xianglinsao was a typical rural working woman in old China. She was industrious and capable, resigned to survival, persecuted by the feudal system, did not resist, and eventually became a beggar, lonely and miserable in Fulu Town with a "peaceful" attitude.
Tracy was lonely at heart when she was an orphan. Although he took good care of my grandfather, he didn't really understand her feelings as a young girl. Her heart is closed and isolated, lonely, lonely waiting for the end.
It is hard-working, brave and simple, and has the characteristics of ordinary housewives. Looking at their families, looking forward to a happy life, and hoping that their husbands will not leave. At present, the country is in trouble, and the enemy is in trouble. They can love the motherland, unite their husbands' love, and actively support their husbands to join the army and join women's organizations in the anti-Japanese struggle.
[Application] Influenced by many factors, including social environment and personal temperament.
Fate. The following materials can be used as propositions, topics or materials such as "Personality determines fate", "Attitude towards life", "Fate is in one's own hands", "Spirit (soul) shackles" and "Dignity of life". Please note that when you use the application angle.
4 Extracurricular materials, classic stories
Gondola, the old ferry in Border Town, stayed with his granddaughter Tracy. Two sons, the general manager of the water terminal, fell in love with Tracy. For a generous reason, they went to the seaside and died unexpectedly. Had a heart attack and left McGrady at home. This story shows the quiet and harmonious life in the border town and the sadness of love, joy and music.
[applied] writing
This is the proposition that materials can be applied to "harmony", "family" and "love", or the topic of material composition. China is committed to building and developing a "harmonious" society. A harmonious society needs beautiful human nature, and this kind of human harmony, Border Town reflects the relationship between man and nature and between people, isn't it what our society needs? Then with this material, we can use different expressions and flexibly use different themes from the perspective of intention or proposition.
Five classic speeches of extracurricular materials
Teacher, why are you taught by people in the industry?
There are no expensive and cheap, no long and short storage roads, and deposits are also divided.
Disciples don't have to be inferior to teachers, and teachers don't have to rain heavily on them.
[applied] writing
It is this material that can be used for the themes of "teacher" and "respecting teachers and attaching importance to teaching", "being the first in the world", "teaching and learning" and "cooperation". We should pay attention to changing the angle, combine our own knowledge accumulation, buckle the topic, reasonably determine the style of writing, "teaching and learning", not only write argumentative papers, but also quote the words of many teachers and classmates around us. Narrative can also write real-life stories to make readers think they are educated.
Five classic discourses of extracurricular materials
Mr. Lu Xun is in the national key cultural relics protection unit. When talking about how to look at it, he said, "! We want to have vision in our brains. In a word, we want to take, we want to use, we want to save, we want to destroy.
[Application] Writing
This is the material, which can be used for "the treatment of national key cultural relics protection units" and "Lu Xun's great contribution", and consists of related propositions or themes such as "selected works". Lu Xun's "takenism" contains a profound philosophy, that is, when we abide by cultural heritage and foreign things, we must guide us how to treat them. Then use this material to reasonably and appropriately analyze the requirements of the composition. It should be noted that when you change the angle of application. BR p> Six Classic Stories of Extracurricular Materials
The barber in a barber shop in Jinan refused to shave the clown's head and only shaved his head. When "Jack" ran away from the wall, a couple's barber said, "There's nothing I can do about Jack's hairstyle!" "That's up to you." ......
! & gt [Applied] Writing
This is the material, which can be used for related propositions such as "power and responsibility", "discrimination" and "equal treatment", or the material composition of the theme. In a empowered society, power is closely related to responsibility and obligation, and material is contrary to this negative typical law, so there are not many things. The reflection of this problem is that it has a certain universality, so we should be cautious in using words that are small and see big, not extreme.
Extra-curricular information, in London, a university student wandered around an old tree in the suburbs.
One day 1828. Suddenly, he found bugs crawling under the fallen bark. He quickly peeled off the bark and found two strange beetles crawling forward quickly. Now I hold my right foot in the hands of college students and watch it excitedly. Just then, while a college student was not paying attention, Beetle immediately put his hand on the mouth beetle and went to catch the third beetle again. Looking at these strange beetles, college students really can't put it down, but they just like to work proudly, and they won't forget it until they put it in their mouths. The beetle's mouth can't stand it. They give off a pungent venom. The tongue of this college is tingling and numb. Then he remembered the beetle's mouth and spat out his hand. Then, despite his sore mouth, he proudly walked to Cambridge. The college is Charles Darwin. Later, in memory of this beetle, it first discovered him and named its life "Darwin".
Darwin graduated from Cambridge University in 183 1, but he gave up his lucrative career as a priest and remained keen on his natural science research.
[applied] writing
This is a material that can be combined with related propositions, topics or materials such as "stubbornness", "career choice" and "taking and giving up". Applications should pay attention to changing the angle.
Extracurricular materials, classic text fragments
Once, I participated in the patrol boat of Berger, a qualified naturalist, and was deeply impressed by the biogeographic distribution of South America and the geology of the relationship between biology and paleontology. 1837 after returning to China, I think if you patiently collect all kinds of information on this issue and organize research, you may get some results. So in five years, I focused on this problem and put forward some matters needing attention. The bonds will be full again at 1844. At the time of writing, I think this is the correct outline conclusion.
[applied] writing
This material is suitable for propositions, composition topics or materials related to the following topics: (1) accumulation (2) discussion (3) understanding of laws (4) pursuit of success (5) secrets. (6) Insist that this is the guarantee of victory. "If you don't accumulate steps, there will be no miles; If you don't accumulate small streams, you can't become rivers and seas. " It was because of Darwin's massive accumulation that he made an amazing discovery. This is a kind of material with rich connotation and wide application. Pay attention to changing the angle and expression when using it to avoid a sense of accomplishment.
9 Extracurricular materials, classic saying
Examples of "speaking like a book" are Guo Gaixing, Wang Ruoxu Gai, Shooting a Tiger, Proceedings of Jia Dao, and Huishan Cooking Little Dragons Poems. These stories tell us that on the way, we should work hard to motivate ourselves with strict school spirit and gradually achieve perfect art.
[applied] writing
This is the material, which can be composed of related propositions, topics or materials, such as "learning with humility", "rigorous scholarship", "believing in yourself and listening to others" and "modesty makes people progress", and uses the perspective to change the expression and language.
Ten classic speeches of extracurricular materials
Venus, because it is incomplete, rather than limiting the "lost" beauty of defect filling, has only a charming temperament. People imagine that Wiener Sri Lanka's recovery weapon has lost its overall wonder and unparalleled beauty in the abstract sense.
[applied] writing
This kind of material can combine "face defects" to "create incomplete beauty", "foster strengths and avoid weaknesses", "attitude" and other related propositions, topics or material components. We should pay attention to using the breadth and depth of this center, combine the reality, and strive to be targeted and targeted. To achieve dialectical reasoning, dialectical view of defects, perfect things have any defects, no flaws, and may show perfection, the key is to stimulate people's imagination and let many tips; They don't think it is perfect to fill all the defects; Thirdly, considering that physical defects are not terrible, what is terrible is that we have defects in our hearts, we use strong spiritual strength to make up for congenital defects.
Examples of extracurricular materials for college entrance examination composition;
Language, the spring of the soul?
The language hidden in China culture. From the words of knotting notes, the image of a bear appeared; From elegant, feminine, elegant and exquisite prose poems, Xiong Qiao; The thesis comes from the magnificent classic novel Soul of a Bear. ?
The language of taste is like a cup of delicate green tea, and the warm breath is refreshing; Language is like dew oozing blood, and the breath of life is all over the body. Taste language, like flowing spring water, is pure and simple. ......
Language, a clear spring heart, came to the general water with my soul. In the quiet moonlight, a lonely old man drove back from a mountain stream. I only heard one sentence: "I'd rather pull my tail in." An emissary asking for an answer. Nothing escapes him. His ambition touched my soul like Dapeng. Butterfly dance is particularly difficult to give up, especially electric fame and fortune. This is Zhuangzi. When Zhuangzi woke up, I forgot two things. I don't know whether "I" became a butterfly or whether a butterfly turned it into "I am". The lonely tree is waiting for the eternal moon tree to stand in my heart. ?
Language, a clear spring heart, brought my soul to the tall and lost Grand View Garden. Baochai's pleasing, exquisite and charming, watery temperament makes her pity, and Xifeng's sultry and admirable infatuation with precious stones may be respected. Everything is just the brand of a beautiful angel in my mind. The rise and fall of the Grand View Garden is also regrettable. Bao Dai's anti-feudal period of courage, love, romance and sadness. ?
Language, a clear spring heart, has entered with my soul, and "border town" is a transparent land. Smell and feel the people in the border towns and villages; Hurd, Tate's border town, two old customs; For example, I saw Tracy sitting on the shore, eager to see smart eyes. That part of Italy's sad border town turned into fresh air flowing through my body and affecting my nerves. Compared with this, human transparency has a sad ending, but who can deny that McGrady is happy? Endless waiting has turned into tears of acacia, swaying in the corner of the border town and floating in the hearts of every reader.
Language, clear spring heart, purify people's soul, become the supreme spiritual space, taste pure human nature, feel noble human nature, and human nature feels gorgeous and childish?
Language, a profound and inclusive world, embraces all rivers. Their souls shine in the light of literature, get spiritual food, get spiritual washing and show human nature. If the clear spring gurgles in my heart ...?
skill
High school students make good use of textbooks (mainly liberal arts textbooks). This paper is almost an inexhaustible source of materials. I think we can try to start from the following aspects:
First of all, familiar with materials, Qingyuan dredging. High school students have cultural background to write articles. I think the first task is to learn language, politics and the history of these materials. The course is familiar with classical languages, so that students can skillfully quote some ready-made materials when writing comparisons. In recent years, the slogans of strengthening extracurricular reading, expanding students' knowledge or reducing the burden seem to weaken the role of Chinese textbooks and despise the classics of textbooks. Don't you see that even the compilation of Chinese textbooks for national statistics requires more and more recitation? At present, some teachers talk less and less about classics and poems outside the text, or even don't talk about them. I think this is a very noteworthy problem, because it may mislead students. "Guan Gong hit Qin Qiong" is a stupid mistake in recent years, and many historical and cultural celebrities, stories or stories mentioned by middle school students in the college entrance examination seem to be obvious examples. At least there are familiar classic textbooks, so that students can avoid such mistakes from happening again. In recent years, college entrance examination compositions in some places have come directly from the curriculum, such as the alternative topic "Godot came today" in the composition of Fujian college entrance examination in 2006. This is Waiting for Godot, the protagonist of the fifth volume of Waiting for Godot in high school. This is equivalent to high school students also get familiar with the requirements of materials, or encounter the same type of topic, you will not write.
Second, apply what you have learned, and you are smart when you are born. In addition to the familiar liberal arts teaching, students can also accept traditional culture. He believes that using China's short essay writing method for reference, we can also accumulate a lot of materials for compiling textbooks and skillfully use writing. If the usual practice is that students' compositions can be consciously and actively extracted from textbooks, after three years of practice, students should skillfully use these materials from the accumulation of materials. In recent years, many candidates who practice writing in college entrance examination have participated in a large number of examples or allusions quoted in textbooks, and some even directly rewritten articles or stories in textbooks as blueprints. For example, in 2006, Hunan college entrance examination candidates wrote On Emotion:
Emotion is Li Bai's song "Heaven goes out, are we Artemisia people?" Emotion, Du Fu's heartfelt words that "the monarch is in Yaoshun and the people are in spring"; With emotion, Mao Zedong's strong ambition of "how many heroes there are, but also look at the present". ......
Anyone who already has emotions has his own will and spirit, and he must be high-spirited. People can't live without emotion, just like the disdain of the sky. Sequoia can't live without a solid foundation, and fragrant flowers can't give it confidence in sunshine.
Only sensible people can have an open-minded vision.