Qiantang river bridge, five elements lack fire.

A few decades ago, someone made a couplet, which is still absolute-Qiantang River Bridge, the five elements lack fire; I was right-it's sunny in San Ji during the day and at night. Actually, I didn't say it right either, because the rhythm is wrong: the upper part is Qiantang, the river and the bridge (the bridge is called Qiantang River, Qiantang River), and mine is obviously wrong. But the first couplet is not only a word analysis couplet, but also reasonable in meaning, and my second couplet not only achieves these two points at the same time, but also pays attention to the melody; The two couplets form a dynamic picture, but it can't be said that they are not related. I think I have the best bottom line, and I am right.