Environmental description composition explaining ppt
When writing a narrative based on scenery, we should also pay attention to the expression of thoughts and feelings. Generally speaking, when writing a landscape, you often write a landscape to express your feelings, or express your love for the motherland and hometown, or praise the ingenuity of nature ... In short, you can't write such a landscape. Only when the scenes are integrated can the article be gripping. (2) Pay attention to the objective facts. Scenery in nature is often related to seasons and regions. Throughout the year, within one day, the scenery is different at different times; Far away, mountains and rivers and fields, different places, the scenery will not be the same. Even at the same time and place, sometimes the scenery will change due to the interaction of natural phenomena. It can be seen that the scenery should be written in line with the local real situation at that time. A child wrote an article describing the night scene, using the phrase "the moon is full of mirrors and the sky is full of stars". In fact, this is not in line with the actual situation, because in natural phenomena, "the moon is very bright" and "stars" are naturally "rare". Unreal scenery writing will not only make jokes, but also make people doubt the ideological content of the article. If you want to write a true and credible landscape, you should pay attention to observation and avoid unnecessary jokes. (3) Write static and dynamic, and expand and enrich associations. The scenery in nature is static and dynamic, so it will be better and more appealing if the article can combine static and dynamic when painting scenery. 2. Describe the social environment. The description of social environment is a description of the social background and state of human activities or events. It covers a wide range, from rooms and houses, to streets and alleys, to urban areas. It involves a lot of contents, which can be indoor furnishings, indoor and outdoor decoration, local customs and so on.
When describing the social environment, we should pay attention to the following points: (1) Write things that best reflect the characteristics of the times or places in accurate and appropriate language. (2) can't cover everything, focus on writing. (3) Necessary explanations and introductions should be made, so that readers can understand the background of the characters' lives or events and the role of events. 3. Describe the journey. Narrating travel is writing travel notes. Travel notes are narratives that integrate natural scenery and social environment.
To write a good travel note, we must pay attention to the following points: (1) Grasp the characteristics and select materials. When you set foot on places of interest, you often change your scenery, which is dazzling and fascinating everywhere. If you don't put writing in the first place and list it one by one indiscriminately, then the articles you write must be plain, like a running account. Therefore, before you put pen to paper, you must compare and identify the scenery you appreciate, select the essence from the rough, prioritize and determine the relevant scenery that needs to be written emphatically. Generally speaking, you can focus on the scenery with distinctive characteristics and write about the scenery that you are particularly impressed and feel strongly. In narrative description, we should try our best to express the characteristics of things. (2) Write down your trip clearly. Wandering is the route and trace of visiting a place. To visit a place, you often have to go through many places and see a lot of scenery. When you write it, you must describe it in the order of your visit, first make it clear where you went, and then make it clear where you went. The main way to write clearly is to "change the scenery". (3) Associated with historical relics or relics. 4. Describe a lovely hometown. You can describe the mountains, rivers, local customs, local products, and even the grass and trees in your hometown.
2. Environmental description Environmental description refers to the description of external objects directly related to characters, including the description of natural environment and social environment.
The natural environment refers to the time, season, climate and geographical characteristics of people's activities. By describing the natural environment, we can create a typical character activity in writing character notes, so as to show the character's character, reveal his inner world, and some can promote the development of the plot. For example:
Because it is the end of winter, the weather is gloomy again. The cold wind blew into the cabin and looked out from the gap in the canopy. There were several desolate villages lying far and near, lifeless. I can't help feeling sad inside.
The example (1) depicts the natural scenery in the dead of winter, such as gloomy weather, chilly wind, yellow sky and bleak Yuan Ye, vividly depicts the dilapidated scene of the old China countryside, provides a typical environment for the characters' activities behind, and sets off the heavy and sad mood of "I" at this time.
The description of the natural environment mainly serves as a foil. For example, the second and third paragraphs of Seven Matches describe nature, the second paragraph describes it objectively, and the third paragraph is written through Lu Jinyong's observation and feelings, attacking the characteristics of abnormal climate change, frequent rainstorms and humidity everywhere. Therefore, it effectively reveals Lu Jinyong's inner activity of longing for fire in distress and anxiety, and sets off the incomparable preciousness of matches. Promoted the development of the story, such as:
(2) The rainstorm, like a huge waterfall, swept the Changwei Plain from the northwest coast, which was unstoppable. Thunder rumbled among the low clouds, making people's ears hum. Lightning, sometimes with dazzling blue light, cuts through the dark sky, reflecting Tian He swaying wildly in the storm, whipping the raindrops on the earth and struggling to walk in the rainstorm, like gold threads. In an instant, lightning disappeared, heaven and earth merged into one, and everything was swallowed up by endless darkness. There is no one on the other side, and there is no other noise around, only deafening thunder and torrential rain. ……
Example 2 vividly depicts the harsh environment of lightning, strong wind, heavy rain and dark weather, and encounters the enemy because of darkness; When the river swelled and the boat was washed away, Xiao Chen's family covered the Wushu team and made a heroic sacrifice. This description of natural scenery not only sets off the spiritual realm of the characters, but also promotes the development of the story.
The description of social environment is the description of social background, place, atmosphere and the relationship between people. Social environment is the basis of the formation of characters' ideological character. For example:
(3) At Lankao Station at that time, the north wind roared and heavy snow fell. Under the eaves of the station, there is an icicle with a ruler and a handle. The national special car transporting the victims to the harvesting area is flying over here. There are also some victims, wearing cotton-padded clothes provided by the National Air Force, huddled in trucks and crowded into waiting rooms. ...
Example (3) describes to us the specific environment in which natural disasters brought misfortune to Lankao people in the early 1960s (in this environment, Jiao decided to lead Lankao people to fight floods and save themselves. This effectively highlights the will and courage of the main characters to overcome disasters.
(4) The man nodded, his eyes still staring; He also whispered, "Look-what do you think this is?"
Aunt Hua followed his finger and looked at the grave in front of her. Grassroots are not completely integrated, revealing a piece of loess, which is ugly. When I looked up carefully again, I was surprised; -There is a circle of red and white flowers around the sharp grave.
Example 4 describes that revolutionaries presented wreaths to the tombs of revolutionary martyrs, but Grandma and Aunt Hua didn't understand the purpose of offering wreaths on the tombs. The description of this social environment profoundly reveals the profound lesson that the revolutionary war of 1911 was divorced from the masses, and the propaganda and education of the masses were ineffective, which caused the masses not to understand and understand the revolutionary significance.
We must pay attention to the fact that the description of natural environment and social environment should serve the description of characters, promote stories and reveal the theme of articles, not the scenery.
3. Who knows, the beauty of winter in the environmental description (this is in the high school textbook) Georges de France, I have never loved winter in the countryside.
I can't understand the tastes of the rich. They regard Paris as a carnival place in the season which is the most unsuitable for holding dances, paying attention to clothes and extravagance in a year. In winter, nature invites us to enjoy family happiness by the fire, and it is in the countryside that we can enjoy the rare bright sunshine this season.
In the big cities of our country, the smell is stinking, and the frozen mud almost never dries, which makes people sick. In rural areas, a piece of sunshine or a few hours of wind can make the air fresh and the ground dry.
Poor urban workers are well aware of this. They were stranded in this dump because of helplessness. The artificial and absurd life that we rich people lead violates the arrangement of nature, and the result is lifeless.
The British are wiser. They went to the country house for the winter. In Paris, people imagine that nature is dead for six months, but wheat begins to sprout in autumn, and the bleak sunshine in winter-as everyone is used to describing it-is the most brilliant in a year.
When the sun clears the clouds and falls in a sparkling purple robe in the winter evening, people can hardly stand its dazzling light. Even in our cold country, which is inappropriately called temperate zone, everything in nature will never get rid of clothes and lose its vitality. The vast wheat fields are covered with bright carpets, and the low sun in the sky casts a jade-like light on them.
The ground is covered with beautiful moss. Gorgeous ivy is painted with bright red and gold stripes like marble.
Primrose, violet and Bengal rose smile under the snow. Due to the ups and downs of the terrain, due to accidental opportunities, there are still a few flowers that have survived the cold, so that you can feel the joy of accidents at any time.
Although the lark disappeared, how many noisy and beautiful birds passed by and rested by the river! The snow on the local ground shines like a bright diamond in the sun, or when the ice hanging on the treetops forms magical arches and indescribable crystal colors, what is more beautiful than snow? In the long night in the country, everyone gathered together affectionately, and even time seemed to be at our disposal. Because people can calm down and think, spiritual life becomes extremely rich.
Isn't it a great pleasure to sit around the fire with your family on such a night? Autumn in the old capital (also in this high school textbook) Author: Yu Dafu Autumn is good everywhere; However, the autumn in the north is particularly clear, quiet and sad. The reason why I have traveled thousands of miles from Hangzhou to Qingdao, and even from Qingdao to Peiping, is to enjoy this "autumn", the autumn flavor of this old capital.
Jiangnan, of course, there is autumn; But the grass is carved slowly, the air is moist, the sky is pale, and it often rains and windy; A person sandwiched between Suzhou, Shanghai, Hangzhou, or Xiamen, Hong Kong and Guangzhou can only feel a little cool. The taste, color, artistic conception and posture of autumn are always insufficient, lacking in taste and enjoyment. Autumn is not a famous flower, nor is it wine. Half-drunk is not suitable for enjoying autumn.
It has been nearly ten years since autumn in the north. Every autumn in the south, I always think of the reed flowers in Taoranting, the willow shadows in Diaoyutai, the insects in Xishan, the jathyapple in Yuquan and the bells in Tanzhe Temple.
Even if you don't go out in Beiping, you can rent a shabby house and live in the sea of people in the imperial city. Get up in the morning, make a bowl of strong tea and sit in the yard, you can see the high blue sky and hear the pigeons flying in the blue sky. From the bottom of Sophora japonica leaves, counting a ray of sunshine leaking to the east, or in the broken waist, facing the blue morning glory like morning glory, you can naturally feel the autumn breath.
When it comes to morning glory, I think blue or white is the best, followed by purple and black, and pink is the lowest. It is best to have a few sparse and slender autumn grasses as a foil at the bottom of the morning glory.
The locust tree in the northland is also an ornament that can remind people of Qiu Lai. Like flowers, but not flowers, they will spread all over the floor in the morning.
When you step on it, there is no sound, no smell, only a little tiny and soft touch. After sweeping the street in the shade, the silk pattern of the broom falling on the dust looks exquisite, leisurely and subconsciously lonely. The ancient dream that the world knows autumn is in these depths.
Qiu Chan's faint lingering sound is a specialty of the north; Because there are trees everywhere in Beiping and the houses are low, you can hear them singing everywhere. In the south, you have to go to the suburbs or mountains to hear it.
Qiu Chan's cries are like crickets and mice in Beiping, and like roundworms that every household keeps at home. There is also autumn rain. The autumn rain in the north seems to be stranger, more delicious and more decent than that in the south.
Under the gloomy sky, a cool breeze suddenly came and it began to rain. It rained a layer, the clouds gradually rolled to the west, the sky turned blue again, and the sun appeared again; Idle people in the city, wearing thick green coats or jackets and biting their pipes, stood in the shade of the inclined bridge after the rain. When they meet acquaintances, they will say to each other with a slow tone and a little sigh, "Oh, it's really cold." This word is pronounced very high and dragged on for a long time.
) "Isn't it? A layer of autumn rain is cold! " Northerners always read array characters like layers of words, which are flat and even. This mispronounced rhyme is just right. Fruit trees in the north are also a miracle for Qiu Lai.
The first is jujube; It will grow up in the corner, on the wall, beside the toilet and at the door of the kitchen. This is the heyday of autumn. Like olives and pigeon eggs, jujube trees show light green and yellow in small oval leaves. Jujube leaves fall, jujube is red, and there will be a northwest wind. Convenience in the north is a dusty world, and only these dates, persimmons and grapes mature until the turn of July and August.
4. How to write a short essay describing the environment, which is the best. Generally, when writing an article about scenery description, we should carefully observe and recall the object being described. If you are describing the scenery of a place, you can describe the weather at that time together. For example, the sky is as blue as washed, reflected on the clear lake, dotted with a few white clouds, and the wind gently blows across the lake, causing ripples. If you really can't remember the place and weather you have been to, you can make up for it with general memory. Environmental description should be lyrical and metaphorical. Even if the weather was really bad at that time, you should write sunny days. Of course, you shouldn't go beyond common sense. Read more lyrical essays or articles describing the environment, and use these metaphors when you come and go. If you use environmental description properly in a composition, you should pay attention to the main theme and atmosphere of your whole article. If your main theme is sad, you can write it in the appropriate place: the sky is low. The wind is blowing, and the leaves on the ground are rolled up to run. The sun is still shining, the birds in the tree are still singing tirelessly, but the sadness in my heart is like a flood. At this time, it is best to describe the environment in the article, such as heavy rain above and sunny weather below. If it is an article describing the scenery, it is necessary to write the general characteristics of the scenery, use appropriate metaphors and combine its historical reasons.
5. The composition has environmental description and detailed description, blue sky, white clouds and crisp autumn. Colorful mountains and golden autumn leaves, these are the autumn scenery in Shan Ye that I saw in the second quarter. Autumn is coming. On a sunny day, that is, on June 4th, 2008, 10, my classmates and I, led by our teacher, bumped along the cement road in the mountains for more than 40 minutes and arrived at our destination-Erduan, a place with beautiful autumn colors. The purpose is to write a good composition about autumn scenery's description and introduction through field observation and experience.
There are beautiful autumn scenery on both sides of the road. Look at that mountain. It's red, pink, green and yellow ... in short, it's colorful. I thought, maybe the Queen Mother knocked over her cosmetic box, scattered all the beautiful colors of autumn on the mountain and put on beautiful clothes for autumn. This is why this autumn is colorful.
On our way, the most famous scenery in autumn is birch trees. Because the trunk is particularly white, birch stands out in the mountains, and you can see it clearly at a glance, just like a little girl in a white skirt looking at the scenery of Shan Ye in autumn. It is graceful, especially clean and beautiful, which makes autumn particularly beautiful. The teacher said that birch is the soul of autumn. Autumn pine trees are also very distinctive and puzzling. You see, they are all pine trees, and they don't shed their leaves all year round. In this cool autumn, it seems that her green needle-like leaves look greener. On the other hand, larch is not. Every piece is the most beautiful time. On the mountain, its pieces are golden, and the leaves that fall on the road and in the pine forest are also golden. I think autumn is golden autumn, perhaps because of golden larch. This kind of scenery is indispensable in beautiful autumn.
The water in autumn is especially cold. There is a river where we just got off the bus. The scenery by the river is very beautiful. We walked down a dirt slope and came to the river. From a distance, the river reflects the reflection of various scenery, including blue sky, white clouds, trees and weeds. That's great. The nearby river reflects the sunlight, which is white and particularly dazzling; Look at the bottom of the water, especially clear. The sun shines through the sand, and there is a "golden fishing net" on the sand. On our way back, there was a place with more beautiful scenery. In autumn, a big lake appeared in Shan Ye, shining in the sun, just like a big mirror, dressing up beautiful scenery in autumn.
Until we returned to the city, those autumn scenery, mountains, water, trees and clouds came to my mind and made me unforgettable for a long time.
6. How to write a good environmental description in the composition strategy The environmental description in the composition refers to the description of the specific social environment and natural environment in which the characters are located.
People always live in a certain environment, so the formation of an old friend's character is closely related to his environment. Writing a good description of the environment is of great help to express the character, render the atmosphere and highlight the theme of the article. The junior high school stage is more described by the natural environment, and the social environment is less involved.
This paper will elaborate the description of natural environment in narrative writing, hoping to help everyone. Because all environments serve the theme of the article, it should be noted that the description of the environment is not the main body of the article when writing the environment.
In other words, there are not necessarily many words describing the natural environment in a composition, but they should be "appropriate". The so-called "appropriateness" means that the natural environment described in the article must have certain internal relations with the events described in it, or it can play a role in setting off and highlighting the emotions, themes or characters it wants to express.
In view of how to achieve "decency", the following two ideas are given for reference only. 1. Local contrast means that when describing the natural environment in a composition, you can use the natural environment to contrast the spiritual quality of the characters or the theme and emotion of the article in any part, thus improving the character of the article.
Using the method of local contrast, the description of the scenery does not need too many words, but should be "precise" and "decent". There may be only one description of the scenery somewhere, but it is this sentence that improves the overall quality of this composition.
For example, a classmate went back to his hometown in the countryside to visit relatives in the summer vacation, witnessed the feudal custom of changing relatives between brothers and sisters, and wrote an essay on "Visiting relatives". At the end of the article, he wrote: "I was on my way back to the city the next morning." It was so quiet when I left the mountain village. When I walked through the small trees of my childhood, I couldn't help looking back: the mountain village is foggy, and people haven't woken up from their dreams. "
The author describes the vast fog in the mountain village, suggesting that people in the mountain village have not woken up from their dreams, that is, they have not lost their feudal customs, so the main idea of the article has been sublimated. Using the "local contrast method", it should be noted that we must decide what kind of scenery to describe according to the purpose of describing the natural environment, and find the relationship between the scenery and the achieved purpose.
If you want to express a character's character, you can use warm spring breeze to set off "warmth" and "tenderness", and use all kinds of pure and beautiful scenery to set off the noble quality of the character ... This kind of brushwork can make the article not only stay at the narrative level, but also have a spiritual sublimation; If you want to express the theme of the family, you can use bright sunshine to symbolize and highlight the warmth and warmth brought by the family; If you want to highlight the nostalgic theme, you can describe autumn scenery appropriately; If you want to play up the tension, you can thunder and lightning; If you want to express your sadness, it can rain all the time ... This correspondence can be accumulated when students usually read excellent compositions. 2. Overall Contrast The so-called "overall contrast method" refers to the description of the natural environment in the composition, which sets the emotional tone of the full text as a whole, or sets the atmosphere in which the story takes place, or participates in the development of the whole story as an important factor.
There are two common situations: first, the description of the same environment is placed at the beginning of the article as a foil to a certain atmosphere, which is still mentioned from time to time in the following narrative. This kind of environmental description usually sets the emotional atmosphere of the full text or explains the background of the whole story.
For example, a perfect composition "competition" highlights the bravery of "I" as a competition between class cadres and students who play pranks in the class. At the beginning of the article, lightning and thunder are written, and there are not many environmental descriptions, but it sets a tense environmental atmosphere for the whole article. Second, one or two environmental descriptions run through the whole paper.
In this case, the beginning must be related to the description of the environment, forming the beginning of the clue, and then all paragraphs or key paragraphs should be written in this or these environments, and the text can be long or short, and the position can be at the beginning or end of the paragraph, which will make people impressed by this natural environment. Specifically, it can be divided into two situations. First, the changes in the natural environment during the development of the article. For example, if some articles want to write something from bad to good, they will describe the environment after the rain clears. At first, the rain is still raining, and then the rain gradually decreases and the end becomes clear.
Second, a certain natural environment appears repeatedly in the text, but the natural environment itself has not changed much, just bearing some emotion or theme. For example, an essay "Cohesion" got a perfect score in Beijing senior high school entrance examination, in which "sunshine" appeared repeatedly as an environmental description, but the content changed little, because sunshine carried the same "affection".