Writing composition teaching records with onomatopoeic words
Just now, the sun was baking the asphalt road, even the air was hot, and people were everywhere. Too thirsty! " Sound, one foot on the asphalt road, will print shallow footprints. A drop of sweat fell to the ground, just like sprinkling it on a hungry and hot stove, turned into white smoke with a "zi" and suddenly disappeared.
After a while, a strong wind blew, and the wind whined and the leaves rustled. Some branches are broken.
The sky suddenly darkened. Raindrops the size of beans crackled on the window.
Lightning doesn't like the human world It "splits" the boundless sky with hundreds of millions of loads of current, as if cutting a dark waterfall. Tripterygium wilfordii didn't like the world, and he flew into a rage and launched a "rumble" sound that resounded through the sky. After the shower, everything was calm again.
In the street, the noise of people "jabbering"; Birds are chirping on the branches. It's really lively! Oh, this is a natural play, a wonderful play.
2. Write a composition with several onomatopoeia words through the narration of one thing and the description of a scene. Dog days, children's faces, the weather will change.
Just now, the sun was baking the asphalt road, even the air was hot, and people were everywhere. Too thirsty! " Sound, one foot on the asphalt road, will print shallow footprints. A drop of sweat fell to the ground, just like sprinkling it on a hungry and hot stove, turned into white smoke with a "zi" and suddenly disappeared.
After a while, a strong wind blew, and the wind whined and the leaves rustled. Some branches are broken.
The sky suddenly darkened. Raindrops the size of beans crackled on the window.
Lightning doesn't like the human world It "splits" the boundless sky with hundreds of millions of loads of current, as if cutting a dark waterfall. Tripterygium wilfordii didn't like the world, and he flew into a rage and launched a "rumble" sound that resounded through the sky. After the shower, everything was calm again.
In the street, the noise of people "jabbering"; Birds are chirping on the branches. It's really lively! Oh, this is a natural play, a wonderful play.
Write a composition with onomatopoeia like this, the blacksmith symphony.
His father put a piece of iron in the stove and Pockmarked Qiu pulled the bellows. "Whoosh, whoosh ..." The iron burned red, and my father took it out with pliers and put it on the chopping block. His father stung with a small hammer, so he hit his father's lighter place with a sledgehammer. "Ding-dong, Ding-dong." When an iron product is about to take shape, there is no need for a sledgehammer. His father only tapped a few times on the front and back of a small hammer, "Ding, Ding, Ding, Ding". "Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin.
Chinese small class: In the first essay, Zhu Zhishan used "thud" to describe the gong sound, and compared it with Xu Zijian's "thud" drum sound, which not only made Xu Zijian admire, but also made us admire. The second essay "Ding-dong, Ding-dong, Ding-dong", although we can't see it with our own eyes, we can hear its voice from our personal experience and then associate it with the image. From the string of notes composed of screaming and jingling, I really "saw" the whole process of making an iron work by my father and son.
4. Write a composition with the onomatopoeic word "Gaga Ga"
"haw!"
"cicadas! Know! "
Early in the morning, who is so noisy? I opened my eyes, and a ray of golden sunshine shone through the window. On the morning of summer vacation, the duckling raised by my neighbor Lele, the bird of Hu Xian and the cicada in the tree formed a hot and different symphony, which drove me out of bed.
I turned on the tap and the water sprayed out. I brushed my teeth, wiped my face with a towel, and then started doing my homework. I took out my pen with a click, wrote with a rustle, and soon finished my homework. I snapped the pen back into the pen holder and turned on the computer to play QQ. As soon as I logged in, my friend's head popped up. It turned out that a friend came to talk to me. I was afraid of waking my sleeping father, so I connected the earphone and put it on my ear. After a while, there was a whoosh and a hum. I thought my mother got up and came out to drink water! I ran out to have a look, no one? I opened QQ again. It's my QQ pet that comes to the interface with a whoosh. It's hungry and growling. When I gave it a bowl of noodles, it ate all the noodles with a brush, swished the soup and finally burped and went to bed.
After a while, I posted my cartoons on the video network. As soon as I got online, I heard the sound of "Ding Dong". Did grandma ring the doorbell outside the door? I went out to see the cat's eye. Is anyone here? I'll look around, oh! It was that video network that sent me the news. ...
"Ah-oh-hmm" Dad woke up and yawned. He dumped the quilt, plopped out of bed, put on slippers and went to the bathroom to brush his teeth.
" $% water $ # @？" What's dad talking about? I didn't understand it after listening for a long time. It turned out that he was sleepy and asked me if I had drunk water in Hakka dialect that I didn't understand. Hehe, what a fool!
"Hee hee hee! Ha ha ha! " We fought and laughed, and laughter rippled in the room.
5. The composition with onomatopoeia is not a quiet class. The summer sky is really changing. Just now, the sky was clear in Wan Li, and in a blink of an eye, it was overcast and dark.
With the arrival of lightning, the thunder gradually spread. Whenever lightning passes by, I always hear thunder in the distance-rumbling, rumbling-first, I hear it make a low, dull sound, and gradually, gradually.
Become louder from far and near. It roared in the sky like a thousand knights, and chanted in the clouds like a thousand drunken poets. The Emperor of Heaven seems to be losing his temper and yelling at the world! The whole world is full of "the cry of the Emperor of Heaven", which is surprisingly loud and daunting, coming intermittently from all directions.
Although thunder is not as clear as rain, it has its own partner, that is lightning. Although lightning dances rough and crazy, it is not as beautiful as a dancer.
However, it is worth mentioning that this is a dance step of nature and we have to admire it. Then, the rainstorm followed, and the thunderstorm rumbled and rushed ... The sound was very pleasant.
It's like a musician from nature playing a symphony with a metal theme. It seems that the emperor of heaven is crying sadly, and there is a roar of pain from time to time.
At this time, lightning jumps more happily and better. This is really a free music festival, the sound of nature.
I don't know when the thunderstorm stopped quietly. Lightning was tired and stopped dancing, so a concert was over.
I only heard the sound of car horns-flute-flute-flute from time to time on the expressway, which seemed to be the aftertaste of the concert.
6. How to write a composition with onomatopoeia? Hehe, write it yourself.
I have some here for your reference. On rainy days, children's faces change with the weather. Just now, the sun was baking the asphalt road, even the air was hot, and people were everywhere. Too thirsty! " Sound, one foot on the asphalt road, will print shallow footprints.
A drop of sweat fell to the ground, just like sprinkling it on a hungry and hot stove, turned into white smoke with a "zi" and suddenly disappeared. After a while, a strong wind blew, and the wind whined and the leaves rustled.
Some branches are broken. The sky suddenly darkened.
Raindrops the size of beans crackled on the window. Lightning doesn't like the human world It "splits" the boundless sky with hundreds of millions of loads of current, as if cutting a dark waterfall. Tripterygium wilfordii didn't like the world, and he flew into a rage and launched a "rumble" sound that resounded through the sky.
After the shower, everything was calm again. In the street, the noise of people "jabbering"; Birds are chirping on the branches.
It's really lively! Oh, this is a natural play, a wonderful play! Smith's Symphony His father put a piece of iron in the stove and pockmarked face pulled the bellows. "Whoosh, whoosh ..." The iron burned red, and my father took it out with pliers and put it on the chopping block.
His father stung with a small hammer, so he hit his father's lighter place with a sledgehammer. "Ding-dong, Ding-dong."
When an iron product is about to take shape, there is no need for a sledgehammer. His father only tapped a few times on the front and back of a small hammer, "Ding, Ding, Ding, Ding". "Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin Tintin.
Chinese small class: In the first essay, Zhu Zhishan used "thud" to describe the gong sound, and compared it with Xu Zijian's "thud" drum sound, which not only made Xu Zijian admire, but also made us admire. The second essay "Ding-dong, Ding-dong, Ding-dong", although we can't see it with our own eyes, we can hear its voice from our personal experience and then associate it with the image.
From the string of notes composed of screaming and jingling, I really "saw" the whole process of making an iron work by my father and son. For reference only.
7. Write a composition with onomatopoeia. In the morning, Wan Li is sunny and Wan Li is clear.
The chirping birds outside the window woke me up from my dream with beautiful songs. I quickly got dressed and went to the kitchen.
The whole room was quiet, except for the sound of dad cooking. I finished eating and walked on my way to school. The leaves under my feet rustle. I drummed up the stairs and came to the classroom panting.
There was silence in the classroom, and the students were reading quietly. I accidentally "wow" and the book fell to the ground. My classmates looked at me in surprise. My face turned red and tears flowed down. The teacher is coming! I don't know who shouted, but the students all fell back and I stopped crying.
"Stand up," Du Shu Jing shouted. The student stood up with a swish.
The class "Ding" is finally over. The students walked out of the classroom and came to the football field.
A goal of the blue team was blocked by the goalkeeper, who smiled. The red team took advantage of the goalkeeper's inattention and whistled the ball in.
The goalkeeper showed a lost expression and the red team cheered loudly. Ding! The bell rang and the students hurried into the classroom. This is a Chinese class. Soon, the voice of reading sounded in the classroom ... my day was really full.
8. Write a composition "Haw!" with the onomatopoeic word "Ga Ga Ga" "cicadas! Know! " Early in the morning, who is so noisy? I opened my eyes, and a ray of golden sunshine shone through the window. On the morning of summer vacation, the duckling raised by my neighbor Lele, the bird of Hu Xian and the cicada in the tree formed a hot and different symphony, which drove me out of bed.
I turned on the tap and the water sprayed out. I brushed my teeth, wiped my face with a towel, and then started doing my homework. I took out my pen with a click, wrote with a rustle, and soon finished my homework.
I snapped the pen back into the pen holder and turned on the computer to play QQ. As soon as I logged in, my friend's head popped up. It turned out that a friend came to talk to me. I was afraid of waking my sleeping father, so I connected the earphone and put it on my ear. After a while, there was a whoosh and a hum. I thought my mother got up and came out to drink water! I ran out to have a look, no one? I opened QQ again. It's my QQ pet that comes to the interface with a whoosh. It's hungry and growling. When I gave it a bowl of noodles, it ate all the noodles with a brush, swished the soup and finally burped and went to bed.
After a while, I posted my cartoons on the video network. As soon as I got online, I heard the sound of "Ding Dong". Did grandma ring the doorbell outside the door? I went out to see the cat's eye. Is anyone here? I'll look around, oh! The original E799BE5BAA6E4B893E5B19E313336393663 came from that video network ... "Ah-oh-hmm" Dad woke up and yawned. He dumped the quilt, plopped out of bed, put on slippers and went to the bathroom to brush his teeth. " $% water $ # @？" What's dad talking about? I didn't understand it after listening for a long time. It turned out that he was sleepy and asked me if I had drunk water in Hakka dialect that I didn't understand. Hehe, what a fool! "Hee hee hee! Ha ha ha! " We fought and laughed, and laughter rippled in the room.