Begonia Society 543 | Rhythm _ Works and Comments After Last Autumn
0 1? Julia
Qiyun The last part is good (new rhyme)
A thin leaf of a tree was cut off, and it wrote glory and sorrow to the water.
After several bitter and hot experiences, I can go at any time, and how cool it is when I dream.
When you get old, you are not old. It is better to guess the world than to guess.
Tan Lang said "good autumn" to me: watercress bass has four cheeks.
02? Chengyu Zhang
Seven laws? A final/third blessing
Flowers bloom, flowers grow old, flowers grow old, and green willows sit in a bitter cicada.
If you are too rich and humble, don't be indifferent and incomplete.
The beauty of the third spring is cool, and the name of the first life is ups and downs.
It is nothing more than talking about what happened in the world many years later and many years ago.
03? Gui xiangzuo
Five laws. Last volt
On the lonely Qingjiang River, business travel extends in all directions.
The tiger is proud at dusk and the sun is scattered at sunrise.
Comment on the changes in temperature day and night, and talk about the shortcomings in spring and autumn.
Worries are overwhelming on the earth, and the heat in summer increases the coolness.
04? Xiao shengqiu begonia
After the end of Lv Qi water town,
Morning dew invites summer to accompany autumn, cicadas sing rain.
Lush in Xu Niang rhyme, red leaves on Egret Island.
At the bottom of the pen, I thought about crossing Cheng Hongyan, but I was ashamed to get drunk in front of the bottle.
Thinking about the sunny haze, I asked Gao Xianyi to travel.
05? Yundong
Seven laws, late autumn.
At the beginning and end of Sanqiu, the wind blows the guests' heads.
It's cold and shallow in the morning and evening, rinspeed.
The weather is fine, the snow smells good, and the smog in jathyapple is hidden.
I deeply admire Liao's ethereal water, which ripples like bright eyes.
(Note: Yin Ke, tiger, here refers to autumn tiger)
06? Jiang Ziya
Seven methods/Thoughts on swimming in Lvwan Lake after last autumn
The first dyed maple forest is light red, and Wanshan is green and thin.
The wind helps the sail shadow chase the yellow leaves, and the fog locks the smoke and dreams of the blue sky.
Summer retreats and autumn delays, and love is painting.
The soul attracts the tourists on the shore of Liuan, and when fishing for the moon thief, it will be poor.
07? ice and snow
Seven Laws and Thoughts on Traveling to Tang Xi Ancient Town after Last Autumn
The heat in Xitang is still there, and the lonely city is gradually entering autumn.
Clouds hang in the sky in the four fields, and the wind and water in the half lake are still.
It's hard to enjoy the scenery at leisure, but it's hard to see the end of the mountain alone.
Homesickness is falling in the yellow leaves, and a river is concerned.
08? High point and scattered people
Five laws. The last verse (new rhyme)
The fire went west and the white forehead glared.
When the wind stops cooking, insects will make peace.
The wilderness lacks a clear smell, and the building is full of classics.
The autumn blade rises and the beam breaks.
09? Chang' an laoren
Five laws. What you have seen since the last years of Chen Fu (new rhyme)
The grass stays in the rain for three days, and the dew hangs loose.
Hanging in the south of the mountain, the lotus pond is running out.
No one talks about drinking, but I just want to ask when I open the window.
Fortunately, I'm here to observe the phenology to tell the autumn time.
10? Yajuan
early autumn
In August, the summer heat disappears, and the golden wind and dew are cool.
The leaves of the phoenix tree are shocking the cold birds, and the osmanthus fragrance is beautiful.
I look for leisure in autumn water and often have fun in front of chrysanthemums.
The mountains are picturesque, and you are still intoxicated and happy.
1 1? Xizhuqing
Take the second-floor bus after the five laws.
It's a good place to get clouds, and it's empty.
The river is divided into north and south, but it doesn't flow west and east.
Get drunk and marvel at the old man.
A breeze awakened my dusty dream.
12? Chisel ice and fish.
Seven laws? Qiuqing
It rains in Chu Qing in August, and the scenery is interesting in the evening.
At dusk, the morning glow is cool and the summer heat is cool, and the wind blows the leaves of the trees and moves the autumn sound.
You can swim slowly, and the grass is cool and bright.
Beautiful mountains and rivers are harmonious and quiet, and the vast world is full of joy and glory.
13? Affection also
Five laws? The last feeling
The wind blew in the west, and Chen Xiao became too ignorant.
Willow is at the end of ginseng, and autumn water is red.
The summer heat is gone, and heaven and man bow.
Listening to laughter, staring at the sky.
15? Dharma Zheng Hong
Beginning of autumn's five laws of pregnancy.
Stratosphere clouds push the high temperature in summer and block the sun.
Flowers make the west wind old, and grass makes the rain long.
If you can't be strong, you can still feed the cattle and sheep.
You can't teach Qiu Hu crazy by using Delich horse.
16? every day
Seven laws? Houfu
The end of summer is over, there is no heat, and flies are proud of cicadas.
Fruit young rain cool green branches, strange Ma Feng crazy blue sky.
Don't wait until you are drunk, just as turbid wine is rich in autumn.
Time flies every year and the years are long.
17? Heaven/God knows
Wu Yuan (Yun Xin)
Get wet in the rain, through to the middle yuan.
Black birds sound suspicious, Shan Ye breath swallowed.
Huang Ju is also a willow tree, and its career has been newly burned.
Even so, how can human feelings be compared?
Gaotianping branch
The title of this assignment is "After the Last Accommodation". You can start at will on the premise of feeling the last stay. In fact, this topic is extremely extensive. Just point out the last part, and you can basically write casually. Basically, there is no digression. You can feel things, express your feelings or write the last part alone. However, it is not easy to really write this question well. How to combine scenery lyricism with "the last stage" is the key to writing a good work. Unfortunately, most of the works failed to shine, or were lyrical, leaving The Last Stage.
This article has the same problem, and it is not integrated enough with the "final stage". Aside from the topic, actually writing the topic "Autumn" has nothing to do with "The Last Stage".
① The first couplet of Butterfly of Zhuang is inconsistent with the whole poem.
(2) The neckline is weak and cannot be unfolded, which is repeated with the meaning of late cooling and new cooling. It is suggested to modify it.
(3) The end couplet is new and the dialogue is plain.
Zhang Chengyu's comments
Good law.
The first couplet is a solid start, and the last autumn and early autumn put the season into practice. Zhuan Xu workers' sincerity, the difference in the heat and the attitude of wandering and sitting are all in the words.
Couplets are both clever and clever, and it is rare to have a single leaf.
The end of couplets is endless, I don't know who to leave, I don't know who to leave, and I have endless aftertaste.
20? China Piaoxiang
Seven laws? After last autumn,
It's not yet time to sing cicadas in the tree, and it's already cool for teenagers to promote their knitting.
Village girls dare not look for lang, and mosquito wings are fluttering and hiding.
I feel sweaty in the field in the afternoon and smell the flowers on the other side at night.
As time goes by, Man Cang harvests in August and autumn.
2 1? Gaotian
Seven laws. Self-scheduling at the end
Maybe birds of a feather flock together, or maybe there are joys and sorrows between heaven and earth.
The eyes are green and red for half a season, and the wind in July refers to security.
A glass of wine is unbearable, and my heart has gone from the depths of my brow.
It's not a waste of time for cicadas to sing in the end, but Qiu Lai can throw a few shots.
Friendly participation
0 1/ high day
Six laws. Pregnant when it rained on the last day.
This day will be indiscriminate, who will connect the prosperous season?
The high platform faces Qingpu alone, and the drizzle is empty and fat.
Two glasses and three glasses of light wine, Qianshan.
The south wind is reluctant, but it sends the old people to the end of the world.
God knows
The last feeling
A cold toad is like a jade cup. The harsher it is, the harsher it is.
The timing is not based on the decline of the grass, and the road of life is full of shame.
It's only a little cold in the middle of the night, and a snack is messy.
I'm afraid there are geese in the autumn mountain who want to travel south in the picturesque maple forest.