Ask for comments 10 composition for the senior high school entrance examination.
-"A New Biography of Dong Shi"
I went down in history with an ugly name. But for thousands of years, I have been depressed and unhappy!
It is said that from that day on, I was laughed at by the people at that time after learning from the sad face of the beautiful girl next door, Shi, who was ill with a heart, and created an idiom for me, so I stayed at home all day. (However, although I don't think about tea and rice, I haven't lost weight. I don't understand that when Shi is sick like that, smelly men are my heroic feelings of pity, sympathy and masculinity. As for me, I just studied and imitated it. Why does it cause so much dissatisfaction and irony? I know, because I have a Zhang Chou face, so depressed! I can't help blaming my parents' carelessness and God's injustice. God must have been distracted when he created me, otherwise my five senses would be so rough and dislocated!
I must settle accounts with God! Strong thoughts occupied my mind, and I decided to go to God at all costs to find out what I had lost!
After waiting for thousands of years, I finally got on the Shenzhou-10 manned spaceship and flew to God's "Happy Palace". God's home is not ordinary beauty, it is difficult to describe it in words! Although I was jealous, I didn't want to stay long, so I went directly to the Blissful Hall. Hey, who is that old man sitting in the garden with his eyes closed? , is god! So, I got dressed, stepped forward, coughed and said, "Lord, you are at ease!" " Why not go to the folk to observe the sufferings? I, Dong Shi, grew up like this because of your negligence, and suffered people's eyes and ridicule. You must make a decision for me! "When I said this, I couldn't help feeling sad, and my skirt was wet with tears. God opened his eyes, smiled at me and listened to me. After I got my chest out, he said slowly, "My poor child, you have been living in everyone's eyes for so many years. You lost yourself and woven a cage of self-restraint. You have never found your own strengths and highlights in yourself! "Then, God said slowly," Everything is born in the world and has its own value. You see, in this garden, grass is not as beautiful as flowers, but without grass, the beauty of flowers is not outstanding. What about you, don't imitate others, don't envy others, hurry out of this small world of self, find your own strengths and advantages, help others and serve the world, and you will reap the love and respect that people deserve! " Say that finish, god waved his sleeves and closed his eyes.
After listening to God's words, I froze there. ...
After I came back from God, I reflected on myself and examined myself. I have a strong body and enough strength, so I have finished my work in my field and can help my neighbor Li Nainai's family. My voice is very tactful. When I sing, I not only make myself happy, but also give the working people a happy enjoyment. Ah, I also stepped onto the stage of the Avenue of Stars. I, with bright eyes, have made embroidery and embroidery that can attract butterflies to fly, and I have been shortlisted for international awards. ...
Haha, I always smile. I walked out of my little world and accepted various media interviews. I am no longer synonymous with ugliness. I am the embodiment of personality and the representative of women in the new era.
On this day, I received a greeting card from heaven: "You are my baby-a gift from an angel, congratulations!" " "
Comments by famous teachers:
After reading this masterpiece in the examination room, people can't help laughing, but also hide their own ideas, which is worth tasting.
This composition adopts a new story writing method to express the theme, which is a bold innovation and a success for young authors. Based on the well-known story of "Dong Shi's effect", this paper weaves the story of Dong Shi's distress and anger because of his ugly appearance, which makes him want to ask God questions, and then be inspired by God to reflect on himself, get out of the small world of self-restraint, realize the value of life, and vividly expound the theme connotation to be expressed. The little author travels through time and space, imagining strangely, and the story application is not limited to the old model (the image of God is not sacred but full of human feelings); The little author is good at spreading stories, trying to render Dong Shi's distress and grievances, and preparing for the following plot changes. Articles such as "Original", "Beautiful Girl" and "Shenzhou 10" are humorous and vivid, with the characteristics of the times.
Comments on the 2009 senior high school entrance examination in Anhui Province and model essay: Between teachers and students, my mother divorced my father soon after giving birth to me. After mom left, dad also went out to work. I can only live at grandma's house. Therefore, apart from grandma's love, my teachers impressed me the most in my life. They not only taught me knowledge, but also cared about my life and my mood, and taught me the truth of being a man.
Take last year for example. I had an unforgettable event with the teacher who taught our Chinese class.
Her surname is Yu. She has a pair of very bright big eyes, black and clear eyes. That day, after class, all her classmates went to the multimedia room to take pictures. Everyone crowded in front. I can't squeeze them. I retreated to the door and turned to see Miss Yu standing in the corridor. I walked up with a smile, and she smiled back and dragged me to her office to chat.
I remember clearly that I not only talked to her about my family and recent studies, but also talked to me about her childhood and encouraged me.
She said: "When I was a child, my family was not rich. My father works in a mine, and the whole family depends on him. He is the pillar of our family. Unexpectedly, an accident happened later, and my father, uncle and more than 200 of their workers all died underground. I was in junior high school at that time. What do you think will happen if I hear the news? I always shed tears in the first few months. Later, I became more sensible, more thrifty, and studied harder, because I knew that I was different from other students. I often studied late into the night in a dark and humid cabin ... "
"Did you go to college?" I asked eagerly.
She smiled and said softly, "If I didn't pass the exam, how can I be your teacher today?"
Only then did I know that my question was naive, so I rubbed my hands and listened to Teacher Yu's story.
"Later, I graduated from college and found an object, that is, Qi, the teacher who taught you mathematics. But I have been married for more than three years and have no children. " Teacher Yu sighed with a frown.
"Did you see a doctor?" I asked softly.
"See. I was sick in high school, and the doctor said it was a cold. "
I looked at her, held her hand and said to her, "Miss Yu, I want to be your daughter. Do you think so? "
Teacher Yu said happily to me, "Well, this is our secret." I was very happy that day. I walked out of the teacher's office and rushed into my classmates.
In the next half semester, I listened to her class more attentively. Teacher Yu really treats me like a daughter, and her warm messages are often in the composition book. Soon, who knows that the secret leaked out, and it was none other than Teacher Yu who leaked the news. It was her birthday, and she told me herself. I drew her a picture symbolizing happiness, and wrote a blessing poem by myself. I can see that she is very happy. Just after class, she smiled and said loudly to the whole class, "I will be a mother to reward whoever has a birthday next week."
Later, when my birthday came, she bought me a set of study tools and a dictionary. How thoughtful of her. I don't know where she learned about my birthday. Coincidentally, not only myself but also three classmates celebrated my birthday that week. Naturally, Teacher Yu bought them the same gift. Teacher Yu won't treat them as her own children, will she? I thought about it for a long time afterwards and seemed a little jealous. But the kindness and kindness of the teacher still moved me for a long time.
short review
This paper has its own characteristics in writing methods. First of all, the beginning is enough to produce an attractive reading power. Secondly, the content of the article is touching. Although the selected materials are trivial things in life, the little author seems to enjoy it. The language of the article is also very simple. Reading this article is like listening to the little author talking aside, quietly telling the mysterious past, which sounds like a voice. Three banks? Running water? bold and unrestrained
I love the dancing energy of "flying arrows, if the waves beat on the shore", which drives my young and upward mind;
I miss the homesickness of the wanderers living on the small bridge, touching my young thoughts and plucking the homesickness strings in my heart;
I realized that the silence of "sunrise is like fire, spring is like a blue river" caressed my young and arrogant thoughts and gave me a calm mind.
Standing on the high mountain, I miss running water. The water on the mountain, called waterfall, is as majestic as a roaring lion; The water on the plain is called river, like a dancing dragon, graceful; The water in the desert, called oasis, is like the ribbon of fate, which contains miracles.
Comments: the idea is "fine" and the idea is "new". This paper is ingenious, putting three seemingly unrelated things on the "shore"? Running water? Bold and unrestrained ",Lenovo is just right, which shows the author's positive thinking about the value of life. In particular, the theme at the end is clear and the charm is endless, which makes readers feel the philosophy and connotation of life and inspires people to forge ahead. Judging from the content of the article, we can't say that the little author has been thinking for eight years and his writing has been barren for eight years, but we can see his overflowing literary thoughts and unique feelings; From the perspective of language expression, it can be seen that this young author loves reading, is diligent in thinking, has rich savings and can be found at any time when needed. Prose-like language and rich associations give people beautiful enjoyment.
Say goodbye to junior high school life.
The day after tomorrow, I will leave this building where I have been together for three years and leave my junior high school life.
On the last day before the middle school entrance examination, everyone's heart was in chaos, and no one was interested in learning. Some students moved their books home in advance, and we exchanged ideas and made out. I remember three years ago, leaving messages to each other and saying goodbye to six years of primary school. Although I simply wrote a few words and didn't say "goodbye", I really didn't meet again. Today, three years later, when everything happened as it was, everyone was wondering whether we would never meet again like that farewell three years ago.
Comments by famous teachers
Nostalgia, innocence and sophistication.
The title of the article is "Farewell to Junior High School Life", but it is not limited to the farewell ceremony. Instead, I deeply recalled the dribs and drabs that happened with readers in the past three years, focusing on the summary memories in the third paragraph. In fact, this is one of the techniques commonly used in realistic reminiscence prose, and more importantly, it is lyrical to express the nostalgia and unforgettable experience of junior high school life.
The article shows readers the true thoughts of a naive girl, and her growth process is clearly displayed in front of people, which makes us feel valuable and worth cherishing. The article is mature again. It is not difficult to see from the last three paragraphs that the author is very sophisticated in language use and has a solid basic skills. So this is also a good examination composition.
Five Sidelights of Life on and off Campus
In the early morning, when I saw a red sun rising slowly, I couldn't help hearing a voice in my heart: Isn't this just a call? Yes! I am the rising sun-
This reminds me of several scenes on campus.
As a student, my main task is to study, which requires us to listen carefully in class. One day, the teacher came in and announced the content of this class. The students are obviously interested in this. As soon as the teacher asked questions, the students scrambled. Even before the teacher nominated them, the first few students talked about their ideas below. Although the scene was a bit chaotic, it soon became quiet-waiting. The students are very active, which makes the teacher very happy.
[Comment] "We are the rising sun", which means that as middle school students, our life is full of vitality and enthusiasm. In this paper, the author collected several fragments from his study and daily life, and tried to express this theme, which he did. At the end of the article, the lyricism and discussion made by the author in the form of reflection perfected the idea of the article and showed the psychology of "Rising Sun" looking forward to growth and maturity. (Ruan Shengzhen, Language Teaching and Research Fellow, Luwan Teachers College)
6. Visit the North Sea in early spring.
On the afternoon of March 28th, I came to Beihai Park.
As soon as I entered the park gate, the first thing I jumped into my eyes was Qiongdao, surrounded by green lakes. There stands a tall and beautiful white tower on the island.
With joy, I walked quickly to Baita with three or five groups of tourists. Pass through Zhengjue Hall and bypass Pu An Hall; I left a tree and I stepped on the steps. Soon reached the peak of Qiongdao-Baita.
Standing under the newly decorated white tower, bathed in the warm sunshine in early spring, I feel relaxed and happy in the face of the humid and pleasant spring breeze. Looking around, I saw that all the willows in the park spit out their buds, and all the willow branches danced with the warm spring breeze; Pines and cypresses are sometimes laughed and whispered by the slow spring breeze, pink wild peaches are full of flowers, delicate yellow winter jasmine is in full bloom, and magnolia is in bud; A burst of flowers is refreshing, and a tree of flowers adds a lot of poetry and painting to Beihai in early spring. From a distance, the magnificent Forbidden City complex, the magnificent Tiananmen Square, the tall and brand-new buildings and the jade belt-like roads are all vivid.
[brief comment]
This article is mainly about the narrative of scenery and travel.
As soon as I entered the park gate, I saw a tall and beautiful white tower. I couldn't restrain my joy and soon reached the bottom of the white tower. Looking around, the author described the scenery near and far, and the rich associations arising from it. Then, after going down the mountain, I enjoyed the beautiful and charming scenery of the North Sea in early spring along the lake, and also described the Nine Dragons Wall. Finally, I wrote that the sun went down and bid farewell to Beihai Park. The author arranges the materials and the destination of the trip in chronological order. Appropriate details, lyricism, narration and description. In particular, the author is good at using description, which is not only rich in vocabulary, but also vivid and full of aesthetic feeling. Senior high school entrance examination composition 7 full marks "moved"
When turning over the book, a ginkgo leaf slipped quietly. I bent down and picked it up. I was shocked to find that this was given to me by my deskmate when I graduated from junior high school. On the back, it says, "Take care, friend!" "I don't remember whether there was an impulse to cry at that time, but now there are tears on the yellow leaves. Come to think of it, there is still a kind of mood in this world called moving.
For a long time, I seem to have forgotten the feeling of being moved. Is my heart cold, or is it filled with something irrelevant?
A friend once wrote me this sentence: "The reason why we passed each other was not because we missed each other, but because there were two words missing in our lives-moving." Indeed, our hearts are no longer sensitive, and we no longer carefully collect the slightest touches around us. Only when I missed it and looked back, did I find that I really lost a lot.
There are always people who complain that there are fewer and fewer touching things in this world. However, as long as we calm down and think about it, you will find that touch is everywhere.
Tired of reading, my parents peeled an apple for us, which was touching; When you are thirsty, your friend will bring you a glass of water, which is touching; When you are depressed, it is touching to get a comforting word; When you are happy, it is touching to have friends to share your happiness with you; On an ordinary day, it is touching to receive a small blessing, even if it is only a petal or a leaf. ...
Be moved by happiness
There is a feeling called happiness, and there is a kind of happiness called moving. And I am a lucky girl who will enjoy this happiness.
It snowed heavily that winter. The night before New Year's Eve, I lay by the window watching the snow. The light is full of flying snowflakes, as if unable to restrain joy. When the Spring Festival comes, the continuous firecrackers are full of warm atmosphere. Everything seems to be reflected in the background of orange light, including a few silver hairs faintly visible in parents' hair, shining in the painting on this winter night.
I will never forget how my parents raised me. They watered me with simplicity and kindness, let wisdom and enthusiasm permeate me, and let my little flowers thrive happily. I can't remember how many times I fell. My parents cheered me up with encouraging eyes and kind smiles and made me stand up again. I can't forget how many nights I reviewed my lessons under the lamp, and my parents sat under the lamp and silently accompanied me late at night-I can't remember how many little things were full of my parents' love, and I can't forget how many parents cared as much as the sun.
Suddenly, I felt that the light was full of love, and my face was unconsciously wet in the dancing of snowflakes. Looking at this quiet night scene, I suddenly felt very moved and felt that I should do something for it. The next day, I wanted to surprise my parents.
I got up quietly at first light the next day. It snowed like goose feather all night, making the earth bright, even the sunshine outside the window was so dazzling. I quickly pushed open the door, pushed open the door, and I froze. A snow doll stood in front of my house with a playful look, a big red hat on her head, waving a "big hand" and smiling sweetly. With a snort, I couldn't help laughing. "Happy New Year!" Two people came out from behind the snow doll. So it's mom and dad. They looked at me tenderly. My nose is suddenly sour, and tears can't help flowing down. I want to give my parents a-
I didn't expect them-I was speechless in the face of my parents' smiles. In that snow, I dragged my parents and looked at them affectionately for a long time-
I remember a poet saying, "How can I thank you? When I walk towards you, I want to reap a spring breeze, but how can I thank you for giving me the whole spring? When I came to you, I wanted to hold a handful of waves, but you gave me the whole ocean. "Yes, how can I thank you, Mom and Dad? You gave me life, you gave me strength, you gave me happiness, but I got nothing in return. There is a feeling called happiness, and there is a kind of happiness called moving. Thank you, mom and dad, for giving me happiness and moving me. I understand your hardships, I understand your hope, and I will try my best to give you happiness and let you learn to be moved!
Fatherly love is a lifetime treasure. Father's love is the mountain and fire that protects life. Father's love is fire, which lights the lamp of hope; Father's love is a lamp that illuminates the way forward; Fatherly love is the way to lead your life. I don't know why my father's straight back is bent, why his handsome face is haggard, why his thick black hair is gray, and who my father worked hard for most of his life … until the third grade. On that day, the wind roared and the vegetation was depressed. I was sitting on the bus, getting off and going home alone. However, I saw a person, shivering in the dark world and the cold wind. The wind kept blowing his skirts-that's his father! Through the window, I clearly saw my father's white hair, which was not touched by the bright moon, without gorgeous decoration, but white hair, one by one. My father's white hair was blown down by the strong wind again and again, but he stood indomitable. I know who this must be for ... is it my father's white hair or my father's heart constantly crushed and stood up? The bus was near the station, and I got off quickly. Obviously, my father saw me. He stopped blocking the coat in the wind with his fingers and ran quickly to me. His coat completely succumbed to the strong wind, but he didn't care about the naked red sweater jumping towards me in this inexplicable darkness. At that moment, I clearly saw my father's fiery heart approaching me in the cold. At that moment, I was in tears. My father gently took my hand to warm it up, but what I touched was obviously a big hand as cold as ice. I held my father's hand tightly, but he was too busy to avoid it. "My hands are too cold." Regardless of my father's dodge, I caught those cold big hands back, knowing that I was grasping the wealth of my life. With the aging of life, my father turned into a mountain, a fire, a lamp, a road, a little fatherly love, accompanied me every day and every second, and accompanied me all my life. Father, your love is the wealth of your daughter's life, because with your love, her daughter will never be poor.
Comments This is a composition with full marks in the senior high school entrance examination. The writer is Zhu Ying, a recent graduate of Friendship Middle School. She pays attention to the little things in life in her usual practice, and conveys sincere feelings through delicate descriptions and vivid language. Therefore, it is reasonable to write such a touching article during the senior high school entrance examination. (Recommended teacher: Li Guojin of Tangshan Friendship Middle School) 8 Xiamen Senior High School Entrance Examination Full Score Composition:
Listen to the singing of running water
The sky is crying, and the water drops on the ground gather happily, so there is me-running water. Close your eyes and listen quietly. Do you hear the sound of running water singing? ...
I sang all the way across the plain. I don't envy the towering mountains, nor the quiet lakes and mountains, because I have a flowing life. I don't look up at the powerful wings of the eagle, nor lament the speed of the cheetah, because I know I am small, but I am not small. Look! Peach blossoms on the shore comb themselves with a smile in the clear water; Liu Yang, nourished by me, rolled up his sleeves and flew; The fish in my body are playing happily. Life is red because of me. On the endless plain, I sang loudly, watching the rolling clouds in the sky and watching the flowers bloom and fall in front of the court.
Faced with the obstacles of high mountains, I don't feel sad, nor do I complain about the injustice of fate. On the contrary, I smile and play a passionate movement, and there will always be ups and downs in life. Listen! It was Qu Yuan who sang loudly and wrote Li Sao, which is immortal. "Since ancient times, no one has died in life, leaving a heart that shines on history." Wen Tianxiang sang his unyielding spirit beside the long river of history; Li Bai abandoned fame and fortune, and his ambition of "breaking the waves and making and set my cloudy sail straight and bridge the deep, deep sea" was engraved in the long river of history. Those dangerous mountains can only block my way forward, but they can't stop my progress. I'm not discouraged or disappointed. I won towards the distant all the way. ...
"The fallen petal is intentional, but the flowing water is ruthless", and the fallen petal whispers in my ear. I said, "Please follow my path, and you will understand that running water is not heartless, but takes you to a wider world. The meteor that crossed in the night sky was only a moment, but it passed through the fiery atmosphere, burned its own life, and gave it selflessly to the earth, so it built eternity. " Don't believe it, I smiled happily and continued to flow forward.
In the distance, I heard the choppy call of the sea. I sang loudly and said to the fallen flower, "Look! I took you to heaven. " I packed my bags and threw myself bravely into the arms of the sea. Falling flowers can't help but sigh: "A flowing water that sings because of life has merged into an ocean of life!
Comments: listening to the song of running water, we heard it; Life is bright red because of running water, small but not small; Despite the barrier of mountains, the running water still smiles and rises and falls, singing all the way; The water is flowing away, not heartless, just to find the paradise of life. The little author heard philosophy and truth from the sound of running water, and his opinions were wise and original. What is more commendable is the atmosphere conceived in this paper. Based on the careful observation of the spirit of flowing water, the little author wrote it with a pen, quoting classics, and it was logical. Articles are always filled with high-spirited enthusiasm and have a strong appeal. (Teacher Chen of Siming District Teacher Training School) 9 colors in my eyes
A candidate in Shanghai
Although there are various colors in my eyes, they are all gorgeous. They make up my colorful life.
I like green. When I see green, I will think of my paradise. My paradise is the vegetable field in my backyard. The field is covered with green spinach and rape ... There are mulberry trees and locust trees with dense shade on the ground. Every holiday, I chase and fight with my neighbor's children. Whenever troubles come, I go for a walk in the vegetable field and have a heart-to-heart talk with those vegetables. At this time, the green everywhere is like handfuls of huge green umbrellas, covering the hot summer sun and blocking the cold winter wind ... If you ask me what happiness is, the mood at this time is the best answer.
I like red. When I see red, I think of my red house. Once upon a time, the floor was rattled by me; Once upon a time, I sat on the threshold and recited 300 Tang poems, and frogs and crickets joined in. Once upon a time, there was a cheerful song in the house ... Looking at the sacred red in my mind, I understood what happiness was. ...
I like white. As soon as I see white, I think of delicious white soybean milk. Early in the morning, grandma invited me to drink soy milk made by her own hands. My neighbor and I sat in a row, enjoying the faint smell of soybean milk. Through the rising and spreading heat, I saw grandma's eyes narrowed into a crack and her weather-beaten face, drinking soybean milk that was sweet to my heart. I seem to understand what happiness is. ...
Now I have a soft spot for white. When I was in the ninth grade, I abandoned everything and began to pursue my ideals without distractions. So it became pure and concise, and white has remained in my heart ever since.
Each of us is surrounded by different colors, which are intertwined to form a seemingly simple but colorful world. Through the colors in my eyes, I see that life is so colorful and beautiful!
Comments by famous teachers
One of the most important features of this article is its sincere feelings and profound infection. In the article, the author uses various colors to form memories of life and describes the past life for us. The author is not only narrating, but integrating his feelings into it. For example, "If you ask me what happiness is, the mood at this time is the best answer" shows the author's infinite nostalgia for childhood. For another example, "I saw grandma's eyes narrowed into a crack and her weather-beaten face, and I seemed to understand what happiness was, drinking soybean milk that was always sweet to my heart", which showed the author's gratitude to her and feelings about happiness.
Secondly, this paper adopts the way of echoing from beginning to end, which makes the structure of the article round and complete.
Marking score: content 30 points+expression 20 points+expansion 10 points+writing 2 points =62 points 10 My sky is normal.
Yangzhou examinee
The river flows quietly, quietly …
The Chinese rose in front of the door is blooming desperately, as if to burst the bud.
There are flowers and grass in the yard, round and strong, and the yard is clean.
This is my home, ordinary and quiet.
My family is like this, so are my parents, ordinary and honest.
Mom and dad are my guides on the journey of life.
When I have nothing to do, I always like to put a small stool in the yard, sit on it, take a book, enjoy flowers in the yard, wander in the book, and blend in with the author's thoughts. My father cooks in the kitchen and my mother washes clothes in front of the door. All this is so harmonious and beautiful. When eating, my parents always like to ask me about my school and encourage me to study hard. Everything is so ordinary and calm.
When other students are upset that their parents forbid watching TV, I'm not worried at all, because my parents understand and care about me, and they never stop me from watching TV, because they know that I won't get tired when I play.
On the contrary, they will encourage me to watch TV. Both mom and dad like the host Wang. The program hosted by Wang is colorful, lively and interesting, and the questions raised in the program are very helpful to my study. So every program, my parents accompany me to watch, let me write down some topics that are beneficial to my study; Sometimes when I am not at home, my parents will help me write down the questions, and they will test me when I go home. This has enriched my knowledge of history and geography. Everything is so meaningful.
The senior high school entrance examination is coming, and many parents come to the school to ask the class teacher about their children's study, because I know my parents, they won't come, and they are busy with work.
But one day I changed my mind. Inadvertently, I saw the head teacher and two familiar figures talking in the distance. I recognize them as my parents. ...
Everything is so selfless.
My parents are my guides on the journey of life. They created a blue sky for me and let me fly freely.
[brief comment]
Life is not a lack of beauty, but a lack of discovery of beauty. As long as we observe carefully, we can easily find that everything in nature often gives us inspiration in life, and the light of human nature will shine everywhere in society and family. The author's family is ordinary: it is ordinary and quiet; Mom and dad, ordinary and honest; Life is ordinary and quiet. However, the ordinary contains the extraordinary: the courtyard surrounded by flowers and plants, harmonious and beautiful family division of labor, which is an ordinary, quiet and peaceful environment, but also a poetic environment; The clever use of TV programs and visiting teachers at critical moments are common things in an ordinary family, but they also reflect the caring consciousness of modern people. All this is so ordinary, peaceful and calm. It is a word "Ping", which endows "I" with selfless love and "creates a blue sky for me and lets me fly freely". It is natural and appropriate to write "My Sky" at the end of the article.