Who can give me excellent or full marks in the college entrance examination over the years? Thank you.

Anhui Chengming

In 2007, Guangdong Province (curriculum reform area) got full marks in the senior high school entrance examination (***2).

Real question playback

Write according to the following topics and requirements. (50 points)

Title: The Best Award

Requirements: write a narrative of not less than 500 words, and the real name and school name shall not appear in the text.

Full mark volume one

The best reward

Guangdong examinee

That mango with black spots is my best reward and my grandma's deep love.

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When the fragrance of mango wafted into my nose and wrapped around me, I thought of the best return. At this time, grandma's love is like the fragrance of mango, which wraps around my heart and fills my heart. ...

That year, I used my spare time to visit my grandmother's house. In the yard, I snuggled in grandma's arms, pointed to the immature mango on the tree and shouted, "I want to eat this!" " "Although the emerald skin of mango is a little blue, it attracts my greedy taste.

"No, not yet." Grandma ha ha smiled. "Grandma will give it to you when you come back from the first place in the exam, okay?" I clapped my hands and shouted, and grandma kissed my forehead with a warm smile on her face. ...

Back in the city, I forgot all about it until the phone that stung my heart rang, "grandma is going to die!" " "On the other end of the phone, my aunt was crying. I froze, a tear crossed my face, and tears of regret stung my heart. I really won the first prize, but I didn't report the good news to my grandmother. I completely forgot my grandmother in the distance. I hate myself! I got on the bus to the hospital in tears.

The sheets in the hospital are horribly white, and there is a strong smell of medicine everywhere. Grandma was lying quietly in the hospital bed. When everyone looked at grandma who finally woke up with joy, the doctor said it was a reflection, and everyone was silent. I fought back my tears and rushed to grandma. I was surprised to see grandma holding a mango with black spots on its calluses. She held on so tightly that her cloudy eyes were full of disappointment. My mother told me that she told my grandmother that I had won the first prize. My grandmother always said that she would reward me with a mango, and when she went to the hospital, she also brought this mango, saying that she would give me an award in person.

I can't control my feelings anymore. "Grandma, you will be fine. Don't leave me! " "I cried with tears in my eyes, like being cut by a knife, and tears welled up.

"Reward ... reward ... mango ..." Grandma murmured, and her godless eyes revealed a kind of love that only I could read. Then she put the mango in my hand with all her strength and shook it tightly, holding my hand tightly. "Good ... good ... reading ..." Grandma's hoarse voice was only audible to me. I nodded, tears rolling in my eyes.

Suddenly, grandma let go of her hand and closed her eyes gently. At this time, my tears came out desperately, hitting my hands and mangoes. I feel this spotted mango is so heavy. Looking at grandma's quiet face, I said to myself, "Yes, I will study hard!" "

I will never forget that mango, it is the best reward!

Another summer, the mango is ripe again, and the golden mango reminds me of my deep thoughts. The smell of mango is getting stronger and stronger, just like grandma's love, which is the best reward my grandma gave me.

Full score reason

This is a very successful narrative of the examination room, touching and tearful. The article writes that candidates go to grandma's house for a holiday and want to eat mangoes, but the mangoes are not ripe. Grandma encouraged her grandson and said that if he came first in the exam, he would be rewarded with a mango. Unexpectedly, this farewell turned out to be a matter of life and death. When she saw grandma again, she was already dead, but before she died, she remembered to reward her grandson with a mango. This made those candidates who were forgetful and didn't tell their grandmother that they had won the first place in the exam feel more guilty and shed tears. The article has a good grasp of the characteristics of narrative writing, which is fluent in narration, novel in thinking and close to the "best reward" writing. Mango is not only the best reward my grandmother gave me, but also a token of my grandmother's deep love for me. The details of the mango given to me when I bid farewell to my grandmother are vivid and full of twists and turns, which makes people miss things and miss home.

If the idea is the skeleton of the article and the content is flesh and blood, then emotion is nerve. In the examination composition, people write notes and discuss, fill their hearts with true feelings, and make the "environment" of real life echo the true feelings spilled on paper, which is a wonderful situation. This article has this feature. In recent years, there are many articles written in the examination room that have lost their loved ones, but there are not many articles that can really touch the hearts of marking teachers. This article has been unanimously recognized by the leading group of the marking industry, and it is considered to meet the requirements of the examination room composition, with touching narrative, sincere feelings and vivid writing. Candidates are describing people, telling the truth and expressing their true feelings. For example, the phrase "the sheets in the hospital are horribly white and there is a strong smell of medicine everywhere" has the characteristics of situational sense. How can someone who has never been to the hospital write such a sentence? Although it is a stroke, it is not small! At the same time, the inscription, the beginning, the end and the writing are the highlights of this article. The handwriting is dignified and neat, and the volume is refreshing and pleasing to the eye.

Full score 2

The best reward

Guangdong examinee

"Ah, it's the second brother!"

"Everyone's life is quite good ... Oh, don't bother, the children are very grateful ... Well, you should rest quickly, make a phone call when you come, and I'll help you ..." Needless to guess, just listening to my father's tone, it must be my dear uncle bringing delicious food. It's not. Dad's here.

"Daughters, you two" heard that you were going to finish the exam and specially sent you a big pear. It is also said that the best pears are given to the best students. Efforts can comfort this little glutton! "

"Yes!" I nodded, and then went to the ocean of problems. ...

The pears sent by Bo Er are really great. Although the skin is a little thick, the pears inside are white, tender and juicy, which makes people linger. Fight for my pear!

Finally, on this day, Bo Er panted and moved three boxes of pears. I went over and gave the pears to my brother and sister. The pear was so big that they all cheered.

Now there is only the small box left. Small ones are the essence. I made great progress this time. The best pear belongs to me

Sure enough, Bo Er praised me a few words greatly, and sent the pear to me in earnest. Can't wait, try it quickly. ...

I was blindsided when I opened it. How ... how are all small and broken pears! Pick up one and try it. It's too sour to compliment.

I think this is the best pear. After losing it, I still don't understand.

"Is this pear sour? Haha, my teeth are soft! " These two uncles are still gloating, which really annoys me.

Say, Bo Er took the pear in my hand, took a big bite and said, "Sweet is delicious, but how much can people remember?" Sour pear meat brings a bitter taste that people can't forget for a long time. Only those who have tasted acid know the value of sweetness. Think about it! "Say that finish, cunningly twisted my ear.

It suddenly dawned on me. Bo Er wants me to remember that success is hard-won, and the tall buildings built by hard work and sweat will not be easily destroyed!

Although Bo Er has no culture, he is still engaged in orchards. This must be his unique skill.

Yes, eat sweet and sour! But this pear ... is too sour!

Pears are sour, but they are the best reward!

Full score reason

The article begins with a telephone conversation, which is novel and unique and attracts readers. The article writes that eating that sour pear is the best reward for Bo Er. The theme is full of life, the language is simple, and the description conforms to the character. Another highlight of this paper is the successful use of contrast to point out the main idea-sweet is delicious, but how much can people remember? Sour pear meat brings a bitter taste that people can't forget for a long time. Only those who have tasted acid know the value of sweetness. Clever design. At the end, the questions can be pointed out in the simplest language, which constitutes a perfect feeling and is worthy of being a masterpiece in the examination room.

Excellent composition of Anhui senior high school entrance examination in 2007 (5 articles)

Please write an article on the topic "Our hearts are very close" in the composition exam.

Tips and requirements

(1) Please boldly choose the style you can control best and write in the way you like.

(2) Don't appear real place names, school names, names, etc. In the text, otherwise points will be deducted.

(3) Plagiarism is a bad behavior. I believe you won't copy other people's articles; Otherwise, it will affect your grades.

(4) Considering the enrichment of the content, the article should be no less than 500 words.

Examination room masterpiece

Our hearts are very close.

Anhui examinee

She, 42, is a laid-off woman worker. She is hardworking and capable, and has a heart. She is my mother and a good mother.

A year ago, I regarded her as an enemy, and I hated her because she was my stepmother. I hate her as much as I hate my father. I hate that she abandoned her family and remarried her father. I hate why my father married this woman a year after my mother died. I hate this family. I never said a word to her at that time, because I was radiant when I saw her. In fact, I know that this "joy" is mixed with "fear". It is said that my stepmother will abuse a child like me, so I avoid her every day and don't talk to her.

Once, what she did made me hate her even more. On the way home from school that day, I saw her crying and talking to two children. I stood out of their sight, and I recognized their relationship. That's her baby. Because the child doesn't want to live with his father, the father will beat the child in a cruel way. They want to be with their mother. She said yes. I am very angry. It's over. I also have two sisters. When I got home, they were already sitting at the table, and my father introduced me to two sisters. I didn't want to have anything to do with them, so I went into my room without eating.

Since then, I have been fascinated by the Internet and often enter my online world after school. I feel that someone on the internet really cares about me and understands me. Surfing the Internet made me completely forget myself. Dad was too angry to leave me alone, but she couldn't help it. She looks pathetic every day and goes to the internet cafe to find me. Every time I play, I give up halfway. I can't say anything about her. I am in a hurry. I called her names and cursed her. She cried sadly, crying very sadly. Actually, I regret scolding her. After all, it's my fault. Dad gave me a good beating, and I ran out to the Internet cafe. I wanted someone to listen to me, but she followed me and found me. I hate it. She was surrounded by some annoying men and touched her. But I'm useless. I can only call 1 10. Several hooligans were scared away. Then I cried. I don't know why, but because of her eyes, I saw something from it. That's mom's love. Yes, there is a strong maternal love in her eyes. I cried badly that time. I no longer surf the Internet, because I got a long-lost maternal love from her.

I am close to her, I am close to her heart!

comment

Compared with other excellent compositions, perhaps this article is weaker. It has no unique style to make your eyes shine; It has no profound theme to convince you; It has no gorgeous language that you will never forget. But this article is really excellent. The most prominent feature of this article is its unpretentious style. In the first person, the author tells us the process of "I" and "stepmother" from "I hate her guts" to "I am close to her heart", and writes the deep "love" of "stepmother" to "me". The author's language is simple and sincere, like a rough jade, full of simple style. As a marking teacher said, "such an article is a good article!" The final score of this paper: 27 (content) +23 (expression) =50 points.

Our hearts are very close.

Anhui examinee

The Olympic Games is a grand event that our people are looking forward to. When the five-star red flag Ran Ran rises, when the Olympic flame is lit-our hearts are quietly approaching.

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Hope, hope for what? What did I ask Gao Shan Wang? The mountain is silent. Looking forward to wearing green again? Those happy green elves have quietly climbed up your eyebrows and dressed up your white temples. Looking forward to birds and flowers? Flowers are blooming everywhere, and songs and dances everywhere convey the news of spring. Magnificent mountains! What do you expect? Dashan turned around and sang softly to me: I hope the five rings will come to China! Oh, Dashan, you also have a five-ring dream!

I asked what the running water hoped for. Running water is silent. Looking forward to the bottom of the stream, fish and shrimp playing? Your face is beautiful, and my laughter is reflected in your pupils. The next day, the lotus leaves are infinitely blue, and the fish and shrimp in the river play in groups. The clear water in the bay flows eastward with a light rhythm and flows into the sea with great momentum. What exactly are you expecting? Running water turned around and whispered to me: I hope the five rings will come to Beijing! Oh, running water, so you also have a five-ring dream!

In the past, I visited Boya, but now the mountains should flow. People who know each other can't say what they know, and people who have a heart in mind can talk about the five-ring dream.

Swift next door gave birth to a little sister named Pan Pan. Pan Pan, what do you expect? Looking forward to spreading your wings and fighting the sky as soon as possible, and looking forward to growing up and making contributions to the motherland as soon as possible? Pan Pan, Pan Pan, what do you expect? Looking forward to whispering: looking forward to the five rings!

Looking forward to the five rings-how many stormy streets, how many times the scorching sun takes the lead. I once called five rings to the sky. Five rings, five rings, the dream shared by generations for hundreds of years, can it be realized today? Wuhuan, we call you in unison, we are waiting for you! The sound drifted across the sea, across the stream, to the distant heaven and to everyone's heart. This is our long-cherished wish and dream in China. Let's hold hands and pass on the Olympic spirit; Let's hug each other tightly and pass on the Olympic concept; Let's March towards a brilliant tomorrow with hard-working hands and solid steps!

When the first ray of sunshine shines through the window tomorrow morning, when bright and beautiful flowers are competing for beauty, when the people of China have the same dream in their hearts, and when the Olympic athletes are struggling hard on the field, we all have a dream in our hearts. At that time, you will feel everyone's fiery heartbeat, and you will feel the passion and warm embrace of each of us. At this point, we are very close, very close, close enough to hear each other's breathing clearly. Our hearts are getting closer. Let's wish the 2008 Beijing Olympic Games a complete success with fiery passion!

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When many candidates define "our hearts" as "me and my teacher", "my parents" and "my classmates", the student wrote his feelings of "looking forward to the Olympics" in a unique way. Innovation in content is the outstanding feature of this article. Secondly, when writing my "longing" for the Olympic Games, this article does not directly talk about it, but indirectly expresses it through several distinctive images such as mountains, flowing water and swift, which makes the article have a strong anthropomorphic atmosphere. This is another outstanding feature of this paper. Finally, the theme of the article is positive, the structure is orderly and the language is fluent. For a junior high school student, this article shows that the author's Chinese skills are very solid. The final score of this paper: 28 (content) +23 (expression) = 5 1.

Our hearts are very close.

Anhui examinee

Such as beautiful and silent winter snow, such as dripping spring rain, such as the wind rustling in the summer shade. The days passed quietly from page to page.

Some have already rotted away with the vegetation, and some are scattered in their hearts with hazy colors, trying to pick up the neglected ones, but picking up a few pages of missing words.

Tears danced through a rainy season, and when a strange image was inexplicably buried in a beautiful collection of poems with dandelion's thoughts, I realized that I had unconsciously put on a mature disguise in my life. When I walked out of my mother's sight and traveled alone in a foreign land, I realized that days showed not only the wandering of my mother's eyes when I was a child, but also the running of a distant dream when I grew up. You and I mentioned luggage, and our backs disappeared in the same red sun, for the same dream.

Perhaps the mood of writing poems on fallen leaves will grow old day by day, perhaps growth is at the expense of loneliness, and the passing days will only give us an inspiration to grasp today. In fact, who can give a fixed concept to a complete life and a perfect day? Perhaps, the tranquility of green, the indifference of blue, the restlessness of red, the melancholy of purple, the anxiety of dark brown, the fear of black ... all kinds of colorful fragments are patched together, colorful life, and the days of rendering. From then on, we all have a colorful heart. There is nothing wrong with the bleak years. What is wrong is that we are content with the bleak! More often, we use our own hands to wipe away the dust of the journey, use our own greetings to dispel the fatigue of trekking, and cherish every day and every touch with our own soul. We will roll up side by side and walk through the dust mixed with sweat and tears.

When we are happy, we often don't know it, even though other people's eyes cast a lot of envy. At this moment, why don't you calm down and watch the drunken sunset that day, and you are fascinated by it. In fact, what we have already filled the sky. When we smile, we will smell the fragrance of the whole world.

Do you look at the starry sky in the distance, but you can't see the other side of your heart?

And faith is really a whispering light wave, rippling through the ideal harbor to give yourself a commitment, okay? Looking back one day, I also read a whole book, whether it was clumsy or thin. As long as there is content, you and I will write the book of life with the same pen, a book called In the Mood for Love, and read it carefully tomorrow.

We hold our fiery hearts together and promise to be transparent forever. On the way to another beginning, we can only sincerely wish, shake off impetuousness and frivolous, and start on the road in the season of sowing dreams!

You and I are calm and intimate!

comment

This is an examination composition disputed by the marking teacher. For the first time, the teacher thought that this article should not be the article of the third grade students, because it was too mature and old-fashioned, especially the prose style and subtle and beautiful language made him doubt. But he wasn't sure it was plagiarism. No one can treat students wrongly without conclusive evidence. Finally, the marking team leader decided that this paper should be a masterpiece in the examination room that combines the beautiful paragraphs of different articles properly and closely follows the theme. After reading this article again, I feel that it is really good. First of all, this article describes some pursuit in the author's mind, which is a good deduction of the topic. This pursuit process is hazy, implicit and happy. This is the mental journey of the "rainy season" teenagers. Secondly, the author's language is highly consistent with the content, and the subtle and beautiful language is an appropriate proof of the content. As a junior high school student, no matter what, this is worthy of recognition. The final score of this paper: 28 (content) +24 (expression) = 52 points.

Our hearts are very close.

Anhui examinee

Close the distance between hearts and experience the harmony between people —— Inscription

generous

In a hospital, there were countless good people walking back and forth around the donation box. They selflessly put paper money into the donation box, asking for nothing in return, and also devoted themselves to selfless care. They asked for nothing in return, and offered their blessings to Huang Ge, a young sunshine boy who was about to die. "Yes, our hearts are closer again, although we don't know your name."

Understand; Understanding

Huang Ge hopes that his father can take him and use his limited life to thank those who have helped him. As a father, how much he wants his son to fall asleep happily in bed and give all his love. But my father did not refuse Brother Huang, but promised him with tears in his eyes. He understands his son and his heart. In order to fulfill my son's last wish, it's worth it to be bitter and tired again. "Dad, thank you for understanding me. Your understanding has brought the distance between our father and son closer and our hearts closer! "

Be grateful

My father rode a shabby tricycle and took Brother Huang on a journey of gratitude. My father took Brother Huang around more than 20 provinces, and spent three years looking for good people who had helped them, and presented them with a bunch of flowers and a bow to thank them for their help. "Grateful people, thank you, let me live my own life, let me have the courage to be myself, and your help has brought our hearts closer, even though I am going to die!"

Selflessness, understanding and dedication have brought the feelings between people closer, and let us realize the harmony between people. I firmly believe: "As long as everyone contributes a love, the world will become a beautiful world!" "

Close the distance between heart and heart, and experience the harmony between people! Let our hearts be closer and our society be better!

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This is a masterpiece of the examination room that I rescued. The initial teacher's score is 4 1. As a member of the composition marking guidance group, I found this article when I checked the teacher's marking, and thought that the score was low and it should be classified as a class of articles. Finally, under the comprehensive evaluation of several teachers, this article got a high score of 5 1. This is a successful article, which skillfully uses Huang Ge, a character who moved China, to explain that "our hearts are close". The article is divided into three subheadings: selflessness, understanding and gratitude, which well shows the beautiful quality of Huang Ge, a sunny teenager, and sings a high ode for the theme of this era. The theme is positive, the interpretation is rigorous, and the language is simple, which shows the candidates' solid basic Chinese skills.

Our hearts are very close.

Anhui examinee

The same blue sky and white clouds, the same world of flowers and flowers, different you, me and him. We and they are the seeds of God, Xin Wei. They landed in the desert mountains, and we were lucky to land in the fertile fields. Everyone is growing, growing. ...

At the age of seven, we slept in a warm bed and opened our eyes in the morning. In front of us are beautiful clothes and nutritious breakfast: fried dough sticks, eggs and soybean milk. We carried colorful schoolbags, got in our parents' car, came to school safely, opened our schoolbags, opened our books and read with the teacher: "Goose, Goose, Goose, Quxiang Xiang Tiange."

At the age of seven, they slept on cold sheets and opened their eyes in the morning. In front of them are patched clothes and tasteless breakfast: bran rice, boiled water and steamed corn. They shouldered heavy hoes and shovels, sat in their parents' carts, scampered to the fields, picked up hoes and shouted to their parents, "Hello, hello ..."

We saw photos in the mountains and volunteered to help the poor in the mountains; They saw the photos in the city and vowed to go out.

At the age of fourteen, we were laughing and laughing on campus, and the breath of youth emanated from us. There is joy in spring outing, laughter in summer swimming, flying kites in autumn and Christmas greetings in winter. Of course, we don't forget the seven-year-old volunteers, pack up their favorite clothes, pack up their used books, and watch the disaster relief vehicles go away with our wishes and hopes.

At the age of fourteen, they were sweating in the fields, and their enthusiasm and hope were revealed from their figures. There are fresh mountains and green waters in spring, colorful butterflies strolling among flowers in summer, golden crops everywhere in autumn, and happiness of heating around the stove in winter. Of course, they don't forget their vows when they were seven years old, pick up donated books, wrap them in donated blankets, light candles, study hard in the dark, smile with relief on their faces, look at the vehicles delivering meals in the distance, and sail away with the future and hope.

In the near future, we came to the mountains, bringing light and wealth. We smile, they smile, and our hearts are very close. In the near future, they came to this city with motivation and surprise. They contribute their wisdom to make the city more beautiful. They laughed, we laughed, and our hearts were close.

We have no distinction between "us" and "them". We are all God's favorites. The same blue sky and white clouds, the same heart "plop! Plop! " Our hearts are very close, very close!

Children in the mountains need love. We should give them more love!

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This is an article that touched our marking teacher. It is really commendable for a junior three student to write such an article with lofty ideas and sophisticated writing in the face of the topic of "our hearts are very close" in this tense senior high school entrance examination room.

Be ambitious. This is the teacher's full affirmation of this article. This paper, with the title "Our hearts are close", compares "them" in rural life with "us" in urban life, and writes the growth fate and good wishes of different children under the same blue sky. The theme of this article is to pay attention to rural children, rural areas in China and Project Hope. As a junior high school student, it is really extraordinary to be able to extend the perspective of writing to such a big subject.

Clever writing. This is another highlight of the marking teacher's paper. It is not easy for a junior high school student to use contrast everywhere in an article, and it is permeated with the author's point of view and the theme of the work. But the author did it, and he did it well. The contrast between "us" and "them" at the age of seven shows the different living conditions of different children under the same blue sky. The contrast between "us" and "them" at the age of fourteen shows not only a completely different picture of life, but also a good desire to communicate with each other. "Not too distant future" shows a touching picture of "hand in hand, intimate heart". The article unfolds in contrast, sublimates in contrast, and the writing style is really extraordinary. The final score of this paper: 30 (content) +24 (expression) = 54 points.

Full marks (6 articles) in Taiyuan City, Shanxi Province in 2007.

Read the following materials and write as required.

The twenty-four solar terms in China not only correspond to phenology and seasons accurately, but also have rich names. Let's take a look at several solar terms in spring: "beginning of spring" still carries the residual cold of winter, but the warmer weather brings the breath of spring, which is a turning point and a sign of the alternation of the old and the new; "Stunned" is like a story. A spring thunder awakens Qian Qian's sleeping life, just like a father's booze, and makes stubborn children know how to forge ahead. On the day of "vernal equinox", the sun is just above the equator, meticulously distributing its light to the north and south of the earth, showing a kind of justice. Please write an article with no less than 600 words on the topic of beginning of spring, Jing Ke and Equinox.

Requirements:

(1) Style is not limited, try to express your true feelings.

(2) There should be no real place names, school names and names in the text.

Beginning of Spring

There was silence in the examination room, only the rustling sound of writing echoed in the empty classroom.

My heart is not very bright at the moment. It's midsummer, but my heart is full of ice and snow, as if there are countless sorrows that linger. Alas, after such a long and arduous review, I finally faced a pale test paper. How can you not be depressed? Someone behind him sighed, helpless? Still boring?

I once heard the teacher say, "The senior high school entrance examination is a turning point in life. For a top student like you, it is undoubtedly an opportunity for carp yue longmen. " "Maybe." I answered lightly.

I seem to know very well in my heart. Don't you study hard as usual after the senior high school entrance examination? Even if you study in an institution of higher learning, you will face a pale test paper in a few years. Where is the turning point?

Alas, the winter in my heart will definitely be longer, and I'm afraid spring will not come!

Outside the window, the willows are green and have experienced the cold winter. Did they ever feel happy when they started in spring? They absorb rain and dew all day and strive to grow. Can't they really escape the sadness from autumn to dead leaves? In that case, why do you have to work so hard and work so hard?

Just then, a breeze blew, bringing the pure fragrance of willow branches and leaves, and my mind was clear for a while. It suddenly occurred to me that this endless cycle of willows is struggling to grow, isn't it for the fragrance of this world?

Perhaps, after a cold winter, their hearts are looking forward to the warm moment at the beginning of spring, knowing that there will be dead leaves and frozen snow branches all over the sky, but this is a beginning and an end after all. When spring begins, their fragrance will eventually overflow the world and last forever.

Yes! The results of the senior high school entrance examination are not important, and a brand-new life rings after the alternation of old and new. In this annual ring, we struggle, we laugh, and we are confident that the temperament and fragrance of students will shine all over the world!

I don't know when, but I feel warm. Be clear in your heart: the process is the main thing. After beginning of spring, the flowers will bloom and the hard seeds we planted will take root. Why worry that the world will be clear if the incense is not far away?

Someone handed in the paper in advance, but I insisted on sitting until the end. Yes, since it is a turning point, why not enrich this process to no regrets?

Full score reason

Expressing feelings naturally in writing is a common idea, and it is not easy to write new ideas. However, the author of this paper can express his philosophical thinking on life through natural reincarnation and fragrant scenery on earth. Coupled with harmonious structure and fluent language, the article is popular and profound, but simple and unique.

Tolstoy said: "When people are alive, they must have goals in life." Adolescent children are easy to wander in false vicissitudes and indulge in ignorant rebellion. The value of a small author is that he can find himself in the chaos and find the right direction. Yes, the road is not in the sky, but at the foot. As long as you walk carefully, every step will be so real and valuable.