English translation, please be more accurate! Now the weather repo

Now for the weather forecast. It's a sunny day today. The maximum temperature during the day is 15 degrees, and tomorrow is expected to be cloudy and cold. The temperature will drop to 5 degrees Celsius in the morning. It will get warmer in the afternoon, with the highest temperature reaching 10 degrees. There is a high chance of rain or snow during the night. In the evening the temperature will drop to 0 degrees.

I am an English major and the translation is OK