How to practice correcting incorrect sentences
Modifying incorrect sentences is a need to improve students' expression ability, and it is also a common question type on Chinese language test papers. However, in actual teaching, it was found that many students did not grasp the essentials of modifying faulty sentences, and when faced with faulty sentences, they had no way of starting because they could not find the cause.
How to exercise the ability to modify incorrect sentences?
1. Knowledge Reserve
1. Classify and explain the causes of diseased sentences to help students form an overall impression.
Common types of incorrect sentences:
⑴ Reverse word order; ⑵ Inconsistency;
⑶ Incomplete components; ⑷ Unknown reference;
⑸ Wrong punctuation; ⑹ Wrong use of related words;
⑺ Repeated and wordy; ⑻ Improper collocation;
⑼ Wrong classification; ⑽ Not consistent with the facts.
Eight points to pay attention to when "diagnosing" illness sentences:
⑴ Pay attention to the collocation of related words before and after.
⑵ Pay attention to sentences with words like "forbidden" and "prevent".
(3) Be careful when there are multiple negative words in a sentence.
⑷Pay attention to the prepositions in the sentence.
⑸ Pay attention to the collocation and word order of parallel phrases.
⑹ Pay attention to sentences about increase or decrease in quantity.
⑺ Pay attention to the collocation of words such as "can" and "whether" before and after the sentence.
⑻ Pay attention to the emotional color of the words in the sentence.
2． Things to note when modifying a faulty sentence:
⑴ Do not add content and text other than the original sentence at will;
⑵ A faulty sentence often has only one grammatical flaw;
⑶ The fewer changes to bad sentences, the better.
3. Clarify the three requirements for correcting incorrect sentences to avoid unnecessary loss of points when doing questions.
⑴Write the revised and correct sentence on the horizontal line. Such requests are now relatively rare.
⑵ Modify the original sentence. Modification symbols must be used correctly.
⑶Description method. Use one sentence to explain how this sentence could be modified.
2. Special exercises
⑴Class hours: One class hour is required;
⑵Preparation: Collect enough sick sentences and print them into small slips of paper (each (a sick sentence on the note), hold it in the teacher’s hand;
⑶Drawing numbers: Each of the four selected students will pick a sick sentence from the teacher’s hand, stand in front of the blackboard in turn, and accurately copy the sick sentence Go to the blackboard and revise as required. (For details on the method of drawing numbers, please refer to the article "Introduction to the "Inspection Method of Drawing Numbers"")
⑷Evaluation: Sort the four students according to their correctness, and praise, criticize, or add points respectively.
Appendix 1: Collection of sick sentences
◇Now that you are here, it’s time for me to leave.
◇In order to prevent the epidemic from rebounding, city leaders All units are required to further strengthen management and formulate strict preventive measures
◇With the development of science today, no one will deny that the earth does not orbit the sun.
◇Through the doctor's advice. Careful treatment allowed her to recover quickly.
◇We must solve and discover the problems in learning in a timely manner.
◇The economic losses caused by this fire were determined by relevant departments. A conservative estimate is that the direct loss is at least 30 million yuan.
◇Our Chinese textbooks are almost the thinnest in the world, several times less than similar textbooks in several major countries.
< p>◇The ability to eradicate the "stubborn disease" in Internet cafes is one of the conditions for ensuring the healthy growth of young people.◇The school enthusiastically praised Liu Ming's courageous behavior.
◇His seriousness. The spirit of hard work is worthy of emulation by every student.
◇Good production and disaster relief work depends on the in-depth work style of cadres.
◇After investigation, teenagers under the age of 18 smoke in a certain community. The number of people was as high as 120 the year before, but after extensive publicity and education, it has dropped to 60 this year, exactly doubled.
◇The students watched and listened to the report of this brave hero with reverence.
◇From the above-mentioned witnessed facts, it is proved that what they did is irreproachable.
◇Netizens generally believe that the strategic significance of aircraft carriers is of great importance to them. This is not unusual for China.
◇How to prevent U.S. troops in Iraq from being attacked by car bombs is a headache for the US government.
◇Both cadres and the masses. Without exception, everyone must abide by the socialist legal system.
◇The correctness of the content is an important criterion for measuring the work.
◇This speech contest exposed a lot of quick thinking. students.
◇The key to solving the "agriculture, rural areas and farmers" issues is whether there is a "farmer-oriented" concept.
◇The National Development and Reform Commission recently issued a notice to significantly increase the number of farmers. Reduce the maximum retail price of 24 commonly used drugs, with an average price reduction of 30% and a price reduction of approximately 3.5 billion yuan.
◇Various newly discovered epidemics have made us correct and recognize our poor hygiene.
◇With the help of teachers and classmates, he opened his mind and mastered problem-solving methods, and his grades improved significantly.
◇Of course the spirit of Lei Feng must be given new connotations, but who can deny that there is no need to learn from Lei Feng now?
◇We should obey the traffic rules to avoid accidents.
◇Only by listening to the lectures and completing the homework well, the academic performance can be greatly improved.
◇Imagination is not only necessary for the poet's creation, but also necessary for the reader's appreciation.
◇This journal will change its mind, continue to improve the editing quality of manuscripts, and is determined to climb to the high level of a literary journal.
◇The quality of the machine is an important condition for ensuring production safety.
◇Due to the impact of SARS, the number of tourists visiting our city this year has more than doubled compared with the same period last year.
◇Only by insisting on long-term smelting and arduous mining, it is possible to obtain a dazzling gold bead.
◇Under the rude interference of the train conductor, Edison's wish to sell newspapers and conduct experiments on the train was shattered.
◇ Today, when the concept of science and technology as the primary productive force is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, who can not believe that high technology will not bring good news to mankind?
◇Students should not make up random things when writing essays.
◇Using this kind of compass, you will not lose your way no matter when the clouds are overcast or when the sun cannot be seen in the morning or evening.
◇This meeting stipulates that each speaker’s speaking time cannot exceed 30 minutes.
◇Xiao Ming always makes excuses when he makes a mistake. If you say something to him, he will draw inferences and repay you many times.
◇Whether the concept of education can be fundamentally changed is an important guarantee for us to solve the problem of comprehensively promoting the process of quality education.
◇After technological innovation, the cost of the material factory has doubled, while the output value has increased by 10%.
◇The old educated youth can see the feelings and states they have experienced in this book.
◇When I heard this story, it reminded me of many past events.
◇Shouldn’t those who ignore traffic rules not be blamed?
◇In order to prevent similar vicious accidents from happening again, we must strengthen management and take strict measures preventive measures.
◇ Regardless of the extremely unfavorable climate and geographical conditions, the mountaineers still overcame the difficulties and successfully climbed to the top.
◇Even if there is a slump in study or setbacks in life, we cannot be depressed.
◇Our army saw through the enemy's clever plan, rushed to Luding Bridge in advance, and eliminated them on the other side of the river.
◇Xiao Wang is full of confidence in whether he can learn computers well.
◇In the past 200 years, about one-third of the forests on the earth have been logged and destroyed.
◇The students made their learning attitude and purpose clear.
◇Through three years of study in junior high school, I have mastered a lot of knowledge and learned many principles of life.
◇We have to admit that the sun does not rise in the east and set in the west.
◇Some parents do not realize that this is a disease, and use simple and crude methods to prevent their children from accessing the Internet.
◇ "Control yourself" is not only a reflection of a good mental outlook, but also a requirement for daily behavioral norms.
◇Does special function exist? Is there truth or lie behind paranormal phenomena? Science can only allow us to answer in the negative.
◇The initiators of the initiative to allow the national flag, military flag and regional flag to travel into space are two young people who grew up under the five-star red flag...
◇Can it be protected well? Water resources are a major issue related to the sustainable development of mankind.
◇In the past 10 years, the annual number of book publications has more than doubled, while the total number of prints has remained basically the same, indicating that the average number of books has more than doubled.
◇After the party, her graceful dancing and beautiful singing still echoed in my ears.
◇About every half mile along the roadside, there is a platform full of flowers. Bees and butterflies are flying among the flowers, which is really beautiful.
◇No one can deny that economic development in recent years is not the result of reform and opening up.
◇Three taboos when sleeping: The first taboo is not to be angry before going to bed, the second taboo is not to eat a full meal before going to bed, and the third taboo is not to lie in the wind.
◇No matter what difficulties the workers encountered during the construction of the Three Gorges Dam, they were able to overcome obstacles and move forward indomitably.
◇Shaoxing rice wine is the largest rice wine production base in the country.
◇Beijing will work hard to improve the ecological environment and ensure the "Green Olympics" requirements for Beijing's environmental quality.
◇This meeting stipulates that each speaker’s speaking time cannot exceed 30 minutes.
◇By reading famous books, I understand many principles of life and realize the true meaning of life.
◇The main readers of "Standard Chinese Dictionary" are a set of Chinese learning materials compiled for the children of Chinese students in English-speaking countries and Chinese language enthusiasts.
◇The key to Henan Province’s economic development lies in a good investment environment.
◇The Beijing Olympic Games Organizing Committee recently held a press conference and announced that it will hold the first Olympic song collection event starting from April 15 this year.
◇Netizens generally believe that the strategic significance of aircraft carriers is not extraordinary for China.
◇Qi Hong, who had just returned from illness, started scoring goals in the first game of the top ten games, and he couldn't stop it from then on.
◇Who can deny that protecting our living environment is not protecting ourselves as humans?
◇Even if there is a slump in study or setbacks in life, we cannot be depressed.
◇Does special function exist? Is there truth or lie behind paranormal phenomena? Science can only allow us to answer in the negative.
◇From the tragic life of Kong Yiji who was poisoned by feudal education, he effectively criticized the evils of the feudal imperial examination system.
◇After listening to Xiao Song’s introduction, I sincerely thank Li Fang in my heart.
◇Some inflammations can be treated by Western medicine, but Chinese medicine can also be treated. Not only are traditional Chinese medicines comparable to general antibiotics, but they also have fewer side effects and lower costs.
◇The very white walls are so dazzling that people can’t even open their eyes.
◇Being good at regulating our mood will allow us to travel lightly and study happily.
◇Smooth language is an important criterion for measuring the quality of a composition.
◇As soon as I entered the venue, I saw many colorful flags and joyful singing.
◇At present, the public’s concept of environmental protection is relatively weak and needs to be improved.
◇Everyone who has made achievements in scientific research has achieved success through hard work under very difficult objective conditions.
◇Through everyone’s efforts, we have completed the work of making the class web page.
◇After joining the WTO, we do not rule out that those companies that do not adapt to the needs of the international market will not be eliminated.
◇ Regarding criticism of the movie "Hero", although some people have critical opinions on the content, it cannot but be said that its momentum and color are not shocking.
◇Broadband network can not only browse information, send and receive emails, but also provide intelligent and personalized online video on demand and remote teaching.
◇There are many publishing circles who have made successful attempts in publishing innovation and made breakthrough progress.
◇If our middle school students lack the spirit of innovation, they will not be able to adapt to the requirements of the economic era.
◇Experts warn: Take protective measures when watching the solar eclipse, and do not look directly with your eyes to avoid burning your eyes.
◇People were deeply infected by the old man’s clear thinking and optimistic mood.
◇For a time, the heavy fog covered everything in the sky, and there was no sound from the telegraph poles in the distance.
◇About every half mile along the roadside, there is a platform full of flowers. Bees and butterflies are flying among the flowers, which is really beautiful.
◇Choosing the most reliable and appropriate materials often plays a very important role in the success or failure of an article.
◇The professionalism embodied by scientists such as Deng Jiaxian and Yuan Longping is not only something that every scientific and technological worker should learn and learn from, but is also worth learning by everyone.
◇The school launched a competition to establish a campus literary club.
◇Shaoxing rice wine is the largest rice wine production base in the country.
◇A large number of facts tell us that the disasters caused by terrorists have no national boundaries.
◇After fierce competition, Shanghai won the right to host the 2010 World Expo.
◇Recently, two newly discovered lost articles of Lu Xun from 1929 and 1934 were published in newspapers.
◇The fundamental purpose of developing productive forces in socialist countries is to improve people's living standards.
◇Today’s youth are responsible for building our country into a modern socialist power in this century.
Appendix 2: Eight Notes on Correcting Faulty Sentences
Analysis of speech defects is one of the required questions in high school entrance examinations in various places. How to identify language disorders is introduced in teaching books, and many teachers have also summarized many methods, such as the language sense reading method, the main branch and leaf combing method, the sentence analogy method, etc. However, these methods are cumbersome and difficult to operate. Throughout the past years, the author has looked at the test questions about modifying wrong sentences and found some familiar "faces". After careful study, I found that they have the same characteristics. Now they are summarized into eight points of attention. Here I will introduce them to you with examples. If we master the rules, we can It can quickly and effectively identify speech disorders and prescribe the right medicine to achieve twice the result with half the effort.
1. Pay attention to the collocation of related words.
In incorrect sentences involving complex sentences, we should pay attention to their associated words, consider whether the matching of the associated words is appropriate, whether the associated words are misplaced, whether the word order is reasonable, etc. There are two types of correlative words used in complex sentences: single use and paired use. If the correlative words that must be used in pairs are used in the sentence, you should pay attention to whether their matching is appropriate to see if there is any phenomenon of being pretentious. If it is a complex sentence with a progressive relationship, you should pay attention to whether the word order of the two clauses is reasonable and see if there are any language problems with inappropriate word order.
Example 1: Imagination is not only necessary for the poet's creation, but also necessary for the reader's appreciation.
Example 2: Both cadres and the masses, without exception, must abide by the socialist legal system.
(92 College Entrance Examination Questions)
Analysis: Example 1 is a complex sentence with a progressive relationship, using "not only...but also...", and "not" should be paired with "but", the example sentence is illegal The problem of Zhang Guanli Dai has been eliminated.
Example 2 "Whether" is an unconditional related word. It cannot be followed by a parallel phrase, but can only be a selective phrase. In the example sentence, "and" should be "or".
Ability improvement:
1. As long as you listen to the lectures well and complete the homework well, your academic performance can be greatly improved.
2. Now that you are here, it’s time for me to leave.
3. By using this compass, you will not lose your way no matter when the clouds are overcast or when the sun cannot be seen in the morning or evening.
4. Regardless of the extremely unfavorable climate and geographical conditions, the mountaineers still overcame the difficulties and successfully climbed to the top.
5. "Control yourself" is not only a manifestation of a good mental outlook, but also a requirement for daily behavioral norms.
6. During the construction of the Three Gorges Dam, no matter what difficulties the workers encountered, they were able to overcome obstacles and move forward indomitably.
2. Pay attention to sentences with words like "forbidden" and "prevent".
Some words, such as "forbidden", "prevent", "bogey", "avoid", etc., have the meaning of "try to prevent". Proposers often add negative words, causing the opposite meaning of the sentence and forming a language problem. . When answering a question, you must first review the meaning of the question, find out whether the original intention is to promote something or to prevent something, and then determine whether to keep or leave negative words.
Example: In order to prevent the SARS epidemic from rebounding, city leaders asked all units to further strengthen management and formulate strict preventive measures. (2003 Beijing Haidian District High School Examination Questions)
Analysis: The original meaning of the example sentence is "to prevent the rebound of SARS". If negative words are added, "prevent" and "no longer" form a double negative sentence, which expresses affirmation. , which is exactly the opposite of the original meaning and has become a linguistic disorder. "No" should be removed.
Ability improvement:
1. Three taboos when sleeping: The first taboo is not to be angry before going to bed, the second taboo is not to eat well before going to bed, and the third taboo is not to be in the wind when sleeping. (1994 college entrance examination questions)
2. Some parents do not realize that this is a disease, and use simple and crude methods to prevent their children from accessing the Internet.
3. In order to prevent similar vicious accidents from happening again, we must strengthen management and take strict preventive measures.
4. Students should not make up random things when writing essays. (2006 High School Entrance Examination Questions from Zhanjiang, Guangdong)
5. We should abide by traffic rules to avoid accidents. (2004 Hengyang High School Entrance Examination Questions)
6. How to prevent the US military stationed in Iraq from being exempted from accidents Being attacked by a car bomb is a headache for the US government.
3. Pay attention when there are multiple negative words in a sentence.
Proposers also like to use multiple negative words to confuse candidates, so we must have a clear understanding of rhetorical questions: a positive rhetorical question means a negative meaning, and a negative rhetorical question means a positive meaning; if A double negative sentence expresses a positive meaning. When there are multiple negative words, you might as well count how many there are, and then use the mathematical concept of "a negative to make a positive" to understand. If you find that there are redundant negative words that reverse the original meaning, then you can be sure that there is a speech problem, and you can Delete redundant negative words.
Example: With the development of science today, no one will deny that the earth does not orbit the sun.
Analysis: "No one will deny..." This double negative sentence already expresses a positive meaning, and is followed by the negative word "not...", which ultimately expresses a negative meaning. (Triple negative means negation.) “No” should be removed.
Ability improvement:
1. Of course the Lei Feng spirit must be given new connotations, but who can deny that there is no need to learn from Lei Feng now?
2. Today, when the concept of science and technology as the primary productive force is deeply rooted in the hearts of the people, who can not believe that high technology will not bring good news to mankind?
3. Shouldn’t those who ignore traffic rules not be blamed?
4. We must admit that the sun does not rise in the east and set in the west. .
5. No one can deny that the economic development in recent years is not the result of reform and opening up.
4. Pay attention to the prepositions in the sentence.
Speech problems are very easy to occur in the use of prepositions. This type of sentence often consists of two parts. One part is made up of a prepositional phrase as an adverbial, and the other part has a normal sentence stem. The proposer often sets a trap here, adding prepositions to both parts to hide the subject of the sentence. Resulting in a speech disorder with incomplete components. When revising, you will often find that any one of the two prepositions can be deleted. At this time, you still need to read the sentence carefully, especially the sentence with context, and only delete the redundant preposition after accurately grasping the real subject of the sentence.
Example: Through three years of study in junior high school, I have mastered a lot of knowledge and learned many principles of life. (2004 High School Entrance Examination Questions in Zhanjiang, Guangdong)
Analysis: The prepositions "pass...", "make..." and the following phrases form a prepositional phrase, turning the original subject into an adverbial, and the entire sentence has no subject. . One of the prepositions should be removed.
Ability improvement:
1. When I heard this story, it reminded me of many past events.
2. Through careful treatment by doctors, she quickly recovered to health.
3. Under the rude interference of the train conductor, Edison’s wish to sell newspapers and conduct experiments on the train was shattered.
4. With the help of teachers and classmates, he opened his mind and mastered problem-solving methods, and his grades improved significantly.
5. From the above-mentioned witnessed facts, it is proved that what they did is irreproachable.
5. Pay attention to the collocation and word order of parallel phrases.
Sentences of this type often use parallel phrases as the predicate part or object part, and the propositional speaker often has language problems such as improper collocation or improper word order. If you use a verbal parallel phrase as a predicate, you should pay attention to whether the word order is logical; in addition, you should pay attention to whether they can be matched with the preceding or following central phrase.
Example 1: We must solve and discover problems in learning in a timely manner. (2004 Changsha High School Entrance Examination Questions)
Example 2: The students watched and listened with reverence to the report of this brave hero.
Analysis: In Example 1, it is illogical to "solve" and then "discover" in the sentence of Example 1, which is a linguistic defect caused by inappropriate word order. It should be changed to "detect and resolve in time".
Example 2 In the parallel phrase "watching and listening", "listening" can be paired with "report", but "watching" and "listening" cannot be paired. The sentence suffers from improper collocation. .
Ability improvement:
1. Various newly discovered epidemics have made us correct and understand our bad hygiene habits.
2. Only by persisting in long-term smelting and arduous mining can we obtain a dazzling gold bead.
3. The old educated youth can see the feelings and states they have experienced in this book.
4. The students made their learning attitude and purpose clear.
5. After the party, her graceful dancing and beautiful singing still echoed in my ears.
6. Pay attention to sentences about increase or decrease in quantity.
Numerical words can be divided into exact numbers and approximate numbers. For this, we must master the rules for their use: words such as "at least", "most", "highest", "more than" and "lowest" cannot be added before the approximate numbers. ; When using words such as "reduce", "reduce" and "narrow", you cannot use multiples, otherwise conflicts will arise. If we master these rules well, we can avoid the proposition maker's trap. In addition, we should also pay attention to the occurrence of repetitive and wordy language problems.
Example 1: In the past 10 years, the annual number of book publications has more than doubled, while the total number of prints has remained basically the same, indicating that the average number of books has more than doubled.
Example 2: In the past 200 years, about one-third of the forests on the earth have been logged and destroyed.
Analysis: Example 1 cannot use multiples when using words such as "reduce", "reduce" and "drop". It should be changed to fractions or percentages.
Example 2 "About" and "About" both indicate uncertainty. If it is repeated, one of them should be deleted.
Capacity improvement:
1. After technological innovation, the cost of the material factory has doubled, while the output value has increased by 10%. (2005 Shandong Heze High School Examination Questions)
2. According to conservative estimates by relevant departments, the economic losses caused by this fire were at least 30 million yuan in direct losses.
3. Our Chinese textbooks are almost the thinnest in the world, several times smaller than similar textbooks in several major countries.
4. Due to the impact of SARS, the number of tourists visiting our city this year has more than doubled compared with the same period last year.
5. The National Development and Reform Commission recently issued a notice to significantly reduce the maximum retail prices of 24 commonly used drugs, with an average price reduction of 30% and a price reduction of approximately 3.5 billion yuan.
6. According to a survey, the number of smokers under the age of 18 in a certain community was as high as 120 the year before. After extensive publicity and education, it has dropped to 60 this year, which is exactly double the number.
7. Pay attention to the collocation of sentences such as "can" and "whether".
Be careful if there are words such as "can", "whether", "good or bad", and "whether" in the sentence. This sentence may be inappropriately collocated. Because these words bring up two situations, indicating double mention, most of them must be followed from two aspects so that they can be matched. However, the proposer often sets up language errors here. Some words that express single inheritance are followed by words such as "can" and "no" after the double mentioner, and some words that indicate dual inheritance are followed by the single mentioner, resulting in Logical errors that result in inconsistent meanings.
Example 1: The correctness of the content is an important criterion for measuring works.
Example 2: Doing a good job in production disaster relief depends on whether the cadres’ style is in-depth.
Analysis: "Whether the content is correct or not" in the front of Example 1 means double mention, but the corresponding word in the back is single mention, which is inconsistent and produces language problems. You can add "pros and cons" after "work" and delete "one".
Example 2 "Do a good job" is mentioned singly, and "whether it is thorough" is mentioned twice, which is inconsistent. You should add "can" before "do well".
Capacity improvement:
1. Whether the "stubborn disease" of Internet cafes can be cured is one of the conditions for ensuring the healthy growth of young people.
(2004 Changsha High School Entrance Examination Questions)
2. Whether there is a "farmer-oriented" concept is the key to solving the "three rural" issues. (2005 Foshan City Curriculum Reform District High School Entrance Examination Questions)
3. The quality of the machine is an important condition for ensuring production safety.
4. Whether the concept of education can be fundamentally changed is an important guarantee for us to solve the problem of comprehensively promoting the process of quality education.
5. Xiao Wang is full of confidence in whether he can learn computers well.
6. Whether water resources can be protected is a major issue related to the sustainable development of mankind.
8. Pay attention to the emotional tone of the words in the sentence.
Some sentences do not have the above-mentioned pathological characteristics, and there are no grammatical problems. In this case, you should pay attention to the emotional color of the idioms or words in the sentence. When reading the question, you should pay attention to the praise and derogatory meanings of the sentence and the used words. Whether the emotional color of the words matches.
Example: His serious and hard-working spirit of study is worthy of emulation by each of our classmates.
Analysis: "imitate" means "to learn from bad behavior", which is a derogatory meaning. It is inappropriate to be used here and should be changed to "learn".
Ability improvement:
1. The school enthusiastically praised Liu Ming for his courageous actions.
2. This speech contest exposed many students with quick thinking.
3. This journal will change its mind, continue to improve the editing quality of manuscripts, and is determined to climb to the high level of a literary journal.
4. Xiao Ming is always quick to quibble when he makes a mistake. If you say something to him, he will draw inferences and repay you many times.
5. Our army saw through the enemy's clever plan, rushed to Luding Bridge in advance, and eliminated them on the other side of the river.
6. The initiators of the initiative to invite the national flag, military flag and regional flag to travel into space are two young people who grew up under the five-star red flag...
These kinds of analysis The method for treating speech problems is simple, easy, fast and effective. Of course, not all speech disorders can be analyzed through these methods. When solving questions, you must analyze the specific situation and use problem-solving methods flexibly.
Answer:
1. 1. Change "can" to "ability"; 2. Change "should" to "should"; 3. Change "and" to "still";
4. Change " "Regardless" is changed to "despite"; 5 should be "not only a requirement of daily behavioral norms, but also a manifestation of a good mental outlook"; 6. Change "but can" to "can".
2. 1. Delete three "cannot"; 2.3.5. Delete "no" in the sentence 4. Delete "don't" 7. Delete "free"
three. Delete the "no" in 1. "not required", 2. "will not", 3. "not subject to", 4. "is not", and 5. "is not" respectively.
IV. 1.2.3. If there is no context in the sentence, you can delete "make" or the preceding preposition.
4. Delete "caizhi", 5. Delete "from...".
5. 1. "Correct and understand" should be "understand and correct"; 2. It should be "arduous mining and persistent smelting", 3. Delete "feelings and"; 4. Delete "attitude and"; 5. Delete "beautiful dancing posture".
6. 1. Change "double" to "half" or "50%"; 2. Delete "at least" or "more than";
3 .Change "several times" to "a fraction of"; 4.Change "more than one time" to "more than 50%"
5. Delete "about" or "about"; 6. .Change "one time" to one-half "or 50%".
Seven. 1. Delete "can it"; 2. Change "is it a solution" to "is it a solution";
3. Delete "is it good or bad"; 4. Change "is it us that can solve it" "It's whether we can solve it";
5. Change "can" to "can"; 6. Delete "can".
8. 1. "Behavior" is changed to "behavior"; 2. "Exposed" is changed to "emerge";
3. "Change one's mind" is changed to "Adjust the layout"; 4. "Learn from one instance" is changed to "Emerge" "Repudiation in every possible way"
5. "Ingenious plan" is changed to "conspiracy"; 6. "Instigator" is changed to "initiator".