550-word composition for the sixth grade of primary school: Visit the Tiger Beach Reservoir.
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This composition is about 550 words in the sixth grade of primary school. The title is "Tour Tiger Pool Reservoir". Everyone is welcome to contribute enthusiastically. Laohutan Reservoir is located in a mountain village in the northwest of Huzhou. This is a land of feng shui. Laohutan Reservoir is a beautiful place with beautiful scenery and rich products. I was so excited on the way to the reservoir!
There are many wild animals around the mountains and roads, including pheasants, rabbits and snakes. . . . . Roadside, lush trees, dense layers of branches and leaves will seal the forest tightly. We stopped at the dam. When I saw the Tiger Beach Reservoir, I felt relaxed and happy. The water in the reservoir is very clear, and there is no trace of cyanobacteria and impurities on the water surface, which can be seen at a glance!
The reservoir area is very large. From a distance, it looks like a "big lake" surrounded by mountains!
There are two small islands in the middle of the reservoir. I'm curious: how did these two islands form? Later, my father told me that before the reservoir was built, there were two hills with crops and towns under them. After the reservoir was built, the water overflowed halfway up the mountain, forming the island we see now. The beautiful Tiger Beach Reservoir is not only spectacular, but also can supply drinking water for 300,000 people in the city. Next year, we can drink the water from the Tiger Beach Reservoir!
Teacher's comment: This composition is described in the order that the author saw the Tiger Beach Reservoir. It is well organized. The author's language expression ability is very good. Fluent language, especially when describing the water quality of Laohutan Reservoir. It is very specific-"The water in the reservoir is very clear, and there is no trace of cyanobacteria and impurities on the water surface. You can see it at a glance!
"Let readers have the feeling of being there. At the beginning of the composition, the author tells the story of Laohutan Reservoir, which is a beautiful place with beautiful scenery and rich products. At the end, I wrote again: "The beautiful Tiger Beach Reservoir is not only spectacular-",but there is too little pen and ink to describe the beautiful scenery of Tiger Beach Reservoir, which makes readers not very impressed. However, as a junior high school student, it is very remarkable to have such expressive ability. (Xue Le China Special Teacher: Teacher Rodina) 2008-12-2211:54: 00.