Liang Zhu's first visit to Zhou Bangyan in the Song Dynasty.
Die Hua Lian Zao Hang
Song Dynasty: Zhou Bangyan
The moon is so bright that it is uncertain to live in the dark. If it leaks too much, it will be disabled, and the wheel will lead to the golden well. Arouse clear eyes. Tears are frozen in the neck, and cotton wool is cold.
Hand in hand, frosty wind blowing the shadow on the sideburns. Don't worry. Upstairs is the bucket handle. It is far from being able to cope with the cold.
This poem named "Leaving Love in the Morning" appeared between the lines of the traveler who left home in the autumn morning breeze. There is no direct emotional expression in the article, and there are few conjunctions between sentences. Therefore, the separation of feelings in the text is mainly accomplished through the different pictures described in each sentence, through the expressions, actions and performances of the characters.
Before the last film was written. The first three sentences make up a paragraph. "The moon is bright and the birds are restless" was written in the middle of the night. The moonlight is particularly bright, and the crows in the nest mistakenly think it is dawn, so they can't make up their minds whether to fly or not. This is summed up from the visual and auditory feelings, suggesting that the walker didn't sleep a wink all night. The words "more leaks will stop, and pulleys will lead to gold wells" are clear. This is written from the listening aspect. The leaking water drops are almost used up, and the night will stop. At the same time, there was the sound of pulley rotation in the distance and the bucket hit the wellhead. Someone has got up early to fetch water. These three sentences show the process from late at night to dawn. The sentence "arouse" is another paragraph, which translates the woman's sadness. In the past, there were two explanations for who was the motivation of arousal. One thinks he is a walker and "knows and arouses others"; One idea is "I woke up in tears when I heard the impact of darkness and the sound of pulleys." "Arousing" is not only the result of different sounds in the first three sentences, but also the inevitable process of time evolution: the time for parting has come. So as far as the whole article is concerned, it seems that the explanation behind it is better. If the explanation is that the walker "aroused" the woman, it naturally dilutes the profundity of separation expressed by this word. "shine at the moment" is not a refreshing feeling after a full sleep, but an emotional tension and concentration when leaving. In connection with the next sentence, "The tears on the neck are red and cold", it can be seen that these eyes were washed with tears, and there were tears after "arousing", so the first eye was "clear" and the second eye was "strong". At the same time, this sentence also secretly expressed the beauty of this woman and set off the atmosphere of hurting others. The word "cold" also reveals that the woman didn't sleep a wink all night. Tears have soaked the pillow core, and even the "red cotton" feels cold and cold.
The next film, write a farewell time, a farewell time. The first three sentences are reluctant to say goodbye, and the twists and turns are vivid. "Hand in hand", the hands of both sides are tightly held together when leaving. In ancient poetry, "holding hands" is mostly related to farewell, expressing deep affection. Liu Yong's poem "Yulin Chills" says, "Hand in hand, tears in my eyes, I am speechless." The Book of Songs says, "Hold your hand and grow old with your son." "Frosty wind blows the shadow on the temples" is the most profound impression that travelers have before they see the woman's face: the temples roll slightly in the autumn morning wind. The sentence "Don't worry, don't worry" seems to be writing about feelings, but it is actually writing about actions. The author left several times and turned back several times, pouring out parting words to each other. Words are full of sadness. "Ugliness" is not unpleasant, but heartbreaking and unbearable. After the last two sentences are written, the scene is another paragraph. Travelers are far away, but they don't want to look back at the tall buildings where women live. However, this tall building has disappeared on the horizon. In his eyes, he can only see bucket handle sideways, the sky is high and the clouds are light, the cold dew attacks people, and the chickens crow, making the journey more lonely. People are getting farther and farther away. Shen Yifu said in "Yuefu Finger Fan": "Every sentence should be put, with endless meanings and the best scene. Such as Zhenqing's "heartbroken hospital, a cheap wind." It is also' to cover the customs and lean on the city bells and drums'. "In fact," a cold man is far away from a chicken in a tired building in bucket handle "is also a successful quip of" being attached to the scenery ".
As mentioned above, the most striking feature of this word is that the whole sentence is composed of different pictures with different sounds. It is the perfect combination of this series of pictures and sounds that fully shows the inseparable parting and vividly reflects the passage of time, the changes of scenes, the expressions and actions of characters. We also pay special attention to capture some distinctive things to describe in detail, such as "Scaring Wu", "Leaking", "Pulley", "Frost Wind", "Shadows on the temples", "bucket handle" and "Cockcrow". At the same time, the author also pays special attention to the refinement of some verbs and adjectives, such as "habitat", "introduction" and "shout", as well as "blow", "clear" and "cold". This series of techniques not only enhances the expressive force of words, but also enhances the expressive force of words.