The beginning of a character description essay
1. The beginning of the character description
The title of the composition: "My Father".
1. Direct opening method
My father is short, slightly hunched, and walks with a hunchback, like a lame...
This is the most common opening method used by students, and it is also the simplest one. This kind of straight-forward beginning often makes the article seem dull. Here are four fresh ways to start.
2. Start with a classic sentence
1. Start with a poem.
"Don't wait for your hair to turn gray." My father is over forty and has turned gray, but he is still very ordinary...
2. Start with a common saying.
There is a saying in China that "three mallets cannot make a fart." My father is a man who doesn't like to talk...
You can also use couplets and idioms to start with. etc.
3. Beginning of appearance description:
Example 1: "My Favorite Friend"
I have a good friend who is inseparable. She has a pair of thin and long eyebrows on her chubby little face, and a pair of big watery eyes under her eyebrows. There is a eloquent cherry mouth under the exquisite and delicate nose. All in all, it's a cute little face. Do you know who she is? Let me tell you, she is my good partner - Zeng Yushu.
Example 2: "My favorite person"
My favorite person - mother. My mother is tall, has fair skin, is slim but not thin, plump but not fat, has thick curved eyebrows, and big bright eyes, which always reveal the light of wisdom. This is my mother. How about she be beautiful?
1. Appearance description + characteristics at the beginning:
Example 1: "My Grandma"
My grandma is a middle school teacher. She has a pair of piercing eyes under her black eyebrows. She is not tall and her slightly fat body is always busy. Grandma is an extremely serious and responsible person, and I admire her very much.
Example 2: "My Dad"
My dad is tall and thin, with a pair of particularly round eyes under his thick eyebrows, which often sparkle with wisdom and alertness. He has a charming demeanor and sometimes makes people feel a bit witty and humorous. He was only in his early forties, and for some reason, very little of his jet-black hair had fallen out. What I respect and admire the most is his hard-working spirit. 2. The beginning of an article describing a person (both men and women can do this)
How to write the beginning of an article about a person 1. Get straight to the point and introduce the character. It is late at night, and the stars are blinking happily in the night sky.
I turned over and woke up, and saw my father still writing something under the light. For many sleepless nights, my father always read and studied like this.
He is really a person who loves learning! This beginning has the following two characteristics: one is to explain the characters to be written about straight to the point, and the other is to summarize the things to be written about. There are not many sentences, but it shows us the image of a character who loves learning.
2. Describe the scenery and bring out the characters. When you walk into Grandpa Wang’s courtyard, it is like walking into a small garden with blooming flowers. You see, the pots of winter jasmine flowers have opened their smiling faces; the iris flowers have spread their colorful wings.
The snow-white pear blossoms, pink peach blossoms, and green Ophiopogon japonicus are so eye-catching. Who cultivated so many flowers? Let me tell you, it’s Grandpa Wang.
This beginning first describes the beautiful environment of the small courtyard, and then introduces the character Grandpa Wang. 3. Use language and action to introduce characters. A child about ten years old rushed out of the house.
He stuffed the fried cake into his mouth with his left hand, and threw his schoolbag over his shoulder with his right hand. He puffed his cheeks and moved.
He just ate "breakfast" and ran to school. This is a careless, careless child who lives an irregular life. His actions reflect his character.
4. Describe the appearance and highlight the characters. My little friend Zhou Qiang is very tall, with a pair of big watery eyes on his pink and white face, and his little nose is always turned up. , when he smiles, two small dimples appear on both sides of his cheeks. The bulging schoolbag slung over his shoulder contained not only books but also blueprints for small-scale science and technology production.
At the beginning of the exercise, name the character and prominently introduce his appearance. 5. Comment on the qualities and summarize the characters. My neighbor He Pingping is as old as me.
Although he has just moved into our building not long ago, the uncles and aunts in the building praise him as a bright and good boy. If someone forgot to pick up the evening newspaper, he would always take the initiative to deliver it to someone's door; if someone's clothes were hanging out to dry and were blown to the ground by the wind, he would always run back and forth to find the owner.
Everyone said that he shone with a kind of brilliance - a good idea of helping others. At the beginning of this article, a general introduction to He Pingping is given, and it is pointed out that the characters and ideological qualities should be written so that readers can have an overall impression of He Pingping.
As the saying goes: "Everything is difficult at the beginning." A good beginning can attract people, arouse readers' interest in reading, and enhance the appeal of the article.
Since the composition of writing about people is to develop narrative and description centered on the characters, express the characters’ ideological and personality characteristics, and use the characters’ ideological quality and spiritual outlook to educate and infect people, so when writing about people, , the characters written should be highlighted. At the beginning of the article, the characters are often introduced and described.
Therefore, write the beginning of your article about people. It is not only an indispensable part of character description, but also one of the differences between narrative and human writing. 3. The beginning of an excellent writing composition requires conciseness
My friend Qiu Chuanghao, Class 1, Grade 4, Dahao Middle School, Haojiang District, Shantou City, Guangdong Province Friends are indispensable social events in life for everyone, and each of them has a Good friends, people without friends will be very lonely, and I am no exception. I also have a very good friend.
Her name is Tingting. I met her online. We got to know each other as soon as we chatted. An incident happened between me and her, and I still remember that incident deeply in my mind. Let me tell you what happened. I remember that the season at that time was summer, and the weather was very hot that day. , I went to school very early at noon, but the time was not up, so the school gate was not open yet.
I stood there waiting for the school door to open. After standing for 20 minutes, I was sweating, and then the school guard came to open the door. After entering the classroom, about a class later, my head suddenly hit me. I fainted and lay with my head on the table to see if I could feel better. At this moment, a familiar voice said something and asked me if I felt uncomfortable. I looked up to see who it was, and it turned out to be the person I hated most, Tingting. How could she be so kind to ask me this question?
So I asked her if she wanted to laugh at me. She said with a very serious expression that she didn’t want to laugh at you. After a while, she applied the white flower oil on me and asked me if I was feeling well. What about a little? When school was over, she still insisted on sending me home because I was dizzy and I couldn't argue with her, so I let her send me home. After this incident, I went from hating her to being good friends with her, and we still study together today.
We all have the same desire to be a doctor and save people. ……┏ (^ω^)=. 4. Examples at the beginning of character description
Total score writing method/method 1: total writing→partial writing (appearance changes) 3. Total score writing method method 1: total writing→partial writing (appearance changes) )Enjoyment Essay: Reading Taste Experience Essay Subtle Paragraph My mother works as a teacher in a health school.
She has a pair of bright big eyes under her thick eyebrows, a nagging mouth under her straight nose, but she has a caring heart in her heart. Featured comments: First write about the mother's identity, and then write about the mother's appearance characteristics.
Green witticism: A famous teacher guides you to write a wonderful enlightening paragraph. Observation guidance: Appearance description refers to the character’s appearance, clothing, and expression. Description of posture.
We must observe carefully, strive to be refined and innovative, and choose materials that express the teacher's personality and style. You should capture their unique characteristics and express them through ordinary things.
Writing guidance: When describing the appearance of a character, you must grasp the characteristics and describe them in a certain order. It is necessary to grasp the essential characteristics of the characters and write them accurately and vividly so that readers can see them as they are.
In this way, the characters are written vividly. Childlike innocence and fun: Accumulating recharge reading experience gold version. Teacher Sun is the math teacher of our class.
She is of medium build and looks 35 years old. An amiable face, always so kind.
The eyes from those black-rimmed glasses are always so bright and kind. Her language is always so profound, so wonderful and makes people laugh.
This female teacher’s surname is Song. Because she is young, no more than 20 years old, so we all call her Teacher Xiao Song, and some female classmates affectionately call her Big Sister. Teacher Xiao Song is tall and dressed simply.
Guazi has two willow eyebrows on his face, with a pair of bright and sharp eyes embedded under the willow eyebrows, and a small mouth that can speak well. Teacher Xiao Song wore two long ponytails that reached her shoulders.
When I was in fourth grade, our class was taught by a female teacher. This female teacher’s surname is Song. Because she is young, no more than 20 years old, we all call her Teacher Song, and some female classmates affectionately call her Big Sister.
Teacher Xiao Song is tall and dressed simply. There are two willow eyebrows on Guazi's face, with a pair of bright and sharp eyes embedded under the willow eyebrows, and a small mouth that can speak well.
Teacher Xiao Song wore two long ponytails that reached her shoulders. Green suggestions: Another reminder on the key points of writing guidance methods: 1. Pay more careful observation and pay attention to the characteristics of various characters.
Familiarity with characters is the prerequisite for writing good characters. 2. When describing characters, you should pay attention to the environment in which the characters live and the relationship between the characters; characters live and move in society. If you do not pay attention to the social environment and the relationship between the characters, you will not be able to write well about the characters.
Green Action: A new experience in innovative practice of happy composition (writing about the teacher’s appearance)—————————————————————————— —————————————————————————————————————————————— ————————————————. (write about dad’s appearance)———————————————————————————————————————— —————————————————————————————————————————————— ——————————————————————.
Method 2: Total writing → divided writing (characteristic changes) Enjoy the composition: read, taste and experience the exquisiteness of the composition. Duan Fengcheng is a classmate of our class. He is not tall, and his eyes are big and bright, especially his two big ears and two thick lips, which look like a large bell.
For this reason, his classmates gave him the nickname-"Big Bell". It's a coincidence that from the second grade to the present, Feng Cheng opens and locks the door of the classroom every day, like a bell, and this nickname has spread.
Featured comments: First write the name of the character, and then introduce the two characteristics of the character. Green witticism: A famous teacher writes a wonderful enlightening paragraph. Observation guidance: 1. Be able to grasp the character's movements, changes in demeanor, speech, psychological activities and other characteristics to observe in detail.
2. Be able to observe a complete thing based on the character’s nickname characteristics. Especially being able to observe the process of things in detail.
Writing guidance: Introduce the characteristics of the character at the beginning. Then focus on the characteristics at the beginning, carefully select materials, and use specific examples to express the personality characteristics of the characters.
Innocence and childishness: Accumulate the gold version of recharge reading experience. My deskmate Zhang Shan is quite delicate and graceful, but she is nicknamed "Zhang Luneng" as a young boy. Li Lamei became the health committee member of the "two stripes" because of her nosy nature.
Even though she is a small "official" and short in stature, she has a high voice. No matter who did something wrong, she will get to the bottom of it and make you admit your mistake.
Therefore, I secretly changed her name to "Spicy Plum". As soon as the invigilator came in, the talking in the classroom immediately stopped.
His high nose bridge, black and long eyebrows, are inlaid with a pair of bright eyes, and a thick beard grows under his nose, making people know at a glance that this is a stern man. invigilator. He glanced around the classroom before he began to speak: "Students, today is the time when you report your primary school academic performance to the motherland. You must do the questions carefully without being careless. After receiving the test paper, you must read the questions clearly. , don’t look around, whisper to each other, answer the test carefully, and strive to get good grades.”
Green suggestions: Tips on the key points of writing guidance 1. Be able to observe the activities of the characters with your own thoughts and feelings. 2. Pay attention to the details of the character's actions, speech, facial expression changes, psychological activities, etc., to describe a certain aspect of the character's characteristics in detail.
Pay special attention to the character’s nickname characteristics and spiritual qualities. Green Action: Innovative Practice, Happy Composition, New Experience Zhang Lu is a young painter in the Appearance Class.
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Composition is half of the Chinese language exam and cannot be ignored.
How to make the article attract the attention of the marking teacher? I think creating a wonderful beginning and ending is the most critical part. So how to guide students to write a good beginning and end? In my teaching practice, the author summarized several methods and shared them with everyone.
■Method 1: Use and imitate sentences from modern poetry. [Example 1] Sometimes, pursuit is like a short wooden bridge, with trouble at this end and happiness at the other end.
Sometimes, pursuit is like a graceful lotus, ugly at the bottom and beautiful at the top. Sometimes, pursuit is like a strong cup of coffee, bitter on the outside but sweet on the inside.
(Beginning) [Comment] The author obviously imitated the poem "Nostalgia" by Taiwanese poet Yu Guangzhong, and transformed the pursuit into wooden bridges, lotus flowers, and coffee, which is vivid, vivid, and unique. ■Method 2: Quoting poems and editing them yourself, that is, cleverly embedding ancient poems into your own expression.
[Example 2] Pursuit is the wind, "The good wind sends me to the blue clouds with its strength"; Pursuit is the sword, "One sword has blocked millions of divisions, and won fame and fame before the king"; Pursuit is water , "Promote the dance of thousands of sails in the river, and the flow will last forever." Learn to pursue it, my friend! If you pursue, you will find a little happiness in your life; if you pursue, you will find that there is infinite beauty in your life.
(End) [Comment] Quoting poetry in articles can increase literary talent and show one's cultural heritage. ■Method 3: Use parallel sentences to enhance the momentum.
Parallel sentences are not only rich in the beauty of square and neat forms, the beauty of relaxed and measured rhythm, and the beauty of overwhelming and surging momentum, but also have the ability to unfold scenes concretely and vividly, explain truths rigorously and clearly, and express true and passionate emotions. effect. [Example 3] If we learn to pursue, we will be the generals who plan strategies; if we learn to pursue, we will be the leaders who guide the country and with soaring pride; if we learn to pursue, we will be the helmsmen of the boat of life; if we learn to pursue, we will be good at pursuing, and we will be comfortable and happy. Successful modern people.
(End) [Comments] These whole sentences are catchy to read and are lyrical and can enhance the momentum of the language and have strong appeal. They are a beautiful scenery in the article. ■Method 4: Use metaphors skillfully and vividly.
Metaphors can turn abstraction into concreteness and the profound into simplicity, making expressions vivid and truths easy to understand. [Example 4] Life is like a bag of walnuts. When you find that one is broken, you should not be angry or discouraged, but should patiently look at the next one, because in this bag, there are good and bad. In life, there are both good and bad. There is pain, trouble, but also happiness and hope. I cannot give up the opportunity to get happiness because of temporary pain. This opportunity is for us to fight for, discover, and pursue.
(Beginning) [Comment] The author compares life to a bag of walnuts, how clever and novel it is, which naturally leads to the truth that life has both pain and joy.