Portrait description composition 800-word cleaner
I saw her sweeping the floor with a broom in one hand and a poker with a long handle in the other. She first swept the ashes into a pile with a broom, then put the stamp in front of the ashes, then swept the ashes in with a broom, and finally dumped the ashes into the gray garbage truck next to her. Then, I pulled the car to the next place. . It seems nothing unusual, but I was deeply moved-look at her face, sweat rolling on her gray face; Look at the car next to her, it's almost full-she's been sweeping a lot of places for a long time.
She is still sweeping the floor, and she is getting more and more energetic. The sound of cicadas desperately chirping on the roadside trees was gradually swallowed up by the sound of sweeping the floor. She seems to have forgotten everything. At this time, in her eyes, there are only neat and clean roads.
She looked at every pedestrian and vehicle with unspeakable satisfaction.
At this time, three boys aged 14 or 15 came. They are eating popsicles. On the roadside, it was a trash can, but they didn't seem to see it, so they threw the popsicle paper on the ground. The cleaner saw it and shook his head gently, but said nothing, quietly walked over, swept away the popsicle paper and returned to the distance. The cleaner looked at the three boys again. Three boys saw it, blushed in the blink of an eye, and walked past her with their heads down.
The voice of "sasha vujacic" came again, louder and louder, and reached my heart.
2. Composition describing the appearance of cleaners Snow falls like blown petals. It landed on the roof, on the tree and on the river, and the world became a silvery white world. (Start with the description of the scenery. This snow description has three functions: 1. Explain the time; 2. The actions of the characters written below are directly related to snow; 3. Set off the pure hearts of the characters with snow. )
In the morning, I went shopping. Whoa, whoa, I looked at the sound. (It is better to change "Xiang Sheng" to "Shun Sheng". ) I saw a vague figure. Tall and thin, with a broom, walk slowly forward. It's him, an old cleaner I see every day. He is still so early, still the same, sweeping the road step by step. (This article describes what * * * looks like four times. This is the first time. Standing in the distance, I can only see a vague outline: "tall and thin")
I deliberately passed by him and saw a pair of kind eyes and an old, wrinkled and weather-beaten face. At this time, he is concentrating on sweeping the snow, so attentively and so seriously. ("Concentrate", "Careful" and "Serious" echo the "Slowly" and "Step by Step" in the previous section, and write down the action characteristics. He swept the snow into piles first, then picked it up in piles, and then staggered into the garbage dump.
Suddenly, he noticed that the sewer not far away was blocked. He walked quickly over and wrote the old man's hand with his hands as dry as gray bark. The second appearance description. "I" came to "his side", so I can describe the face in detail. ) Dig out the snow bit by bit until it is clear. At this time, a pleasant smile appeared on his face. However, his hands were red with cold. He doesn't care, as if he is used to it. He then swept forward, the tall figure gradually disappeared, leaving a clean road behind him. The three descriptions of the appearance are not beautified out of thin air, but are true descriptions. The appearance characteristics of the old man are consistent with his long-term work and extremely serious and responsible attitude, so the appearance description plays a role in praising the characters' hearts. )
Snow, white and flawless, and that white hair (fourth appearance description. It combines the old man's white hair, mind and snow, emphasizes the center and points out the topic. ) The cleaner's mind is purer and more beautiful than snow.
3. composition about the appearance of cleaners after school every day, students who don't do cleaning are really lucky. Because now the garbage is more and more cunning, cunning, cunning. Can these rubbish deal with us for so long without cunning? Today, we will make a comeback and launch an unprecedented "clean war"!
One: Leaf guerrilla warfare.
"Wow-"A gust of wind blew and we sighed in the classroom. Why? Not only because the leaves of the commons are playing again, the more they play, the more they play; The more they are, the more we pick up; If we don't answer, the school will deduct our class scores; When the class scores are deducted, the teacher will invite us to the office and then educate us with golden words? I can't help but get goose bumps when I think of this. "Let's go! Go down! " Several classmates and I ran to the public land with weapons (brooms and gloves). At first glance, the scene is extraordinary: some leaves are lying on the ground bathed in sunshine; Some leaves are still fluttering in the air with the wind, dancing "air ballet", and the ups and downs of laughter seem to reverberate in our ears for a long time; Others fall on our heads and laugh at us stupid students. No way.-pick it up! Needless to say, some of us stoop to pick up the leaves on the ground; Some hold brooms and dance with leaves; The others just went up and asked for backup. Indeed, many hands make light work. In less than twenty minutes, we wiped out the last few leaves. Several striking workers have been panting, and their mouths are intermittent: "This? Can we go back to the classroom now? Really? " I was just about to say goodbye, but to our surprise, more leaves attacked us more violently with the help of the wind. We were ready to go for the best, but Ye Juntuan caught us-two teachers on duty stared at us. If there are two "old men on duty" as cover, wouldn't Ye Bingtuan be marching? Then we have to play hardball. "Sisters! Kill-!" "kill!" All the soldiers rushed over and launched an unprecedented life-and-death struggle with Ye Zi. We won this thrilling battle!
Two: the garbage smell war.
After all, we have one of the strongest enemies-taking out the garbage. We have to dump the enemy's remains into the garbage dump. The garbage station is not only the headquarters of all "enemies", but also the hometown of flies and mosquitoes. They forced us to give up halfway with a strong smell. As long as they end the nest, they will win a great victory! A classmate and I came to the garbage station with a trash can and blocked our noses with a lump of paper to prevent the smell from invading. Then we smiled at each other and ran to the garbage station. There are jars and water bottles everywhere on the stairs, and there are several leaves on a lump of rice. Flies are camping in this "villa", and there are maggots, oh! I patted my chest, climbed onto the platform with my classmates and took out the garbage. I ran downstairs as fast as I could. I have been panting and said to this classmate, "It's finally over, let's go home!" " ""yes! "This time we made a decisive decision and caught the enemy off guard, making them unable to strike back, ha ha ha?
In this clean war, we not only eliminated the "enemy", but also ushered in a "clean world" revolution! It seems that this week's clean flowing red flag belongs to our class.
4. The composition describing the appearance of the characters is 800 words. "A worker's uncle"
Whenever I stand on the balcony and look at the buildings in the second phase of the community, I think of a worker who works in the second phase of the construction site-Uncle Zhang.
Uncle Zhang is about thirty, and his life is very hard. When he came to Liuzhou from the countryside to find a job, he was hired to work in the second phase of our community. Look! How energetic his thick black hair looks! Square face, thick curved eyebrows and bright eyes. Under the eyes is a nose that doesn't stand up very well, and a glib mouth. Uncle Zhang wears very simple clothes and is clean every day. Give everyone a grin first, which makes people feel that he is very kind. At work, Uncle Zhang is also serious and responsible. He never complained about his food, clothing, housing and transportation on the construction site, but worked hard in his obscure job. Every day is his earliest and latest, but he never cares how much he pays. I admire uncle Zhang's serious and responsible attitude towards his work and like him very much.
I remember once, my mother went to the second-phase construction site to find Uncle Zhang and asked him to buy a garage buried water pipe for our family in the second phase. Uncle Zhang agreed without thinking, and immediately walked to my garage with his toolbox. But it's getting late now. My mother wants Uncle Zhang to bury the water pipe again tomorrow. But uncle Zhang refused to say anything, insisting on doing it now, saying that he was afraid of delaying our time tomorrow. Mother had no choice but to carry a fully charged charging lamp and come to my garage with Uncle Zhang. Under the dim charging lamp, Uncle Zhang began to bury the water pipe.
He took a heavy hoe and knocked on the hard concrete floor again and again, trying to dig a hole. With the passage of time, the concrete floor gradually smashed a pit. But uncle Zhang is exhausted. Thin sweat oozed from his head, and his hands were covered with blood after a day's work, but he totally ignored it and still pounded hard. Finally, the hole is enough to bury the water pipe, and Uncle Zhang breathed a sigh of relief. Then, he took out the water pipe and buried it in the ground, and skillfully connected another pipe with the water pipe. Soon, many processes were completed. After uncle Zhang turned on the tap and showed it to his mother, he packed his toolbox and left. Mother asked Uncle Zhang to come to our house for dinner, but Uncle Zhang politely refused and left with his toolbox on his back. I looked at Uncle Zhang's fading back, and I felt a sense of admiration in my heart, and I liked Uncle Zhang more and more. Recently, Uncle Zhang was also rated as a "model worker" on the construction site!
Now, Uncle Zhang is famous in our community. As long as people mention Uncle Zhang, they will be amazed and say that he is a hard-working and helpful worker!
5. The composition cleaner who describes the character 1. You are beauticians of the city and ambassadors for a better future. We praised you as a "cleaner"! We praise you! No matter whether it is cold or hot, you stick to your post and shuttle on all roads. The beauty of the city is inseparable from you, and the health of the city is inseparable from you. You are a member of the urban beautification family!
2. At dawn, industrious sanitation workers came to the empty street with brooms and tweezers and swept the street hard. They cleaned every place in the street, leaving no corner and no dust. In the golden autumn world where red leaves are like fire, sanitation workers sweep the dirty streets in order with the joy of harvest, bright smiles and full of confidence.
I remember a sunny afternoon in midsummer, and I returned to the gate and walked as usual. I saw the cleaning lady sweeping the road. He swept the broom next to it and wrote it carefully like a primary school student. The strong sunlight shone mercilessly on her. Her clothes were soaked with sweat. Although wearing a sun hat, his face was covered with sweat the size of a bean.
In the storm, a hunchback dressed in bright orange pulled a long broom and dustpan to sweep the garbage on the roadside. I clearly see that he is an old grandfather. His eyes are trapped in it, as if he were seriously ill. I ran over and said, "Grandpa, please have a rest." Look at you. Not tired? ""not tired. I can't help sweeping. If I don't sweep, the city will not be beautiful. " Grandpa said excitedly, have a rest! It is raining. "I can't bear to say. Grandpa stood up and said earnestly, "if we don't sweep, who will?" "If we are a little tired, everyone will be healthy!" "Well, I thank you on behalf of the whole world!" I bowed and left with tears in my eyes. I vaguely saw the old man bent down again and swept up seriously and quickly.
6. A paragraph describing the appearance of the cleaner. I respect the people I respect. Do you know who it is? You must not know! I'm telling you now that the person I respect is a cleaner.
I didn't think so before. Later, the facts educated me and made me change my mind.
When I was a guest at my sister's house, I often heard waves of "rustling, rustling" sweeping the floor outside the window, which interrupted my thinking of doing my homework and made me unable to do my homework. I can't sleep when I hear this sound, so I hate this sound. I hate the person who makes this sound-the cleaner. I don't think these cleaners can do great things, so they have to do such dirty and poor work.
Once, I went to the store on the street and bought candy and melon seeds. When I got home, I sat at the window eating melon seeds and candy, reading a book and throwing my shell out of the window.
In less than half an hour, I ate all the sweets and melon seeds I bought. Later, I ran upstairs to watch TV.
Watching, I heard that kind of "rustling" sound again. I think those nasty cleaners are sweeping the floor again.
So, I rushed to the window to look. At this moment, I saw the cleaner taking pains to clean the floor of the window.
He didn't clean it several times, but he didn't give up. He continued to sweep, sweeping out the melon seeds embedded in the cracks in the bricks, and even dug out the shells that could not be swept out by hand and tore up the candy paper stuck to the ground. My face turned red because I knew I had caused trouble to the cleaner.
It's really wrong for me to think for myself. If all people in the world were like me, what would the world be like? Isn't that a garbage world? Thanks to these cleaners, the world has become so clean and beautiful.
I will never litter again. I will respect the cleaners. On National Day, I watched TV at home and ate some delicious food.
How cozy! At this time, I saw people traveling around on TV, but the cleaners cleaned the streets in obscurity, getting up earlier than usual, doing more and being more tired. They don't want to work more because they don't earn much money. On the contrary, they work harder to make the environment cleaner, cleaner and more beautiful.
How touching it is that the cleaners are so selfless and dedicated! Here, I want to remind you not to litter and shell, let the cleaners work less and rest more, make the motherland better and the world more prosperous! You can't copy it completely. Last night, the fragrance floated ten miles, and now a city is scattered. The old year added life to others, and Kangling was clean.
Who created this great miracle? It's you, cleaner! Cleaner, I want to say thank you! You, the unknown great men in Qian Qian, not only have to create miracles for everyone in this happy festival, but you have been working hard in the scorching sun, cold nights, strong winds and heavy rains for many years.
It is you who let Luffy's sprinkler shed a fresh dawn; It's you, waving a broom, wiping away the dirt of the city, making the city clean and radiant, and welcoming the first kiss in the morning of the East.
If someone asks: Do you feel hot? I think everyone will definitely say without hesitation: "Hot! Very hot! " Yes, in mid-June, we were surrounded by the summer craze! Especially at noon, the bustling community in the past is now deserted! People hide in air-conditioned rooms to enjoy the cool. In such hot weather, the only thing I admire is the cleaners who work hard to clean the streets.
Look! Glittering sweat soaked their clothes, and the burning sun made their faces red. It was a weekend afternoon. On my way to the swimming pool, I suddenly met a cleaner cleaning the cesspool.
Under the scorching sun, he unscrewed the pool cover with pliers and then went down to dig dung. I saw his lower body sink into manure and pull it out one by one with his own hands. This cesspit is five meters long and three meters wide.
It will take at least one afternoon. I asked myself strangely: it's so hot, why did he dig dung in the cesspool? I asked their monitor with questions. The monitor said: "Because this is to serve the interests of the people, we must persist even if we try harder. This cleaner is an advanced member of our team, but his salary has only been reported to 800 yuan. "
"Then why not promote his official position?" I asked in surprise. The captain said: "In fact, the superior has long wanted to promote his official position, but what's the use?" He himself disagreed. "
After listening to this touching story, I couldn't help being moved. I have given up the idea of going to the swimming pool to soak in it to cool off. I just want to stay here quietly. After a while, I went to the cleaner and said kindly, "Uncle, you have worked hard, have a rest!" " "But he said firmly," This is for the public, and it can't be delayed for a minute. "
I watched him work silently, and my eyes couldn't help being "stunned". Time is getting faster and faster, and more and more people are crowded around.
Everyone offered condolences, and some asked, "Are you thirsty? Is it hot? " Some asked, "Have a rest!" Countless greetings and countless concerns were deceived by his beautiful lies. Everyone thinks the same as me: even serving the public doesn't have to be so hard! After an afternoon, the cleaner dug out the cesspool and left quietly.
Looking at his distant back, I gradually understand that he is a noble person around me, working hard for everyone to live in a beautiful environment in obscurity. When heroes are mentioned, people will think of soldiers who fought for the revolution in battle, or people who made contributions in a certain scientific field, or people who were brave.
And the heroes I'm talking about today are a group of ordinary people. They are cleaners. Although they look simple and simple, they are no different from us.
But they are really amazing, which is a fact that we can see for ourselves. The cleaner is so small, but so noble.
They are the guardians of Green Home and beautiful homeland. Day after day, year after year.
Dedicated silently in that humble post. In summer, when we are still enjoying the cool at home, they stick to their posts in the heat. They never seem to be afraid of the warmth of the sun and the pungent smell of garbage.
The sweat on his face was crystal clear in the sun.
7. The composition describes the appearance of the characters. Most of the people you worship are famous scientists or famous stars and great men, but I worship an unknown street angel and a cleaner.
This year's Golden Week, I wanted to visit Jinhu in Taining on the 2nd, but I happened to meet typhoon 19. This good plan was destroyed by the typhoon. When I walked out of the house, I saw that the typhoon made the roadside full of accumulated soil, and it sank when I stepped on it. Everyone is walking around. But the cleaners are dirty or not. They put on masks, rain boots and kept waving shovels. They don't bother to wipe when they are sweating. It's really hard. Thinking that I was full of complaints just now and watching them clean up the city for us and make it beautiful and colorful, I feel really small.
I once saw a report on the Internet: "A cleaner was hit by a group of posters while brushing a small advertisement at a bus stop." These people who put up small advertisements are really, obviously wrong. Not only do they not admit their mistakes, but they also beat the cleaners. That's disgusting.
Some people look down on them because of their humble position, and because they are dirty, they avoid them everywhere when they see them But if there are no cleaners on our earth, the earth will be dirty everywhere, and then the earth will be miserable. Have you ever thought about this situation? In fact, cleaners are engaged in the industry of cleaners because their knowledge level is not high enough. But they still contribute to society.
How ordinary and great the cleaners are. They make our city so clean and beautiful. I think their value is much higher than ours. Mom said: "In fact, you are also very valuable, because you have done what you should do-learning without asking for rewards, of course, thinking about how to contribute to the motherland in the future!" After listening to my mother's words, I seem to feel my value.
8. High school students' portrait description composition is 900 words. From a distance, it is actually a reunion. It is also composed of circles at close range, but it is really pear-shaped.
For onions, the top is the peak, which consists of clusters of hair near the top. Looking down, it is dark red skin. Face in the middle of nose, nothing special. Looking down, it is the kind that is inconspicuous in the crowd, but it is so humorous to connect his five senses.
Look up a little, especially the eyes. Blinking is the most distinctive. When you close your eyes, you always squeeze all the muscles around you before opening them. This may be his habit of blinking, or everyone blinks like this, but the phenomenon is more obvious when he eats so much meat.
Look at that mouth again. It's fleshy and longer than the nose. It's chin and face. Layers of fat accumulated to form the present double chin, and a plump face bouncing when walking. Strange to say, the fat sank strangely and formed a pear shape, which was really cute.
The second part: How to write the characters vividly. 1. culture target 1. Master two basic methods of describing characters. 2. Improve the ability to use portraits, language, movements and psychological descriptions to write characters. 2. The main points guide the description of characters, including direct description and indirect description.
The direct description of the characters is the description of the characters themselves. Portrait, language, action, psychology and other techniques can usually be used to express. One of the common mistakes in middle school students' compositions is to use abstract words instead of specific descriptions. Replace individual descriptions with general descriptions, such as "big eyes, round face", which are all the same, with a thousand people and a thousand mouths.
However, when writing a successful article, the characters in the author's works always make people feel that they have seen that person, heard his voice and written the characters "vividly". What is to write a character "alive"? It is to write by grasping the biggest feature that distinguishes a character from other characters, and to write the character, which makes people feel that it is "this one" rather than "that one".
So, how can we write the word "live"? Let's talk about the application of general methods first. 1. Portrait description captures the portraits of characteristic people, including static (appearance, figure, clothes, etc. ) and dynamic (expression, posture, etc. ).
A very important principle of portrait description is that the thinking of writing should be linked with the inner world and personality characteristics of the characters everywhere. Through portrait description, readers can see a concrete living person. Some people think that to have a "vivid image", you must brush your pen and ink, but it is not necessarily true.
Portrait description methods are varied, some need to be carefully carved, and some need a few strokes. Some portraits are described at one time, while others are described at different times, occasions, angles and levels.
Which description method is adopted depends on the needs of the content expression of the article. Mr. Lao She brilliantly pointed out in the article "Character Description": "In addition to professional characters, the appearance is naturally to be described, which needs to be fully observed and subtly revealed. For example, someone's chin is as bright as a heel, or someone's neck is like a chicken leg ... This description is enough, which will immediately make the characters jump out of the paper and stay in the reader's memory forever.
On the other hand, it is thankless to describe a big article slowly, and what is described can be applied to many people. "Visible, portrait description is not about how much, the key is to be good at grasping the characteristics and drawing vividly. Please look at Mr. Lu Xun's description of Yang Er's sister-in-law in Hometown: prominent cheekbones and thin lips; Hands sandwiched between moustaches, no skirt, feet spread out, just like thin-legged compasses in drawing instruments.
A few strokes can draw her appearance features, from which we can get a general understanding of her vitriolic character. Mr. Tang Tao's portrait of Mr. Lu Xun in "Memories of Petty bourgeoisie" is like this: he looks at a thick beard, his eyes are bright, and his head is covered with stubborn clusters of straight hair, as if he were confessing his disharmony with real life everywhere. How to write the characteristics of Mr. Lu Xun The author only uses "bright eyes" and "straight hair" to write Mr. Lu Xun's keen insight and spirit of fighting against the dark society.
In a few thrifty strokes, the image of a great soldier who fought against evil forces with perseverance was clearly presented to us. 2. The description of words and deeds refers to the monologue and dialogue description of characters, and the description of actions is the description of actions of characters.
Listening to his words and observing his actions, a character's words and deeds are closely related to his personality, psychology and emotion. The description of a character's words and deeds must conform to his identity and reveal his unique personality. Personality is the life of art, and it is also the life of a character. We can't copy the real life into the article, we must analyze and choose, and we must grasp the distinctive words and deeds that can best express the characters' thoughts and characters and their changing characteristics, in order to write the characters "alive".
In Xia Yan's Contract Worker, there is a passage about the boss writing Take Workers to persuade villagers who can't "feed" but can't bear to let their children starve to death in famine years: "Needless to say, we live in the house of Yangqi Company, eat fish and meat, and take two days off a month to play on the road. Hey, dozens of high-rise houses, two-story cars and all kinds of foreign things are beautiful and easy to use ... you must see them for the rest of your life! Work for three years, and the money you earn will be yours! We are fellow villagers and have friendship.
Take it away from me. What is the difference? Can I still go home? "This personalized character language vividly reveals the sinister intentions contained in the contractor's rhetoric fraud. Language description, especially the dialogue of characters, should also be accurate, concise and vivid, "avoid nagging words", "don't talk too much about dialogue" (Lu Xun's language), and don't copy the dialogue in life into the article.
The description of characters' actions is the same as that of language. Don't copy real life into the article, but also analyze and choose, and describe it by grasping the distinctive actions and their changing characteristics that can best express the characters' thoughts and characters. At the same time, in the use of descriptive language, we should pay attention to the choice of verbs that express behavior and actions, and carefully choose words that can best express the modal of characters' actions. Don't take care of one thing and lose sight of another, so that the actions of the characters have no characteristics and can't show their unique characteristics.
Such as "Fan Jinzhong Ju".