Writing a composition with hollow disease as the key word

topic composition is a hot topic in college entrance examination composition in recent years.

According to the prediction of relevant experts, topic composition will also be the trend of college entrance examination composition in the next two or three years. Therefore, we must deepen our understanding of topic composition and strengthen the training of topic composition.

The topic of conceptual interpretation is the center of conversation, and it is the scope or origin involved in describing or discussing the content. Topic composition is to talk about things from the beginning, to express feelings and to write ambitions.

topic composition has existed since ancient times. Lin Daiyu and Jia Baoyu in A Dream of Red Mansions, their poetry clubs, often focus on one thing and write poems.

Among them, there are those who chant chrysanthemums, those who chant Haitang and those who have the theme of Grand View Garden. Now, we often see this form of composition on TV. Some program hosts in different columns often chat with the audience. They either talk about tea classics or chess, or scan people's spring and autumn, or tell people's stories, or comment on current events.

A prominent feature of topic composition is its greater openness and freedom. Its openness and freedom are reflected in two aspects: first, the scope of the topic is broader, and the content that can be included in the topic is richer.

As mentioned above, those who recite chrysanthemums will write about dreaming, remembering, offering and painting chrysanthemums. On the way of chess, chess skill, chess morality and chess style are all accepted. Another example is the 2 college entrance examination composition "The answer is colorful", as long as it is written around "can be colorful" and "should be colorful", it is in line with the meaning of the question.

Second, there is no restriction on the style, which can be narrated, discussed and lyrical; You can also write a narrative discussion, a lyrical argumentative essay, or even a novel, script, etc. The writing can be flexible and diverse. Therefore, topic composition provides a broad world for students to play their level. Its writing purport is to pursue divergent and creative thinking, and requires bold imagination, free play, analogy and analogy.

This proposition is a great liberation of the writing dogma that binds students' hands and feet. Because of this, topic composition has been widely concerned and favored in recent years, such as exam composition (from 1998 to 22) and competition composition (such as "Three New Cups" composition contest of China Youth Daily).

Topic composition is different from traditional "material composition". Although most topic compositions also have materials, the materials of topic compositions have different functions from those of material compositions.

the "material" of "material composition" is the starting point and destination of conception, which generally provides the central opinion, and this central opinion is often the foundation for students to write. The "materials" provided by the "topic composition" are only the "pre-writing guidance" made by the proposer, a "header" that causes students to think, an example that inspires students to open their minds, an attachment that students develop associations, and a "one" that draws inferences from others.

The hollow tree is a big tree in the village. Everyone in the village feels that they can't live without it. They eat and enjoy the cool. Rest and shelter from the rain, people all go down to the tree. The big tree is like a bond that ties the hearts of a village.

Whether it's a painstaking thing or a happy thing, once you vent under the big tree, the painstaking thing is not so painstaking after everyone advises you; Similarly, once happy things are shared by everyone, they become more happy. To say that tree species, native Sophora japonica, are everywhere and not valuable.

speaking of materials, the tree is bent with two bends, and the bark is rough, just like an old man who has exhausted his energy. He looks very vicissitudes and is of little use. I patted the tree with my hand, and my voice was muffled. Everyone said that the heart of the tree was already empty.

So people have been talking about the hollowness of this pagoda tree, but there has been no conclusion; Even the staff of the township forestry workstation are at a loss, and they can't tell you why. Everyone knows that the tree was planted by Master Jiu.

Although Master Jiu has been dead for many years, everyone who is old knows it. During the production team, Jiuye was a forest ranger. In fact, Jiuye was both a forest ranger and a tree planter.

In a few years, Master Jiu not only took good care of the forest, but also planted trees in the open space of the team. Master Jiu is single and has no relatives.

everyone in the village hates him. He was afraid of cutting off some branches for the fire. When Master Jiu caught him, he first scolded him, and then sued the team leader for a penalty. Behind the scenes, people have called Master Jiu "25" a lot. A man in his sixties is about to be buried, and he doesn't know how to build a back road for himself. No one will bury him when he dies! Ninth Master really died, in the Woods he cared for.

Mr. Jiu said that he wouldn't go anywhere after a hundred years, so he would settle in this forest and take good care of the forest he planted himself! People have satisfied the wish of the ninth master, but they have not kept the system set by the ninth master. Without the ninth master, people will feel at ease when they destroy trees. Later, contracting was carried out, and all the forests were distributed to households and became private. When people destroyed trees, they became more confident.

The ninth master died of a sudden illness. At this time, some people said that it was fortunate that the ninth master died early. If we put it aside now, it would be miserable for the ninth master to watch him grieve! Now, the forest guarded by Master Jiu, together with the trees he planted, has long been cut down. Building houses, cutting down; No money to spend, cut down.

people don't care about the results of the seven-seven-twenty-one in order to fill their inflated desires. Nine ye's grave is less covered with trees, * * * in a piece of weeds and rocks, after the washing of mountains and rivers and the trampling of cattle and sheep, it is really insignificant.

No one added soil. It's pitiful that Ninth Master is lying alone in the ground. A Sophora japonica tree in the village is the only tree left by Master Jiu.

because I grew up in the mountains, it was not clear who owned it at first. Some people argued, but people in the village said that if Jiuye was alive, the tree would belong to Jiuye. Now Jiuye is dead and there are no descendants, the tree will belong to everyone.

since then, no one has been fighting for this tree. Not long ago, the village head wanted to build a building, and invited several Feng Shui gentlemen. They all said that there was a treasure trove of Feng Shui under the pagoda tree in the village.

as soon as the news spread that the village chief wanted to cut down Sophora japonica to build a building, the hearts of the villagers sank, and without Sophora japonica, they ate and enjoyed the cool. Rest, shelter from the rain, where are you going? When the only big tree in the village is about to fall down, the villagers will feel lost, as if life has changed suddenly, which is unacceptable. "That's everyone's tree. How can the village chief just cut it?" "alas! Who told people to be village heads! " "The village head has the right to slash and slash?" "Of course!" The villagers know that they can't interfere with the village head, but they are unwilling.

later, yes. 2. Write a composition according to the three key words of mysterious old tree < P > My childhood is like a honey pot, which is fun and sad.

I have forgotten many things about my childhood, but the only thing I can't forget is the old tree in front of my door. He is so old that no one knows how old he is. But despite this, the old tree laughs at the spring breeze every year, and he always pulls out many green new branches under the call of Spring Girl < P >. At this time of the year, grandma will smile and call

me, who is playing crazy with my partner, to stand under the old tree and compare my height with him. At this time,

grandma always squints with a smile, looks at it carefully, smiles happily, and opens her old mouth like an innocent child

, revealing wrinkles all over her face. "You grow so slowly, much shorter than the

tree!" Grandma always tells me that.

Old trees will grow tender Toona sinensis buds after greedily sucking the drizzle in early spring. It is very expensive to buy it in the market, and our whole family likes to eat it, so we treat those Toona sinensis buds as

treasures. These Chinese toon buds are also a gift from the old tree. Grandma always

will say, "Son, the old tree will sprout again. Don't feel sorry for me. You are growing up. Eat more!" " At this time, I always tell a lie: "Granny, I don't like to eat Toona sinensis buds. Please eat!" " After that, I ran out. I was afraid I couldn't control my gluttony. Grandma

always smiles and shakes her head and eats the fragrant buds.

Grandma is ill. After all, she is over 8. I saw that the sweat of the bean was slipping down her face

. Everyone discussed grandma's illness behind my back ... I couldn't help feeling sad from my heart.

Seeing that the lonely old house figure has been extended indefinitely without grandma's company.

I picked up the old tree, and tears rolled down. I am a girl with strong appearance and fear inside.

I'm afraid of losing my kind grandmother. I couldn't bear it any longer in front of the old tree, and I couldn't hide it.

My tears were vented.

Spring is coming again, but grandma is not here. The old tree in front of the door has pulled out new branches and sprouted tender buds. 3. Write a composition with the window as the key word

Window

Outside the window, there are pure blue sky and white clouds dancing in the wind. The considerate sunshine reflected on the window, and there was a jumping movie. So, I walked along the memory channel ...

It was a summer day in primary school, and my good friend Cui Mingyue and I were cleaning the glass in the classroom. In the hot summer, the scorching sun scorched us, and the sweat almost soaked our clothes, but the dirty glass seemed to be against us sincerely, and there were some flowers in every way. We are both busy, and neither of us is in the mood to pay attention to the other person. Suddenly, a black handprint appeared on my window. I couldn't help but fly into a rage and shouted angrily, "Cui-Ming-Yue-! What are you doing! " When she heard the sound, she turned around and stared at my window in amazement. She faltered and said, "I …". . I don't know ... "After listening to her words, I was even more angry and shouted at her," Who are you? Damn it! " She blushed too, waving a rag in her hands and shouting at me, "It's me, it's me. Why are you so angry?" "I ..." I was so angry that I couldn't speak for a while, so we were deadlocked for a while, and we said "Hum!" . We just ignore each other. Still mopping the glass with a stuffy head.

The sun gradually crossed the sky, and the sunset was beautiful. I gently heaved a sigh of relief, and this silence was somewhat unaccustomed. "Hi! It would have been nice to wipe the glass a few times more, but I made it like this ... "Faint, I had some regrets in my heart, so I hesitated to reach out and prepare for Cui Mingyue to wipe the glass, hoping to make up with her. At this moment, fate played a joke on us, and she also reached out to clean the glass for me. When our eyes met in mid-air, we couldn't help smiling, and the ice melted away immediately.

Friendship, you are a beam of sunshine in the window where I grew up, but you have pieced together a paradise. You are a flower in my heart garden, but it has become the most beautiful ornament in my memory.

Outside the window, it's still Ming Che. The considerate sunshine is reflected on the window, and there is a jumping movie. 4. how to write a composition of more than 4 words on the topic of "being ill"

The first article: She is ill. "Doctor, doctor, come on, come on. What's wrong with our" mother "? Is she sick? The doctor came in a hurry and saw her mother's broken face, helpless figure and hoarse voice.

The doctor shook his head and sighed. Say to us: "Hey, your mother is very ill and needs immediate rescue.".

Hearing this, the human hurriedly asked, "What happened to our mother? When will she get better? " The doctor said, "Your mother's illness doesn't need my treatment, just you humans. Her illness is because you have destroyed her and torn her beautiful coat; Her bright eyes are now out of sight; The original cool voice hoarse; The original smile has now turned into a bitter gourd face ... so you have to protect your mother and save her. "

after hearing this, people all took action.

protect your mother. Clean up all the rubbish in the river, and they publicize it everywhere.

in this way, mom's illness will get better soon. Mother's face is full of smiles, bright eyes can also see, and she has put on a beautiful coat.

When I saw this situation, my mother smiled, the doctor smiled, I smiled, and all the people in the world laughed. Mother Earth is still so beautiful, so kind and so selfless.

Let the wind and sand stop with joyful dance steps, let the birds dance, and let us protect our mother. Keep her from getting sick.

article 2: she was ill, and it was still raining in the sky. People outside the window walked quickly along the wet street with umbrellas. Today, my mother and I decided to visit my sister who has been ill for several days.

When we arrived at the hospital, my mother and I saw at a glance that the naughty boy-sister was sitting in the ward facing the stairs, sitting on the bed with her sister and reading her book "1, Why". The poor sister's head was wrapped in gauze, and an infusion needle was inserted in her head, transfusing liquid.

It's a good thing that my sister hasn't lost her temper today. She's sick. 4 words (5 articles). She's sick. 4 words (5 articles). By the way, I heard from my mother that yesterday, my sister was beaten by her aunt because she was disobedient after returning home from transfusion.

alas, my aunt hit my sister and it hurts in my heart. Later, we were going to my aunt's shop not far from the hospital. Just before we were halfway there, we saw my aunt running over in a hurry. Only after asking did we know that my sister in the hospital was in a situation again. She had to go to the hospital quickly, so please let us look after her shop.

when I arrived at the store, many customers suddenly came to buy things. We didn't know the price of some things. My mother called my aunt, and her aunt rushed back, sold things, arranged everything in the store, and immediately ran back to the hospital to pick up my sister who was going home. Alas, poor inherit the wind.

Here, I sincerely wish my sister not to get sick again ... Part III: She is ill. This morning, I just got up and found my sister's face was red and hot to the touch. I was in a hurry and immediately said to my uncle, "Uncle, Ayan's head is so hot, what should I do?" My uncle said, "What's the matter? Did you catch a cold yesterday?" My uncle was anxious to go to work, so he asked my grandfather to help take my sister to the hospital.

Grandpa took his sister to the hospital immediately. I'll follow.

when I arrived at the hospital, the doctor took my temperature and said it was over 4 degrees. It turned out that I had a high fever. Grandpa was anxious and said to the doctor, "doctor, do you think my niece's illness is important?" What should we do? Do you want to hang salt water? " The doctor said, "Of course, salt water should be hung.

4 degrees, not hanging salt water, will burn your brain. She is ill. 4 words (5 articles) Topic composition She is ill. After a while, the doctor pumped the medicine into the syringe and stuck it on her sister's arm. My sister burst into tears and said, "It hurts!" "There is no way, only