280-word essay on digging wild vegetablesz丶丶丶丶bin曵f

Today is Sunday and the sun is shining. My father and I went to dig wild vegetables in the vegetable patch in front of my house. My father and I took a shovel and a basket to the vegetable field to dig wild vegetables. There are many vegetables in the vegetable field, including celery, cabbage, Chinese cabbage... Dad digs wild vegetables like a rooster pecking at insects. I also tried to find a few, but none of them were good, so I asked Dad for help. Dad first told me what wild vegetables looked like, what kind of wild vegetables I could eat and what I couldn’t eat. He also gave me a leaf of wild vegetables to look at. I really found one tree, and not long after I found another one. My speed gradually became faster, and after a while we dug a whole basket. We went home happily, and my father quickly made a delicious snack using wild vegetables, called "Shepherd's Purse Fried Rice Cake". I was very happy eating the wild vegetables I dug. Digging wild vegetables can not only exercise your body, but also taste the fruits you harvest. Pan Yuche April 2011

Comments from famous teachers: First of all, the teacher told the little author a piece of knowledge, that is, celery grows by the water, not in vegetable fields. This needs to be distinguished. Common sense mistakes. Guilty. However, this article is still well written. The level of the article is clear and organized. The description of dad's action when picking wild vegetables is very detailed. This metaphor is also very appropriate, showing the readers that dad is a master of picking vegetables. Secondly, the interaction between the young author and his father is also handled well, but the language of the entire article is too straightforward. The teacher hopes that the young author can accumulate more good words and sentences in his daily reading, so that the article will be more outstanding. come on.