I write 450 words with zebra crossing.

One accidental afternoon, I rode home from my grandmother's house. On this seemingly insignificant and short road, I met something that I will never forget.

He is so simple and naive. He stood on the edge of the zebra crossing and never saw him move even when the green light was on. No one wants to stay in the sun for a while in this hot summer. However, he did not move, and the sun shone on him overhead. Sweat slipped from his forehead, across his cheeks, across his chin, and then fell to the ground.

I wonder why he didn't leave. In such hot weather, I'm afraid even the stones want to find a cool place to cool off. But he was motionless, like a scarecrow. At this time, the green light came on again, but he still didn't move. Other passers-by looked at him like beggars, with a trace of regret and pity in their eyes. I rode my bike forward and looked at it carefully. Oh, so he is blind. He has a red and white cane in his hand and a pair of black-rimmed glasses on his high nose. Seeing him like this, I really want to help him, but my body is so reluctant to leave the car seat.

At this time, a little girl in a white dress came over, looked at the blind uncle, looked at the traffic lights opposite, and said, "Hello, uncle, have you ever thought of crossing the road?" The blind uncle was surprised and said, "OK, thank you, little friend." The little girl said, "Uncle, there is not much time now. Please cool down under the public umbrella for a while and wait until the next green light. " The blind uncle said, "OK, little friend." The little girl's silvery voice, like a beautiful and moving song, reached my ears and rippled in my heart. ...

"Uncle, the light is green. Let's go. " The little girl took the hand of the blind uncle and walked step by step from one side of the road to the other. I looked at them and I was moved by an unknown emotion.

Wang Juncheng, Grade One, Xinhua Middle School, Weifang, Shandong Province, Kuiwen District

Comments: The topic is well written, and I wrote my own experience on the road. In the first half of the article, "I'm afraid even the stones want to find a cool place to cool off" is humorous and smooth, paving the way for the appearance of the blind and the little girl behind. However, it should be noted that the zebra crossing full of love should focus on how this zebra crossing is full of love and what kind of love it is. The first half of the article seems to be full of ink, and the details of the little girl's help to her uncle are insufficient, which seems a bit top-heavy.

You can add more ink to the back part and carefully carve the details.