I want to write three couplets for my parents on their graves. Please give me some advice.

The wind is light and the clouds are clear, life is clear

The fragrance of plum blossoms floats all over the world

The flying swallows in the Xiangjiang River live and sleep together

The stars and sand fall and weep blood Crying

No, no, I don’t know if your father is still alive, so I don’t dare to speak well.

Reply 1: The light wind means high wind, while the clear cloud means bright and bright, which also implies that you are in "aerospace". What you wrote about "aiming to serve the country" is really too vulgar, and I don't agree with it.

Reply 2: The fragrance of plums is a metaphor that "green plums" come from the "scent of books", and they follow the master, and the fragrance floats in the wind, "traveling south and north".

Reply 3: The second couplet of the second couplet has a "dilute" feeling, which is indeed the case. Change "weeping blood and crying" to "returning and returning" for reference. "The second couplet can mean that the old man spends his old age peacefully in Shaxing City" is slightly inappropriate, because it is a tombstone memorial couplet, not an epitaph title, nor any other article.