How to write interesting weather forecast text messages

Be more humanistic and use some allusions, idioms and proverbs. For example: Tai'an will be cloudy from tonight to tomorrow with thundershowers. The south wind is level 3-4, and the gusts are level 7-8 during thunderstorms in thunderstorm areas, accompanied by strong convective weather such as short-term heavy precipitation, thunderstorm winds, and hail. The temperature is 23-33 degrees. As the saying goes, "June is like a baby's face." The weather is changeable and muggy, so please take precautions. Take an umbrella with you when you go out and close the doors and windows.

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