Introduction and meaning of tide watching written by Zhou Mi
"Tide Observation"
Pre-class introduction:
Qiantang River is the largest river in Zhejiang Province, with a total length of more than 400 kilometers, flowing through Hangzhou, in Hangzhou Bay enters the sea. Since the mouth of the river is trumpet-shaped, the tide pours in backward, forming the Qiantang Tide, a natural wonder that is called "unparalleled in the world" by predecessors. Tide watching in Qiantang has also become a grand event in ancient and modern times. This article writes about the scene of the tide in the Qiantang River during the Southern Song Dynasty and the grand occasion of tide watching.
Learning objectives:
1. Memorize the new words in the text, and master the meaning and usage of key content words and function words.
2. Read the text thoroughly and be able to translate it into modern texts based on the annotations.
3. Master the writing content of the article and appreciate the writing characteristics of the article.
4. Understand literary knowledge such as the author and writing background.
Knowledge summary:
1. Memorize the following pronunciations in red letters
Thunder (tíng) � � � 取款 (zhāi)
艨 (méng)艟 (chōng) Rulu (lǚ) flat ground suddenly (shū) Er Yige (gě) without a trace
burned by fire (fén) Good at swimming (qiú) Backward and upward (sù) Luoqi (qǐ)
Whale wave (jīng) Li (jiù) Lease (lìn) No room for space (jiān)
2. Ancient and modern synonyms
3. One word with multiple meanings
4. Inflected parts of speech
Qiong: adjectives are used as verbs, higher than. Example: Eat and drink everything you want.
Article: Nouns are used as verbs to create literary style. Example: All have hair and tattoos.
View: The verb is used as a noun to refer to a scene. Example: The greatness of the world.
Ride: The verb is used as a noun, referring to a horse. Example: A person who rides a horse, carries a flag, javelin, and dances a knife on the water.
Mark: noun used as verb, to establish, to lift. Example: A person who rides a horse, carries a flag, javelin, and dances a knife on the water.
5. Special sentence patterns
Inverted sentence: Haunted in the waves of whales: that is, "waves of whales", which is the attributive postposition, translated as "in the height of ten thousand feet" "It appears and disappears in the huge waves."
Passive sentence: Only the "enemy ship" was burned by fire: "by..." means passive, which is translated as "only the hypothetical enemy warship was burned by fire".
Judgment sentence: The tide in Zhejiang is the majesty of the world: "...ye" expresses judgment, which is translated as "The tide of Qiantang River is the majesty of the world."
6. About the author
Zhou Mi (1232-1298), courtesy name Gongjin, nicknamed Cao Chuang, also known as Sishui Qianfu, Biàn Yanglaoren and Hua Buzhu Shanren, a writer of the Southern Song Dynasty. His ancestral home is Jinan. When the Jin soldiers invaded, he lived in Wuxing (now Huzhou, Zhejiang). During the Deyou period of Song Dynasty, he was the magistrate of Yiwu County (now part of Zhejiang). After entering the Yuan Dynasty, he was not an official. He is the author of "Qidong Wild Words", "Old Wulin Stories", "Guixin Miscellaneous Knowledge", "Zhiyatang Yao Miscellaneous Notes", etc. He is good at calligraphy, painting, music, and poetry. His poems pay attention to rhythm, the writing is exquisite, and the style is elegant and graceful. Together with Wu Wenying, he is called the "Second Window", and the collection of poems is called "Pinzhou Fishing Dilute Score" and "Cao Chuang Ci".
"Old Martial Arts" is the author's recollection of the past in Lin'an (now Hangzhou), the capital of the Southern Song Dynasty, after the fall of the Song Dynasty. This book is written in detail and vividly, expressing the author's feelings for his motherland.
Overall perception:
1. Article structure
The author of this article uses very concise writing to write about the majestic scene of the tide at the Qiantang River Estuary and the naval exercises. The touching scenes, the superb swimming skills of Wuzhong athletes and the grand occasion of watching the tide.
Full text ***Four natural paragraphs
The first paragraph describes the majesty of the tide.
The second paragraph describes the touching scene of the naval exercise.
The third paragraph describes the heroic appearance of the trend-setters.
The fourth paragraph describes the grand occasion of watching the tide.
2. Structural illustration
Text analysis:
The tide of Zhejiang is the great sight of the world. From the beginning to the 18th day, it was the most prosperous. Fang Qiyuan went out from the sea gate, just like a silver thread; as it got closer, the snowy mountains of Yucheng came from the sky, loud as thunder, shocking and surging, swallowing the sky and fertile sun, and it was extremely majestic. This is what Yang Chengzhai's poem says: "Silver from the sea is Guo, and jade from the river is tied around the waist."
Translation: The tide of the Qiantang River is a majestic sight in the world. It is most popular from the 16th to the 18th day of the eighth lunar month. When the tide rises from the Zhejiang estuary, (viewed from a distance), it almost looks like a silver-white line; as the tide gets closer and closer, it surges up from the sky like a jade city snow ridge, and the sound is as loud as thunder. It shook the heaven and earth, stirred up and gushed out, engulfed the universe, and washed away the sun. It was extremely majestic and majestic. Yang Wanli's poem "The sea surges with silver for Guo, and the river with jade ties around the waist" describes this scene.
Analysis: The first paragraph describes the majesty of the tide. The opening sentence is "The tide of Zhejiang is the great sight of the world", which is an early start. Then it explains the time when the tide is at its strongest, and then gives a positive description of the tide from the four aspects of shape, color, sound and momentum, describing the majesty and splendor of the tide from far to near.
The description is also made using metaphors and exaggerations, with a few short sentences such as "like silver thread", "yucheng snow ridge", "like thunder" and "swallowing the sky and fertile sun", to describe the shape, color and momentum of the waves rushing from afar to the front. vividly expressed. Finally, Yang Wanli's poem is used to vividly summarize the above article, echoing the first sentence.
Every year, Jing Yin goes out from Zhejiang Pavilion to teach the naval troops. Hundreds of swans line up on both sides of the bank. They then gallop into five formations, and some ride on horseback, carry flags, javelins, and dance knives on the water. Like walking on flat ground. Suddenly, yellow smoke is everywhere, the characters are barely visible, the water explodes and the sound is like a collapsing mountain. When the smoke disappears and the waves calm down, there is no trace of the ship. Only the "enemy ship" is burned by the fire and disappears with the waves.
Translation: Every year (in the eighth month of the lunar calendar), the governor of Lin'an Prefecture in Kyoto comes to Zhejiang Tingxiao to review the navy. Hundreds of warships line up on both sides of the bank; then they practice five formations, sometimes speeding and sometimes rising. , suddenly divided, suddenly combined, all kinds of changes, and at the same time there were people riding horses, dancing flags, raising guns, and brandishing knives on the water, as if they were stepping on flat ground. Suddenly, yellow smoke was everywhere, and people and things were no longer visible. (Only heard) was the roar of water exploding, which sounded like a mountain collapsing. (When) the smoke dissipated, the water surface became calm again, and there was no trace of a ship. Only the "enemy ship" that was destroyed by fire was left, drifting away with the waves.
Appreciation: The second paragraph describes the wonderful scene of the naval exercise. The beginning is still a summary, explaining that every year Jingyin will coach the navy when the tide is at its strongest. Then it describes the wonderful scenes of the naval exercise: there are many ships participating in the exercise, the formations are varied during the exercise, the sailors are skilled in combat, the battles during the exercise are fierce and powerful, and they retreat quickly after the exercise. This short paragraph of text vividly describes a complex exercise activity, and the combination of the still scene of "smoke and waves" is not only a way of writing that contrasts movement and stillness, but also provides a unique water performance for the following text. Paved the way.
Hundreds of people from Wu'er who were good at swimming, all with tattoos on their hair and holding ten large colorful flags, scrambled to be the first to be brave, and went up to meet them. They appeared in and out of the waves of whales, changing their bodies and flags. The tail does not get wet slightly to show off its ability.
Translation: Hundreds of Wuzhong athletes who are good at swimming, with their hair disheveled and embroidered all over their bodies, holding ten large colorful flags, scrambled against the current to catch the tide. (They The figure) was floating in the turbulent waves thousands of feet high, tumbling and changing various postures, but the tail of the flag was not wet at all. They used this (performance) to show their (superior) skills.
Brief analysis: The third paragraph describes the heroic appearance of the trendy athletes. At this time, the tide had arrived, and many Wuzhong athletes performed wonderfully in the stormy waves.
For more than ten miles up and down the river stem, there are pearls and greenery overflowing. There are traffic jams on the road, and all kinds of food and drink are available at the same time. Even if you are watching the curtain, there is no room for it.
Translation: The river bank stretches for more than ten miles, and the eyes are full of gorgeous costumes. Cars and horses block the road. The prices of food and various commodities are several times higher than usual, but renting a viewing shed There are so many people (so many) that even a seat is not available.
Brief analysis: The fourth paragraph describes the large number of people watching the tide. The crowds of people watching the tides are so dense, which shows how attractive the river tides and water performances are. Therefore, writing about the prosperity of tide watching is to illustrate the prosperity of the river tides and the excitement of the water performances from the side.
Focus on exploration:
1. What is so clever about the structure of this article?
Clearly: the whole text focuses on the word "guan". First "watch" the tide, then "watch" the navy drill, then "watch" the swimming competition, and finally "watch" the crowd watching the tide. The clues are clear and the layers are well organized. The four scenes are also like four "tides": the first paragraph describes the tide itself, the second paragraph describes the boats like the tide, the third paragraph describes the flags like the tide, and the fourth paragraph describes the people like the tide. All kinds of "tide" come together, magnificent and colorful, which is refreshing and refreshing. Together they form a "tide" - the tide of the Qiantang River. Although only the first paragraph directly writes about the tide, the following paragraphs are all related to the tide, and the structure is very clever.
2. What are the characteristics of this article in terms of language arts?
Clearly: On the one hand, the language of this article is extremely concise. The Qiantang tide is majestic and spectacular, with numerous water performances, numerous scenes, and a large number of tide watchers. However, in this short article, the author writes in an orderly manner with clear priorities. On the one hand, this is due to the author's exquisite structure, which uses the tide as a clue, combines descriptions of scenes and events, and combines frontal descriptions with side highlights. On the other hand, because the author cherishes ink as much as gold, his language is very concise. Secondly, the description in this article is very vivid. Not only does it use metaphors, exaggeration and other descriptive techniques, but even simple line drawings are very vivid.
Reading:
1. Appreciation of the genre
Seven wonders? Watching the tide
Mao Zedong
Thousands of miles of rolling waves Come, snowflakes fly to Diaoyutai.
The crowds of people praised the vast lineup, and the iron horses calmly killed the enemy.
Translation: The waves from Qiantang, a thousand miles away, are rolling in, and the tide with flying snowflakes is rushing towards Diaoyutai. The crowds of people praised Dajiang's wave lineup for being so magnificent, like armored war horses calmly killing the enemy and returning victoriously.
Brief analysis: Mao Zedong's "Seven Wonders? Observing the Tide", the whole poem is as breathtaking as a rainbow, which not only makes people feel the momentum of the Qiantang tide, but also shows the poet's broad mind, which spans the sky and the earth. momentum. The inner world merges with the outer world, reaching the state of unity between man and nature.
The Qiantang tide in the poem has a magnificent lineup, rushing back and forth, with the potential of "gold and iron horses, swallowing thousands of miles like a tiger".
Only a great man like Mao Zedong could achieve such a majestic poem.
2. Famous poems about Qiantang tide
Fan Zhongyan: Thunder gathers on the sea surface, and waterfalls cross the middle of the river.
Du Fu: The sky and the earth are gloomy and suddenly different colors, and the waves are covered with colored glaze.
Wang Zaijin's "Wangjiangtai": The sea is vast and the sky is like thunder, and the tide of Qiantang comes from the sky.
Li Kuo's "Reminiscences of Qiantang": The Mid-Autumn Moon with thousands of miles of color, the sound of hundreds of thousands of troops rising in the middle of the night.
Liu Yuxi's "Lang Tao Sha": In August, the waves roared to the ground, and the head was several feet high and touched the mountain. After a while, he entered the sea gate, rolling up piles of sand like snowdrifts.
Meng Haoran's "Going to the Zhangting Pavilion in Qiantang with Yan to Watch the Tide": Hearing thunder and tremors while hundreds of miles away, he stopped playing the strings for a while. The company rode out from the mansion and waited on the river to watch the tide. The sun shines brightly in the autumn sky, and the floating sky widens. The stormy waves come like snow, and a mountain is cold.
Li Bai's "Hengjiang Ci": The sea god passed by the east and the evil wind returned, and the waves hit the stone wall of Tianmen and opened it. How is it like this in August in Zhejiang? The waves are like snow coming from the mountains.
Xu Ning's "Viewing the Waves of Zhejiang": Zhejiang has a long and green sea in the west, and the waves capsize day and night. In Guoli, Qiantang, I will look at the trendy people until I grow old.
Su Shi's "Viewing the Waves of Zhejiang": The tides on August 18th are unparalleled in the world. Kunpeng's water strikes three thousand miles away, and his team trains to drive hundreds of thousands of men. The red flag and the green cover illuminate each other, and the black sand and white waves swallow each other up. It is difficult to meet in ancient times in life, and we will get this feeling, this scene, and both. May you add candles after hearing this, and the white robe outside the door will look like a standing swan.
3. Introduction to the Qiantang River
The Qiantang River has been known as the "wonder of the world" since ancient times. The 18th day of the eighth lunar month is the annual tide watching day. The best place It is Yanguan Town in Haining City. It was called Zhejiang, Jianjiang, Luosha River and Zhijiang River in ancient times. It is a famous river in the southeast of the motherland and the largest river in Zhejiang Province. The Qiantang River has a total length of 605 kilometers and a drainage area of 48,887 square kilometers. It flows below the gate of Hangzhou City and flows into Hangzhou Bay. The mouth of the river is trumpet-shaped, and the tide pours in, forming the famous "Qiantang Tide". The main stream of Qiantang River is within the territory of Hangzhou City. Above Jiande Meicheng, it is generally called Xin'an River. From Meicheng below, it is called Tongjiang, Fuchun River and Qiantang River respectively. Both sides of the Qiantang River contain extremely rich tourism resources and are the most important tourism routes in the province. The Qiantang River originates from Qingzhidaijian in the Huangshan region of southern Anhui Province, flows through 14 counties and cities, and flows into Hangzhou Bay. Because the Tong River and Fuchun River sections have excellent scenery, they are collectively called Fuchun River. The section of the river mouth below Wenjiayan is called the Qiantang River. This section of the waterway has a winding and graceful appearance, shaped like the character "Zhi" written backwards. West Lake happens to be a point on the reverse "Zhi", so it is called Zhijiang River. Now the Qiantang River or the river is called Quanjiang. The mouth of the Qiantang River is in the shape of a huge trumpet. The distance between the north and south banks of Hangzhou Bay is about 100 kilometers. It shrinks to 20 kilometers at the mouth of the Qiantang River and only 2.5 kilometers up to Yanguan, Haining. There is a huge sand ridge in the longitudinal section of the river bed, which rises upward from Zhapu with a slope of 1.5/10000, reaches its peak near Cangqian, and then extends to Wenyan with an inverted slope of 0.6/10000. This section of the river is affected by the narrowness of the river and the uplift of the river bed. The tidal waves break and surge, forming the world's wonder "Qiantang River Tide". The main branches and tributaries of the Qiantang River have a long history of development. There are many famous mountains, beautiful waters, strange caves and historic sites along both sides of the river. In this vast Qianjiang River Basin, it is known as the "golden tourist belt" due to its rich specialties, outstanding people, local customs and interesting things.
4. Allusions to the Great Tide of the Qiantang River
It turns out that when the tide of the Qiantang River came, it was like the tides of other rivers in other places. It had neither a crest nor a sound.
One year, a giant came to the Qiantang River. This giant was so tall that he could cross from one side of the river to the other in one step. He lived on Shushan Mountain in Xiaoshan County, setting fire to burn salt. People didn't know his name, but because he lived by the Qiantang River, they called him King Qian. King Qian was very strong. He used his iron pole to pick up big rocks and place them on the river bank. After a while, mountains were piled up. One day, he went to pick up the salt that he had burned for three years and three months on Shushan Mountain. However, the salt was only enough for him to carry one end, so he tied a large stone to the other end of the pole, put it on his shoulder to try, picked it up, and crossed to the north bank of the river.
At this time, the weather was hot. King Qian was a little tired because he had just had lunch, so he put down his burden to rest. Unexpectedly, he dozed off. It happened that the Dragon King of the East China Sea came out to patrol the river at this time, and the tide rose. It kept rising until it reached the shore, slowly melting the salt in King Qian's head. The Dragon King of the East China Sea heard it and wondered where the salty smell came from in the water. It was getting saltier and saltier, and it was getting saltier and saltier. He couldn't stand it anymore and ran away. He didn't expect to escape into the ocean and made the water in the ocean salty. King Qian, after a nap, opened his eyes and saw that the stone on one end of the pole was still placed on the Kip Stone (now known as Kip Stone Mountain), but the salt on the other end was gone!
King Qian looked around but couldn't find any salt. When he lowered his head, he smelled the salty smell in the river. He thought: Oh, no wonder the salt is gone. It was stolen by the Dragon King of the East China Sea. So he lifted up his pole and hit the sea water. One shoulder pole beat all the fish, big and small, to death; two shoulder poles beat them until the bottom of the river turned over; three shoulder poles beat them until the Dragon King of the East China Sea came out of the water to beg for his life.
The Dragon King of the East China Sea asked King Qian tremblingly why he lost his temper. King Qian said: "Where did you steal my salt?" Only then did the Dragon King of the East China Sea understand the reason why the sea water became salty. He quickly apologized and told him one by one how he patrolled the river and how he accidentally melted King Qian's salt, making the water in the ocean salty.
King Qian was so angry that he really wanted to lift up the iron pole and smash the Dragon King of the East China Sea to pieces. The Dragon King of the East China Sea was so panicked that he knelt down and begged for mercy, and promised to use salt from the sea water to compensate King Qian; he would scream when the tide came up in the future so that King Qian would not fall asleep and hear him. King Qian heard that these two conditions were not bad, so he spared the Dragon King of the East China Sea, put his pole towards the mouth of Hangzhou Bay, and said: "The tide will start from here in the future!" The Dragon King of the East China Sea agreed repeatedly, and King Qian was so talented. He left happily.
From that time on, as soon as the tide entered Hangzhou Bay, it stretched out its neck and screamed "Hua Hua Hua". When it reached the place where King Qian sat, he stretched his neck and screamed loudly. ring. This place is today's Haining. This is how the world-famous "Qianjiang Tide" came about.
August and a half is the best time to watch tides. In fact, the Qiantang River's tidal changes are regular. The size of the tide is restricted by many factors such as astronomy, geography, river bed elevation, runoff size, the direction of the main trough (channel), and climate. In fact, the first half and first half of every month in the lunar calendar are the best times to watch tides, and you don’t have to choose the half of August. However, the autumn tide is larger than the spring tide because the rainfall in the Qiantang River Basin is mainly concentrated during the plum rain and typhoon seasons from mid-late March to mid-September; there is relatively little rainfall from October to February of the following year.
5. The pen rolls over the river and the ink flows over the river tide - analysis of "Guan Tide" (Wu Gongzheng)
The Qiantang River tide is a great scenic spot. The ancients called it "the most spectacular thing in the world". The spring tide of Qiantang River is closely related to its unique natural conditions. First, because the river mouth is trumpet-shaped, with a width of more than a hundred miles and a narrowness of only ten miles, the huge tide is restrained by the narrow river channel, which will naturally form a magnificent tidal wave. Secondly, there is a huge blocking sand sill at the mouth of the river. When the tide comes in and encounters such a huge resistance, it will of course rise to the sky; the front wave is restrained, and the back wave comes up again. If the waves catch up with the waves, and the waves pile up, the tide will roar and overwhelm the mountains. Coming like a roar. Most poets and poets in ancient my country used the Qiantang tide as the description object. For example, Liu Yong's famous poem "Looking at the Sea Tide" in the Song Dynasty wrote: "The southeast is beautiful, the three Wu cities, Qiantang has been prosperous since ancient times." "The clouds and trees surround the embankment and the sand, and the roaring waves roll in." Frost and snow, the sky is boundless." Zhou Mi's "Guan Tide" vividly describes this magnificent and majestic scene in the form of prose. The full text focuses on the "tide" and bases on the "viewing". It uses lens photography to describe the appearance of the tide, the shape of military exercises, the momentum of the tide, and the prosperity of the tide.
"The tide of Zhejiang is the great sight of the world." Point out the title and reveal the object of description. The writing and writing are also full of appreciation. "It was most prosperous from the beginning to the eighteenth day." The writing is condensed to show that it is written in a concentrated manner. Continuing the flow of writing, enter into direct description. The author's observations are subtle, but his writing is vivid, and he writes gradually from far to near. "Fang Qiyuan goes out to the sea gate, just like a silver thread." Where the water and the sky meet, like a silver thread, it touches the eyes. Using the "silver line" as a metaphor shows the author's far-sightedness. Only with a high footing and a far-sighted line of sight can he clearly see the scene when the tide rises. Using the "silver thread" as a metaphor, it also describes the situation before the tide comes, which is very realistic in life. If you don't go there and see it in person, you will definitely not be able to write it so realistically. "It's getting closer", because the tide is rolling in, the description suddenly jumps from a long shot to a close-up. "Jade City comes from the snowy ridge from the sky, loud as thunder, shocking and surging, swallowing the sky and fertile sun, and extremely majestic." The writing force rises suddenly, like steep mountains, and the text and ink are splashed horizontally and freely. The author pours all his energy into the scroll, and the sound, color, shape and momentum are all excellent. It has its color: "Yucheng Snow Ridge", you can see its "white", the metaphor is novel, and it is linked to the word "silver" above, which is a metaphor for the city and the ridge, and you can also see its shape; it has its sound: "The sound is like thunder", Comparing it to an image shows its majesty and shocking power; it has its momentum: "Coming from the sky" and "Shocking and surging", as if pressed down from the sky, soaring and curling, spraying jade and splashing beads, very dynamic, It's a wonder. "Swallowing the Sky and the Fertile Sun" means to bathe the flaming red sun, to swallow the vast sky, and to do it in an exaggerated way, how much power does one need to write! This is a perfect description of the power of the snowy waves and the magnificence of the style. The author uses his eyes and ears together, and everything he sees and hears is contained in the article; the author's pen is full of ink, whirling and swaying, using momentum to write the dynamic, opening and closing, the writing style is like a complicated pipe and a rapid performance, but also like The powerful crossbow fires continuously. Reading it makes people feel excited and inspired. Then, the author concludes with Yang Chengzhai's (Yang Wanli) poem "The sea surges with silver for Guo, and Jiang Hengyu ties the waist." Quoting verses is not to boast, but to prove to others, and to enhance the verisimilitude and authenticity of the author's writing.
Then the article transitions to another level, writing about the form of "teaching the water army" military exercises. "Hundreds of cockroaches are arranged on both sides of the strait", one level; "Now they are rushing into five formations", one level. The two floors are connected to each other, leading to the front and back. With the appearance of "separating the two sides of the Taiwan Strait", it highlights the trend of "rushing apart and reuniting". The four words "Gangteng Diverg", the text is highly concise and the general content is very extensive. A little is better than a lot, vividly describing the scene of the warship maneuver: sometimes flying through the waves, sometimes leaping over the waves, sometimes separating the two compartments. , and sometimes merged and sailed side by side. Although it is not explicitly stated that he is a master of steering and boating, the vivid description of the scene conveys this meaning beyond the sentence. The word "bin" makes the meaning of the text more advanced. "Riding on a horse, wielding a flag, spearing, and wielding a knife on the water", write down the specific scene of the drill on the boat. The verbs such as "ride", "nong", "biao" and "wu" should be spoken in an easy-to-understand manner, so that they can be imagined as if they are soaring and flying. "As if walking on flat ground" describes his calm and leisurely demeanor, his vigorous and steady ups and downs, and the cleverness of his methods can be imagined.
However, the author has something unspoken hidden on the outside of the paper, which is that the navy drill is not on the river where the waves are flat and the waves are calm, but on the "shocking and surging" scene that shakes the sky and the earth. "Above the waves of the river. If we relate to the above, we will deeply understand the author's profound intention in describing this here, highlighting the navy athletes with the undercurrent and contrast of the rising tide. After that, the article enters into the description of the actual combat exercises of the formation. "Swift" means it comes quickly, and it also makes the scene change appear to be quick. The author describes this scene in both voice and form. "Yellow smoke is rising everywhere, and the figures are barely visible." The invisible figures are used to show the thickness of the yellow smoke; the "sound is like a collapsing mountain" is used to describe the power of the "water explosion". The smoke was billowing and the explosions were deafening. It was a moving scene that was shocking. When people's eyes are attracted by the passive picture, when people's hearts are attracted by the passive scene, the scene quickly turns into a still scene. "The smoke disappears and the waves become silent, and there is no trace of the ship. Only the 'enemy ship' is the fire." "Burned, gone with the waves" shows the combat effect of actual combat exercises. "There is no trace of a boat" corresponds to "the characters are slightly invisible", which means that the warship has already sailed away when the smoke covered the river. The soul-stirring naval combat exercise ends here, and the article turns to the interesting description of the tide-making scene.
The main sentences in the third section are read with commas, and they are like notes. Verbs such as "draft", "hold", "struggle", "drum", "greet", "haunt" and "leave" are repeated one after another, which is dazzling. "Tattoos with hair" depicts the appearance of the tide; "Going up to meet the tide" depicts the bravery of the tide; "Whale Waves" depicts the vigor of the tide, capturing the characteristic and expressive mood to create a vivid portrayal. The huge waves set up a dangerous environment for the trend-setters; hair and tattoos are a wonderful touch of folk customs. "Colored flags" and "tattoos" complement each other and add interest to the article. An ancient folk trendy custom painting is vivid, magnificent and pleasing to the eye. The words "suying" and "haunting" written above only describe the "courage" of the trend-setters "encouraging courage". The contrast below "jumping up and changing, but the tail of the flag is not slightly wet" highlights the "strong" ability of the trend-setters. . It can be seen that holding colorful flags to make waves is not for decoration, but for "praising energy", using a specific object to highlight some effects and scenes that cannot be directly displayed. This is the main function of "colorful flags". "The tail of the flag is not slightly wet" is a light stroke in the sentence, but it really has the power to carry the tripod. This is the most sublime praise and admiration for the skills of the trendsetters.
After describing the tide, boats, and people on the river passionately, the camera panned to the shore to watch the grand scene of "tide watchers". "For more than ten miles up and down the river stem, there are pearls and green flowers everywhere, and there are traffic jams on the road." The author specifically pointed out "more than ten miles" and meandered away, using the length of the road to show the prosperity of tide watching; if you are only close by, you will not be able to see its prosperity. The eyes are full of jewels and the carriages and horses are on the road, which is the embodiment of the grand occasion. At this point in the writing, the author still feels that it is not enough to fully express his intention, so he will add some side effects. Inside the booth, the floor was spotless and no one could get in. The author splashed ink on the food booths, but his luck lies in the crowds. It is really a sea of people! In the middle of the river and on the bank, the river tide and the crowd are all connected. It is not the purpose of the author to write about the prosperity of tide watching, but to reflect the beauty of the river tide; otherwise, if the river tide is not beautiful, how can it attract so many viewers? This is really an exquisite pen and ink that expresses interest here and returns to another place.
This prose is concise and concise. The author is very skillful in laying out the article, using his thoughts and ideas, and choosing words and sentences.
Depth and simplicity depend on each other. The author observes the trend deeply and carefully, with his eyes and ears. From far to near, every detail is not leaked; from sound to color, from the center of the river to the bank, everything is collected in the chest. When the author observes, he pays close attention to every detail, but when he writes, he neglects major areas and exaggerates minor areas. It is not about being inclusive, but about selecting and selecting, and grasping the most distinctive and typical people, things, and things to write about. In this way, the interdependence between depth and simplicity is achieved: without depth, there will be no simplicity, and without simplicity, there will be no depth. Detailing can discover the characteristics and essence of things, and simplicity can successfully highlight the essence and characteristics. For example, when writing about the scene of the incoming tide in Qiantang, it can be written with great momentum, lifelikeness, scenes, and grandeur in just one sentence. This is a reproduction and artistic record of the unique scene of the Qiantang River. The whole text is carefully crafted, with no slanting branches and vines. The style is fresh and timeless. Three or two sentences can depict the image, and two or three words can convey the spirit. The sentence "jumping up and changing" makes the athletes look like each other; the sentence "going up to meet the challenge" makes the athletes jump on the paper with their courageous attitude. The article begins with the title, goes straight to the main point, and ends abruptly. Every word and word in the whole article has the function of carving out the image and depicting the scene. Nothing is empty and nothing is wasted. The four pictures each have different moods and form a continuous scroll. The description of "watching the tide on the river bank" is a separate paragraph, which seems to be a piece of idle prose and has nothing to do with the shape of the objects in the tide. It is not commensurate with the conciseness of the full text. However, after careful study, I feel that the author's careful use of ink is to enhance the description. Indispensable writing for social effects.
Landscape and customs blend together. Flying jade sprays silver, and the sound of the Qiantang River tide shakes the sky is a majestic and strange landscape painting; wearing tattoos, holding colorful flags, and surfing the tide is a genre painting full of emotion. The fusion of landscape paintings and genre paintings enriches readers' enjoyment. The scenery is enhanced by customs, and customs are enhanced by scenery. The inclusion of custom paintings enhances the national characteristics of the article and makes it have an authentic Chinese style and national traditional color.
Contrast and contrast. The surging white waves reflect the calmness of the navy's drills; the rolling waves reflect the superb skills of the tide-wagers; and the grand spectacle of tide watching reflects the majesty of the river tide. Through contrast, the things the author wants to describe are more eye-catching.
Then there is the contrast. The movement of the drill, which sounds like the collapse of a cliff, contrasts with the tranquility of the river when the smoke is released; the menacing scene of the whale waves, and the changing postures of the leaping and changing figures contrast with the ability of the flag tail to remain wet. Through comparison, the people and events the author wants to portray are more prominent.
The two methods of contrast and contrast are not completely separated, but are intertwined. Sometimes contrast appears in this aspect, and sometimes contrast appears in that aspect. Everything depends on the needs of expression. It is widely used and varied. Showing the enchanting variety of the author's pen and ink techniques!