A composition about going to spring outing (Dapeng Ancient Town)
The spring breeze blew gently, brushing my cheek. The spring breeze slowly blew into my heart, making me feel relaxed and happy.
Today is the spring outing that I have been looking forward to for a long time. , we came to the beautiful Daqing Valley. Although the weather today was not very good, my mood was not affected by the weather at all. I felt an unbearable joy.
As soon as I walked into the Daqing Valley, Clear valley, thick green appeared in front of my eyes. The birds on the big trees chirped rhythmically, and the new leaves followed the rhythm, slowly swaying on "Mother" with the breeze, and the frogs When I saw it, I would scream "quack, quack" from time to time. Everything on the earth seemed to be integrated into this natural little concert. They cooperated tacitly without making any mistakes. After hearing the music of nature, I I couldn't help but sway!
I sat together with my classmates, and we all told jokes and ate together, but I was immersed in the beautiful scenery, with greenery everywhere. , the mountains, grass, pavilions, even the water of the creek seem to be green, and the air is still filled with the green breath of nature. I really want to live in nature, breathing fresh air every day, life will become more Beautiful.
The water in the creek is crystal clear, and occasionally you can see a small group of tadpoles passing by. The water in the creek is very ice-cold, and I think it will be cool in summer for people to take a bath in the small lake downstream. I filled some water with my hands. I wanted to taste whether the water was sweet, so I took out a paper towel and shook it in the water. The fruit was indeed sweet, but I was afraid of bacteria, so I didn’t dare to drink more.
Nature is so charming. Today, the students had a great time in Daqing Valley and tasted the beauty of nature.
How to write a spring outing composition
"The grass grows Orioles are flying in the February sky, and the willows are blowing on the banks. "It's spring time again. How happy it is to be intoxicated by the scenery of lakes and mountains!" But when they think about the essays that teachers ask to write after every spring outing, many students frown and don’t know how to write them well.
Spring outing composition is a travel diary, which is a composition written after a trip to describe the process and experience of the trip. You can use the spring scenery you saw during the spring outing as the main content, supplemented by the emotions generated while admiring the scenery; you can also record the unforgettable things that happened during the spring outing... When writing, you must first write in a certain order, generally In other words, the order of tours can be used as the order of travel notes. Since tours are generally carried out in time or route order, travel notes are also often arranged in time or route order. Sometimes, the tour observes the same thing from different angles, or stands at a certain scenic spot and looks around the scenery. At this time, it is more appropriate to order by space. For example, in the lesson "Remembering the Shuanglong Cave in Jinhua", the author's route to visit the Shuanglong Cave is: on the road - outer cave - pore - inner cave - exiting the cave. The article is written step by step according to the tour route, showing a clear context and orderly order.
Secondly, describe the sceneries in a focused way. Writing travel notes is to record the author's travels, so that readers can appreciate the love for famous mountains and rivers, praise for historical sites, and admiration for revolutionary holy places... Therefore, it is necessary to capture the shots that most arouse tourists' interest, and focus on them. When describing several places, do not describe everything you saw and heard, and use even force. Instead, be detailed and brief, and write down the places that impressed you most through careful observation. For example, in the article "Remembering the Double Dragon Cave of Jinhua", the author focuses on the feeling of entering the inner cave from the outer cave through the hole, especially the experience of the inner cave. Through vivid description, it makes people feel immersed in the scene. .
We must also grasp the characteristics of the scenery. When observing scenery, we should pay attention to the unique characteristics of the scenery. Especially the unique scenery should be carefully observed and compared in terms of color, shape, etc. He is good at capturing its unique characteristics, and appropriately uses metaphors, personification, exaggeration, parallelism and other rhetorical techniques to vividly and meticulously describe the unique style of the scenery. For example, in the lesson "Guilin Landscapes", the author is boating on the blue waves and captures the characteristics of the Lijiang River: quiet, clear, and green, and the characteristics of Guilin Mountains are strange, beautiful, and dangerous. As we read the article, we seem to appreciate the characteristics of Guilin's landscapes. Beautiful and unique scenery.
The composition must "blend the scene." This means that the description of the scene must be closely combined with the lyricism. A beautiful scenic spot will definitely bring pleasant enjoyment to visitors. Writing out this beautiful feeling can enhance the appeal of your composition, making readers yearn for the scenic spots you write about after reading your article. If you achieve this effect, your composition will definitely be brilliant.