Modify sick sentences. 1. We should constantly improve our learning methods and increase our learning efficiency.

1. We should constantly improve our learning methods and increase our learning efficiency. ("Increase" and "learning efficiency" are not properly matched, and should be changed to: We should constantly improve our learning methods and enhance our learning efficiency. )

2. There are many historical sites in Xi 'an, including the Wild Goose Pagoda, the Bell Tower, the TV Tower and so on. (The TV Tower does not belong to the scope of historical sites, and should be changed to: There are many historical sites in Xi 'an, including the Wild Goose Pagoda, the Bell Tower and so on. )

3. Students of the Meteorological Group record and listen to the weather forecast of the day every morning. (The time logic of "recording and listening" is wrong. Listening comes first and recording comes last. It should be changed to: students of meteorological team listen to and record the weather forecast of the day every morning. )

4. Because he is a literary lover, he is a sports lover. He is not only a literary lover, but also a sports lover. )

5. Through the teacher's education, we have improved our understanding. The teacher's education has improved our understanding. )

6. Today, my class subscribed to several magazines, such as Children's Literature, Youth Literature and Art, Story Club and Modern Youth Daily. Today, my class subscribed to several magazines, such as Children's Literature, Youth Literature and Art, and Story Club. )

7. On June 1st, 1, children in Jiangcheng watched the air force skydiving performance. (The logical error between "visit" and the subject and object should be participation, that is, on June 1st, ten thousand children in Jiangcheng participated in the air force skydiving performance. )

Extended information:

Modification methods of ill sentences:

1. Supplement method: it is mostly used to modify ill sentences with incomplete components.

For example, "I won the first place in this competition" (missing subject) was changed to "I won the first place in this competition."

after listening to the teacher, (I) got a great education.

everyone should (set up) lofty ideals.

We should carry out patriotism (education) among teenagers. (complement object)

2. The deletion method is generally used to modify repetitive and redundant sentences, redundant components, improper collocation and improper classification.

for example, "I conclude that it may rain tomorrow." I'm sure it will rain tomorrow.

3. Changing methods are mostly used to modify ill sentences such as improper collocation, improper words and unclear reference.

For example, "His grades have increased significantly." Change: "His grades have improved obviously."

whoever (violates) the discipline will be criticized.

His writing level has improved obviously.

There seems to be inexhaustible energy in him.

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