It’s so cold today that I don’t even dare to come out and do any activities in the classroom. Edit the wrong sentences.
It is so cold today that we are all hiding in the classroom and dare not go out for activities. Modify the sentence to read: It is really cold today and we are all hiding in the classroom and are afraid to go out for activities.
Although "it's really cold today" in the original sentence can express the feeling of cold weather, it lacks specific description and is not vivid enough. Therefore, we can change it to It's really cold today, which describes the weather conditions more accurately and also increases the vividness of the sentence.
The people in the original sentence are all afraid to come out for activities in the classroom. There is a problem of unclear subject. I don’t know who is afraid to come out for activities. Therefore, we can change it to "We are all hiding in the classroom and afraid to go out for activities. This expresses the subject and action more clearly and clearly, and also increases the image of the sentence."
We modified the original sentence to say that the weather is really cold today, and we are all hiding in the classroom and afraid to go out for activities. This modification not only expresses the feeling of cold weather more accurately and vividly, but also expresses the subject and action clearly and clearly, avoiding ambiguity and misunderstanding.
Methods to modify defective sentences:
1. Addition and subtraction method: This method mainly corrects language defects by adding or deleting words, sentences and other components. For example, the original sentence "He likes watching movies and TV series" can be changed to "He likes watching movies and TV series very much".
Strengthen the subject's emotional attitude by adding the adverb of degree "very". Or you can change the original sentence to say he likes watching movies, but doesn't like watching TV series, and express the different preferences of the subject by adding the negative word "no".
2. Sequencing method: This method mainly corrects language defects by adjusting the order of words, sentences and other components. For example, the original sentence "He is not only good at studies, but also good at sports" can be changed to "He is good at sports, and he is also good at studies."
Highlight the overall quality of the subject by adjusting the order of clauses. Or you can change the original sentence to "He studies well and is also great at sports" and adjusts the order of words to enhance the compactness and fluency of the sentence.
3. Word substitution method: This method mainly corrects language defects by replacing words. For example, the original sentence "His smile is very warm, giving people a friendly feeling" can be changed to "His smile is very kind, giving people a feeling of closeness".
More accurately express the subject's personality by replacing the adjective warm with kind. Or you can change the original sentence to "His smile is friendly", giving people a feeling of trust, and replace the adjective "kind" with "friendly" to more accurately express the subject's interpersonal skills.